# data[].attributes.body
P/S: Dont follow exactly how they are doing since they have different instruction to follow. This is just a general idea

# data[].attributes.body
I think that.....
I feel that.....
I would like to associate this with...
I hope that....
I suggest that....

# data[].attributes.body
I think that.....
I feel that.....
I hope that....
I suggest that....

# data[].attributes.body
I think that.....
I feel that.....
I would like to associate this with...
I hope that....
I suggest that....

# data[].attributes.body
I think that.....
I feel that.....
I would like to associate this with...
I hope that....
I suggest that....

# data[].attributes.body
I think that.....
I feel that.....
I hope that....
I suggest that....

# data[].attributes.body
I think that.....
I feel that.....
I hope that....
I suggest that....

# data[].attributes.body
1.NORALIEYA NATASHA BINTI MOHD NOR AZMAN
(19DAT24F1026)

2. NUR AISHA SAFFIYA BINTI ZAINAL ABIDIN (19DAT24F1041)

3. NUR ALISHA QISTINA BINTI HASNAN (19DAT24F1023)

4. SAHANA A/P GOPINATH
(19DAT24F1038)

# data[].attributes.body
PRIA DARSHINY A/P SATHIYAMOORTHY

19DAT24F1017

JASHVEENI A/P PUSPANATHAN

19DAT24F1035

LINEEYSHAA MAGESWARAN

19DAT24F1008

MANEESHAA A/P VIKNESWARAN

19DAT24F1074

# data[].attributes.body
1.NUR ATHIRAH BATRISYIA BINTI MOHD SUHAIMI (19DAT24F1047)

2.NUR ALEEYA FARZANA BINTI MOHAMMAD HAKIM (19DAT24F1029)

3. FAKHIRA QIASATINA BINTI KHARUL NIZAM (19DAT24F1002)

4.NUR AINA SAFFIYAH BINTI MOHD HASSAN (19DAT24F1050)

# data[].attributes.body
1.nur mellisa maisara binti mohamed ishak ( 19dat24f1005)

2.nur alysa sofia binti md yazid ( 19dat24f1032)

3. alya maisara binti rabu ( 19dat24f1044)

# data[].attributes.body
1. Nur Aida Sakinah binti Muhammad Sukri

Matrix Number : 19DAT24F1065

2. Alia Nazira Binti Md Amri

Matrix Number : 19DAT24F1077

3. Putri Nur Irish Sofyea Binti Bahari

Matrix Number : 19DAT24F1071

4. Rabiatul Adawiyah Binti Mohammad Zamri

Matrix Number : 19DAT24F1080

# data[].attributes.body
1.SITI ZAIDATUL HUSNA BINTI AZIZI (19DAT24F1056)

2.SITI AISYAH BINTI HASRIN (A9DAT24F1084)

3.NUR IZZAH IZZATI BINTI RAIS (19DAT24F1020)

4.NURUL SYAZWANI BINTI OMARBAKI (19DAT24F1083)

# data[].attributes.headline
Woman on Motorcycle Pepper-Sprayed, Robbed & Had Her Motorcycle Stolen By 3 Men in Gombak

# data[].attributes.subject
Woman on Motorcycle Pepper-Sprayed, Robbed & Had Her Motorcycle Stolen By 3 Men in Gombak

# data[].attributes.body
The Gombak District Police released a statement revealing that the victim, a 44-year-old foreign woman working as a maid, was riding her motorcycle alone when the incident occurred.

According to the statement, she was approached by 3 men wearing helmets with dark visors, riding 2 motorcycles. One of the suspects, coming from behind, sprayed her with pepper spray, causing her to fall from her bike. All 3 suspects managed to escape with the victim’s motorcycle and headed towards Jalan Besar Greenwood. The complainant experienced eye irritation but fortunately did not suffer any other injuries.

PDRM is asking the public to come forward with information.

An investigation has been initiated under Section 395 of the Penal Code, which pertains to gang robbery and carries a penalty of up to 20 years in prison, along with mandatory whipping. Anyone who witnessed the incident or has relevant information is encouraged to come forward and assist with the investigation. They can reach Crime Investigation Officer Inspector Nur Syafiqah Binti Saharudin at 011-51656930 or contact the Gombak District Police Headquarters Operations Room at 03-61262222.

