# data[].attributes.body
My writing got better by not ending my senteces with things that dont make sense to the story. I also feel like I added more to the stories I make and make them have a lot of detail.

# data[].attributes.body
With my first story I started off the story with have you ever wanted to know about Perseus, and my last I started off the story with   One summer day Erik Wanted to go to the museum to see real life dinosaurs,

With the conclusion of the first story I ended it with   as you can see Perseusis is brave, tricky, and serious, and with the conclusion of my last story I ended with   when Erik woke up he heard the sound of his moms voice yelling " Your late for school".

I'm changing.

# data[].attributes.body
Before I used to make choppy sentences, short or no  paragraphs, little to no figurative language or vivid.... anything

Now I  make long and descriptive paragraphs and less run on sentences and more stories that are easier to read

Overall,  I've improved at a rapid rate and hope to improve further

# data[].attributes.body
At the beginning of the year my story used to be so bad because of my spelling. Now my vivid words and my grammar are actually better than my first story. Now I have a lot of personification and punctuation.

# data[].attributes.body
My writing got way better by slowing down the moment and got my stories to be longer then I ever thought they could be.

# data[].attributes.body
I got a lot better at Inference and my tying.I use to chicken peck. My writing has got in longer and more heather. I am so much better summarizing and dialougue.

# data[].attributes.body
My first story had too many miss spelled words and long sentences.I have got better at punctuation and spelling .

# data[].attributes.body
In my first writing I did not use figurative language, and it was repetitive with words. My most recent writing was more descriptive and I got better at punctuation, and improved my spelling overall with my writing. I think that I have improved a lot in ELA.

# data[].attributes.body
My first writing and my newest are really different. I can tell that in my first writing I did not go back and read because, of that it doesn't make sense. In my new writing I  did go back and read I also added details and more interesting words/events. so I think I improved a lot in ELA.

# data[].attributes.body
At the beginning of the year I was writing like I was a 4th grader, but now I write like a 6th grader and I am better at it. I think I am really good at writing now.

# data[].attributes.body
In my first story, I didn't have good grammer(spelled wrong on purpose) or proper punctuation, but in my last one, I did so good, that I made a 13 page story

# data[].attributes.body
Gotten way better , like how do you think i made Super Frog. And it's not what i did it's what the teacher taught me.

# data[].attributes.body
When I wrote at the start of the year It was really short like two three of one lines on each paragraph and 3 paragraphs for the body and rushed.

# data[].attributes.body
I think that I got better at punctuation and paragraphs. I am happy that I learned new things in my writing

# data[].attributes.body
I have improved on my grammar and punctuation, but at the start of the i had short sloppy sentences and not a lot of paragraphs and now i have improved.

# data[].attributes.body
I noticed that I had choppy sentences. My grammar was bad so was my visualizing in my story was bad. Now I look back and noticed that I have fantastic sentences. My grammar is wonderful. You can also visualize or feel like you are in my story and not get lost in the middle of the story like you did when I first started writing my stories.

# data[].attributes.body
In my first story of the year, my spelling was off, my sentences were dull, and I added way too many verbs and adjectives. My new writing has improved greatly. I now can plot my stories on a story mountain, and they are vivid, but not too many verbs in every sentence. Overall, I have improved in ELA.

# data[].attributes.body
In my first story my words did not make any sense and. Now  I  learned how to improve my spelling and I got better at making my story's longer.

# data[].attributes.body
I learned to use punctuation correctly. My writing was more detailed. Paragraphs became easier through the year.

# data[].attributes.body
At first I wrote almost nothing I wrote only a few pages and now I do pages. another thing is paragraphing through out the year I did not paragraph but on my last paper i did.

# data[].attributes.body
I've got better at not repeating words a ton and other stuff.

# data[].attributes.body
I learned how to improve my spelling.I got better at being more descriptive and vivid in my writing. I also got better at using figurative language.

# data[].attributes.body
I feel like in my first story I didn't have good spelling. In my most recent story I had great spelling. I have improved in ELA.

# data[].attributes.body
I got better with putting inferencing in my stories

# data[].attributes.body
I got better at making my story longer.

# data[].attributes.body
I got better at dialogue and summarizing.

# data[].attributes.attachment_caption
imagery: visually descriptive or figurative language, especially in a literary work.

# data[].attributes.body
I got much better at imagery, shown below is an excerpt from Escape Jupiter Omega: "He could smell the salty bacon, the milky soft scrambled eggs, and the warm, fluffy, syrup covered pancakes."

Edit: visit my far superior Padlet, The K-9 place, at https://padlet.com/williamfortner0/re8zzd7a75ko11ov

# data[].attributes.body
My first piece of writing had  a lot of run-on sentences, and it was really out of context.

# data[].attributes.body
I learned how to improve my spelling, and I also got better at using figurative language. I also learned how to type as fast as shrek can run.

# data[].attributes.body
My first article had a choppy layout and poor vocabulary. My newest article now has a great vocabulary and an amazing flow. My new texts have proper punctuation and vivid words that can help the reader visualize what is going on in the story. When I look back at my old writing, I can see the great progress I have made in ELA.

# data[].attributes.body
I feel like i have improved in spiltting up the paragraphs. My words have been more vivid and more interesting. I have done a better job keeping my readers attention

# data[].attributes.body
I got better grammar and I was doing  bad grammar to make it cringy.

# data[].attributes.body
I have gotten better at using vivid words, commas, and punctuation .

# data[].attributes.body
My punctuation, and my imagery has improved massively. Also my figurative langue

# data[].attributes.body
I think I have gotten better at using vivid words, and grammar. I got better at doing this because I listened to other people's stories when we had our writer's celebration. I had the chance to hear other kids' writing. This helped me with my word choices and grammar.

# data[].attributes.body
I got better at writing more details in my stories and I have gotten better at writing more and adding more dialogue.

# data[].attributes.body
I got better at spelling this year.

# data[].attributes.body
i did better

# data[].attributes.body
At the beginning of the year my writing was short and choppy with little descrpition and mine is now longer and full of adj and adv and figurative language.

# data[].attributes.body
I know how to use different words in sentences instead of repeating sentences.

# data[].attributes.body
I got better at being more descriptive and vivid in my writing. I also learned how to stay on the topic and properly end a story.

# data[].attributes.body
I got better at writing passages and stories

# data[].attributes.body
i'm better at typing

# data[].attributes.headline
i am able to write more neat and descriptive

# data[].attributes.subject
i am able to write more neat and descriptive

# data[].attributes.body
I learned what inferencing is!

# data[].attributes.body
I learned to infer

# data[].attributes.body
I got way better at inferencing and summarizing

# data[].attributes.body
I've been able to write longer things and moe figurative language

# data[].attributes.body
I got better at writing than last year.

# data[].attributes.headline
i am able to add more to my writing and summarize better and inferance

# data[].attributes.subject
i am able to add more to my writing and summarize better and inferance

# data[].attributes.body
I learned to make an inference!

# data[].attributes.body
i can summarize;0

# data[].attributes.body
I got better at summarizing

# data[].attributes.body
i am happy that i got to write more .

# data[].attributes.body
I am able to write more with more details.