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You did great but I would say maybe dont speak of the page just try in summarise it. Try and vary your voice and add eye contact. Your weebly was nice and the facts were in the right places, you had good ideas.

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Great Job Lucy! On your call to action page I couldn’t read the graph and was quite confused. Also on your home page you were reading off the introduction, maybe just summarise it. Overall this is an amazing website. Good job! :)

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Nice! I like your website!

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amazing

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Lucy, Make your infographic larger. It gets lost amongst everything. Also you have found statistics from countries in Europe. Can you find some images from Australia?

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I think you have done great, and put a lot effort into your project. The only thing I would change is maybe don't say 'like' on the website. For example on the home page you said 'they need like food'. I think you should change it to 'they need food'.

Overall great job on your project. You should be proud. :)

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hi Lucy, I’m Angelina from 5N and i just read about your article about helping homeless people. i think thats a really great topic and you did such a gud job! <3

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hi Lucy, I’m Angelina from 5N and i just read about your article about helping homeless people. i think thats a really great topic and you did such a gud job! <3

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Questions:

1. Why was this topic so important to you?
2. What is something that you have learnt about the topic that interested you?
3. What research skills did you learn & find the most beneficial?
4. What do you want to learn more about? And why?
5. What were some of the most challenging moments and how did you overcome them.
6. Has anyone of your family members or friends from other schools experienced being homeless before?

Feedback:

Overall, i think you’ve chosen a great topic and have clearly explained the point in your article. But, one thing i would like to say is maybe next time use a bit less of repetition. Ofc, maybe you didn’t realise when you were publishing it, but its good to check & edit it after you’ve done writing it. Great job!

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Hi Lucy,
Overall this is a strong topic, however just one tweek you can do this if you want. For your home page instead of putting full stop after your name, you could put a comma like My name is Lucy Cui, I'm 12 years old.....

Overall, well done.
I'm proud of you :)

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Lucy, please check the following:

- Check your punctuation on your home page.

make sure that all titles have a capital letter for the first letter.

You need to do more research. Your information is just what you know. Get some facts and include those.

Your bibliography needs to formatted using the correct way like you were shown in Library.

Where's your infographic?