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After finalizing my poster design I took the feedback I had gained into further consideration and thought about what else I could have done to make my final Poster design as effective as possible. while asking for feedback I was asked a question of could you have used the QR code more effectively, this got me thinking and Yes I could have, I came up with the Idea that I could have used the QR as the full stop at the end of Title Dead End, this would have been an effective idea as would have made the piece look more professional and the QR code would have been more included into the design, rather than just an after though, if had more time and the time and resources I would have made this alteration, as I feel it would have made my product more effect and overall more interesting to interact with.

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First Draft of Ancillary Task Poster-  After gaining and receiving feedback on my poster design, I collected a lot of constructive feedback of which allowed me to add more conventional elements of a poster to my design such as written under the title and by adding in my own QR code of which I created myself. 

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First Draft of Ancillary Task Poster-  After gaining and receiving feedback on my poster design, I collected a lot of constructive feedback of which allowed me to add more conventional elements of a poster to my design such as written under the title and by adding in my own QR code of which I created myself. 

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Final Poster Design - To gain feedback and alterations for my final poster design I set up a focus group of which consisted of three of my target audience. I found their criticism constructive and took into account as much as possible which resulted in my adding in more written and information at the bottom of the poster such as the director and actors. Also as result of the feedback I added in a production company and 'Coming soon' at the bottom of the poster.  I feel as though my poster design is eye catching and makes people want to see the short film, which is the effect I wanted to create, this is supported by my recording of my feedback focus group. 

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Final Poster Design - To gain feedback and alterations for my final poster design I set up a focus group of which consisted of three of my target audience. I found their criticism constructive and took into account as much as possible which resulted in my adding in more written and information at the bottom of the poster such as the director and actors. Also as result of the feedback I added in a production company and 'Coming soon' at the bottom of the poster.  I feel as though my poster design is eye catching and makes people want to see the short film, which is the effect I wanted to create, this is supported by my recording of my feedback focus group. 

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Final Draft of magazine spread - This is  my final Magazine design of which I have taken into account any feedback given and made alterations to make my design as audience facing as possible.  Overall my design developed dramatically, changing compositions and images used within, which I feel was an effective decisions which was influenced by audience feedback. Allowing me to create the finsihed product shown below. 

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Final Draft of magazine spread - This is  my final Magazine design of which I have taken into account any feedback given and made alterations to make my design as audience facing as possible.  Overall my design developed dramatically, changing compositions and images used within, which I feel was an effective decisions which was influenced by audience feedback. Allowing me to create the finsihed product shown below. 

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Here is a screen shot from editing - This shows how Myself and Mollie have used the constructive feedback from our Media Teacher to our advantage, cutting both the shots shown below, to make a more fast passed edit.

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Here is a screen shot from editing - This shows how Myself and Mollie have used the constructive feedback from our Media Teacher to our advantage, cutting both the shots shown below, to make a more fast passed edit.

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This screen shot from editing our short film, shows how we have added in effects and have added in additional sound effects to enhance  the piece. Also due to feedback we cut down the shot of Amy walking over to Josh in the corridor, so that Amy comes into shot sooner, here we cut a lot off of the beginning of the shot so now Amy is seen to walk into shot almost straight away.

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This screen shot from editing our short film, shows how we have added in effects and have added in additional sound effects to enhance  the piece. Also due to feedback we cut down the shot of Amy walking over to Josh in the corridor, so that Amy comes into shot sooner, here we cut a lot off of the beginning of the shot so now Amy is seen to walk into shot almost straight away.

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Here are links to post that I have collected and gained audience feedback for my project: 

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Here are links to post that I have collected and gained audience feedback for my project: 

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Post 37a: Short Film - Second Draft + Feedback

Post 37: Short Film - First Draft + Feedback

Post 36: Feedback on Magazine Article

Post 29: Poster Feedback

Post 27: Poster Development

Post 17: Script Feedback from Professional Script Writter

Post 12: Script - First Draft and Feedback

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Below is a mind map I have created, exploring evaluation 3 - audience feedback. 

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Below is a mind map I have created, exploring evaluation 3 - audience feedback. 