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School grades are a necessary component to motivate students and ensure that teachers are meeting the required standards.

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School grades are a necessary component to motivate students and ensure that teachers are meeting the required standards.

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Students need teachers' grades to motivate them to work hard.

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In order for teachers to follow the school' s curriculum properly, they need to develop grades for each student.

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American workers should take a vacation in order to maintain their physical health, mental stability, and family relationships.
T1: In order to have a successful business or company, one needs employees with good physical health.
T2: Mental stability is another important factor to ensure active and motivated employees.
T3: Not only is physical health and mental stability important for successful employees, but having employees with healthy family relationships is also important.

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It is important for them to have a stable body condition.

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They need time to recover muscles because of the labor work (this one is too similar to the first one)

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In my view, young adults moving out of their parents’ house is beneficial for society because children can become less dependent on their parents, and parents may acquire more freedom in their later

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Working and testing too much are two important causes of stress.

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Testing is everyone’s adventure in their lives. (how is this related to stress

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We need to work for us to get money and living in this society. (again how is this related to stress?)

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This negative attitude TOWARDS young people living together with family is very harmful for at least for two reasons: 1) it shows a sense of disrespect towards young people's human rights and 2) damages the fabric of relationships in our society.(Sam)

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This negative attitude TOWARDS young people living together with family is very harmful for at least for two reasons: 1) it shows a sense of disrespect towards young people's human rights and 2) damages the fabric of relationships in our society.(Sam)

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Young people have the freedom to live with their parents (given their parents' consent ),  disdaining this life style is a form of discrimination and violates young people's  human rights.
The criticizing  of young people living together with their parents, damages the family relationships in our society.

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Getting out of the disappointed mood of lost love needs a rational attitude and enough time. (Sam)

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Getting out of the disappointed mood of lost love needs a rational attitude and enough time. (Sam)

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Facing the ex-girlfriend rationally can ensure good relations in the future.

Time generally can cure all broken hearts.

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Topic sentence #7
Seeking help from peers helps many people adapt to American life when they experience cultural conflict. (Where is the "roadmap?"

Topic sentence #8
Parents should give their children allowance according to their children's performance.(Where is the "roadmap?"

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Remember the ideal thesis statement has a "roadmap" that lets the reader know what your next paragraphs are going to be about. Now, please add your topic sentences.

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Remember the ideal thesis statement has a "roadmap" that lets the reader know what your next paragraphs are going to be about. Now, please add your topic sentences.

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Thesis
It's better to have a smaller family these days because parents must handle the pressure of financial responsibilities, educating their children and having enough energy day to day.

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1) The disadvantageous of bigger families is that they will pay more money than the smaller families which have to worry about how to rise two or more children.

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2) People think that educating one child is hard enough, but it is even more difficult to educate a big family.

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3) Raising a child takes a lot of energy.

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10. thesis
It is impossible? meanlingless to stop the experimentation on animals.

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1. It is hard to find other test animals for most experimentations

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I support the attitude of young people staying home with their parents after finishing their degree because these young people will bring both financial and emotional support to their parents.

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2. No one can take care of everything. Stop experimentation is not effective to help the animal. (not sure what you mean here)

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3. There are not only negative effects for the animal. (re there some benefits as well? Is that what you mean?)

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Social interaction in a different culture helps us to learn more, develop social networks, and keeps us in a positive mental state. (This is a thesis with a "roadmap.")

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Young people living with their parents can not only save money for the young people, but also benefit their lonely parents; furthermore, it may reduce the cost of elder care as the parents age. 

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Young people living with their parents can not only save money for the young people, but also benefit their lonely parents; furthermore, it may reduce the cost of elder care as the parents age. 

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Young people need not pay for house and other conditions (amenities) for living.

Older parents can avoid the lonely life in an empty nest.

Taking care of one's older parents at home instead of using a nursing home facility is better financially for all those involved.

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One of the most important people in my life I met while living on a small island in the Western Pacific Ocean. Her interesting humor, dedicated friendship, and love of food has bound us together for more than 20 years.

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One of the most important people in my life I met while living on a small island in the Western Pacific Ocean. Her interesting humor, dedicated friendship, and love of food has bound us together for more than 20 years.

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Each person has their own sense of what is funny, and my friend, Mellanie's humor has brought me so much laughter over the years.

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Even though we live thousands of miles a part, I still feel so close to her because she always remembers important events in my life.

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Not only is she remarkable for her funny antics and deep friendship, but she and I also share a love of international food.

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Although athletics are very enjoyable, I believe more money should be spent on academics & the arts because it would benefit more students in the long run and would help maintain top faculty at the university.

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Not all students are interested in sports, yet all students have to take academic courses and arts  to prepare for their professionals lives; so it's logical that universities should focus on maintaining and improving their academic status.

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Faculty will wear green and white on game days, but in reality, most faculty would prefer to see their departments flourish over seeing a Big 10 title.