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The dark stains seemed to consume me and soon It was too hard to look at. I turned the picture around and in blood ink was written “Ellen may not be who she seems”. The dusty creaky attic seemed to to hold a safe haven for me compared to the below. Where my grandma lingered. Maybe I shouldn’t have found this. I should’ve never offered to clean. After all, maybe sometimes ignorance is bliss.

It portrays mystery and suspense as well as horror which is very nail biting and amazing and I want to know what happens next.

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I found an old photo in my grandmother’s attic, and found she’d not been the person I thought I knew. The person I stared at belonged to one of a monster. 

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I found an old photo in my grandmother’s attic, and found she’d not been the person I thought I knew. The person I stared at belonged to one of a monster. 

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I like this line because it created suspense in the story. It draws the reader into the story, and makes you want to read it.

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¨the cool breeze on their skin was a relaxing sensation the two of them longed all week for"
I like this line because it sets the tone of how daniel jr awaited this moment.

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"The decorations, the walls, the water, the ambiance, and the all encompassing image, it gave off a vibe unlike any other home."

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"The decorations, the walls, the water, the ambiance, and the all encompassing image, it gave off a vibe unlike any other home."

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This gives off a tone of being like an elegant house. Very unique and when it says "...it gave off a vibe unlike any other home."

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He continued on, not as much to see the room as much as it was to see how a house could be full of more surprises. He was captivated and curious.

This was my favorite line because it described how the stairs and other areas made him proud just by walking up and seeing a total blur but it never gave him bad vibes when he walked into his mansion house it at least reminded him of something he accomplished or did in the past that he would need to continue doing.

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Daniel finally found a moment to lay down finally being able to rest after a week of nonstop school work. Then a bug slowly crawled up to his forehead, ”Hello Daniel Jr.”  he whispered to is pet bug. Laying in the field Daniel and Daniel Jr finally enjoyed some long awaited alone time. The cool breeze on their skin was a relaxing sensation the two of them longed all week for.

Highlighted because this is the main tone of our story. It's supposed to be calm. It's repetitive so it can focus on the calm part.

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As I look into the sky I see a dark cloud covering the sky. There is a storm off in the distance. We pack up the area and head back home. I guess some secrets are never meant to be said out loud.

I like how they leave us on a cliff hanger and the imagery is really good.

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"he grew weaker and slowly lost his sense of humanity. " i like this line because it uses a lot of visual imagery.

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"he grew weaker and slowly lost his sense of humanity. " i like this line because it uses a lot of visual imagery.

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What the remaining towns people couldn’t see was the sinkholes that were obscured under the thick layers of fog, the same cavernous pits that vanished when the mist rolled away.

We chose it because it is a good example of the eerie, possessive nature of the curse, by using words like obscured and cavernous.
thank you :)

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"New experiences made her realize the world wasn’t just a maze of concrete, but a vast world that was never the exact same in every different place they traveled to." I chose this sentence because of the simile and the word choice of like vast world where it helps the reader feel the tone of the story.

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¨He lets it stay there because this place is nothing but a memory now.¨
This was my favorite line because it left the story at a spot where it could go on and left the reader to imagine. I also like the tone because it was clear.

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¨As we get closer we see a blue rusty boat, old canoes, and greenish-blue river water. ¨

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¨As we get closer we see a blue rusty boat, old canoes, and greenish-blue river water. ¨

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Q - "The decorations, the walls, the water, the ambiance, and the all encompassing image, it gave off a vibe unlike any other home." I like this line because it implements imagery and adds on to the given image.

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Q - "The decorations, the walls, the water, the ambiance, and the all encompassing image, it gave off a vibe unlike any other home." I like this line because it implements imagery and adds on to the given image.

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"When he first walked through the doors, it was hard to tell what was off, but by this point, nothing felt normal- nothing felt real."

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The looming darkness felt like the secret in real life.

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"He closes his eyes and reminiscences on everything and every memory as a bug crawls on his face. " i liked this line because it uses tone and relates back to the picture.

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"He closes his eyes and reminiscences on everything and every memory as a bug crawls on his face. " i liked this line because it uses tone and relates back to the picture.

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¨Thomas took one look at the steps and knew he was dead. He looked behind him, befuddled¨

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¨Thomas took one look at the steps and knew he was dead. He looked behind him, befuddled¨

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Daniel finally found a moment to lay down finally being able to rest after a week of nonstop school work. Then a bug slowly crawled up to his forehead, ”Hello daniel jr.”  he whispered to is pet bug. Laying in the field Daniel and Daniel Jr finally enjoyed some long awaited alone time. The cool breeze on their skin was a relaxing sensation the two of them longed all week for.     

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Daniel finally found a moment to lay down finally being able to rest after a week of nonstop school work. Then a bug slowly crawled up to his forehead, ”Hello daniel jr.”  he whispered to is pet bug. Laying in the field Daniel and Daniel Jr finally enjoyed some long awaited alone time. The cool breeze on their skin was a relaxing sensation the two of them longed all week for.     

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"The looming darkness felt like the secret in real life."

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As the sun fell, I knew it was time to speak up. The looming darkness felt like the secret in real life. 

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As the sun fell, I knew it was time to speak up. The looming darkness felt like the secret in real life. 