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This is a great video showcasing the STAR writing model.

Reference: LawnnyBling Productions. (2014, August 18). STAR revision model [Video file]. Retrieved from https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mwz3rce7qSk

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STAR is an acronym intended to help students remember the four basic ways to revise their work.

Reference: Farris, P. & Werderich, D. (2011). Language arts: Process, product, and assessment. Long Grove, IL: Waveland Press

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“Writing is the most complex for children to learn and the most difficult for teachers to teach” (Farris & Werderich, 2011, p. 141).

"Making writing "rich instead of right" should be the goal of teachers" (Farris & Werderich, 2011, p. 145).

1. SHORT & EASY for students to remember

2. Motivation & Encouragement & Recognition (which kid doesn't want to be a STAR student?!)

3. Promote development in writing

Reference: Farris, P. & Werderich, D. (2011). Language arts: Process, product, and assessment. Long Grove, IL: Waveland Press

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Reference: Glasbergen, R. (2000).  How do you expect me to write with this? [Image]. Retrieved from https://www.glasbergen.com/gallery-search/?tag=writing