# data[].attributes.attachment_link.title
PROPOSAL - 19DAT24F1041- NUR AISHA SAFFIYA BINTI ZAINAL ABIDIN 

# data[].attributes.attachment_link.title
Assignment Proposal 19DAT24F1032 NUR ALYSA SOFIA

# data[].attributes.body
1. MUHAMMAD AMMAR AMSYAR BIN REZAINI (19DAT24F1059)

2. AMIR FITRI BIN MUHAMMAD HEZERY (19DAT24F1011)

3. MUHAMMAD AKMAL BIN MOHD HALIM (19DAT24F1014)

4. DANISH HAIQAL BIN ZAINAL ABIDIN (19DAT24F1053)

# data[].attributes.body
danish punya

# data[].attributes.body
Sahana A/P Gopinath

newscasting assignment proposal 2

1. HEADLINE : “Excessive Phone Use Linked to Declining Grades among the 5 Top Students in Polytechnic Muadzam Shah” What is so concerning about this until you want to broadcast it on TV.

2. This issue is quite subjective any factors can cause it..what is the proof that excessive phones affect the result? news cannot be based on assumption.

# data[].attributes.attachment_link.title
Copy23-Newscasting Assignment Proposal copy copy

# data[].attributes.attachment_link.title
Newcasting Assignment Proposal group 3 (new)

# data[].attributes.body
Pria Darshiny A/P Sathiyamoorthy

19DAT24F1017

# data[].attributes.attachment_link.title
NEWS READING ( Communicative English) ( 2 oct)

# data[].attributes.body
1. when I read your news I try to search from the internet and find your script the same with what is written in this link. You can take the idea but not take the whole script and make it your.. Modify the news and insert your own idea in it.

2. I approve this headline and expect interesting and creative way you present the material/media to deliver the news.

https://www.nst.com.my/news/nation/2024/09/1111807/woman-killed-four-injured-six-vehicle-crash-nilai

# data[].attributes.body
1. Script is too general, your headline indicate "at least one man" as the keyword and I expect your news script contain detail story about the man and how he involves in the accident.

2. I suggest aside of this tragic story of the uprooted tree, you add an even sad story of the victim..maybe he is still young and only recently become a father but the tragedy left the 3month old baby lost his father in this unwanted event...

3. I approve the headline.

# data[].attributes.attachment_link.title
TOPIC  A Tree Falls in Kl City   - AINA SAFFIYAH - BI

# data[].attributes.body
1. I approve of the headline

2. No news script. I would like to see the full news.. what information is highlighted. How serious is the injury?Doc view on the injury?

# data[].attributes.body
1. This headline will leave you a challenge to present the media that originally yours. but im excited to see how you will portray your content.

2. You mention in your storyboard to interview aina..what is her role? why she is selected to be interviewd? where is your script. how do I know whether the script is originally yours and not copied from the internet.

# data[].attributes.attachment_link.title
Copy233-Newscasting Assignment Proposal copy copy copy

# data[].attributes.headline
HEADLINE 1: “26 students including staff at Muadzam Shah Polytechnic have food poisoning”

# data[].attributes.subject
HEADLINE 1: “26 students including staff at Muadzam Shah Polytechnic have food poisoning”

# data[].attributes.body
1. I approve this headline with slight changes “26 students including staff at Muadzam Shah Polytechnic suffered from food poisoning”

2. Relevence: Environment information is newsworthy and relevance for students and citizens that are studying and stay in university, especially Polytechnic Muazdam Shah. This is because they can help raise awareness about environment protection. From this issue students and citizens can learn about waste reduction, recycling and composting a culture of responsibility- What does this has to do with your headline????? copy and paste??

3. Your script is out of context.

# data[].attributes.headline
HEADLINE 2: ‘’PWC Berhad is among The Big 4 Company Leading AI in Upcoming Generations”

# data[].attributes.subject
HEADLINE 2: ‘’PWC Berhad is among The Big 4 Company Leading AI in Upcoming Generations”

# data[].attributes.body
1. I approve the headline with slight change.

2. Visual presentation enable to enlighten me on how you want to carry out your news.

3. Script and Interview questions are ok.

# data[].attributes.headline
HEADLINE 3: Government Provide Free Device for Students To Support Online Learning during Pandemic 

# data[].attributes.subject
HEADLINE 3: Government Provide Free Device for Students To Support Online Learning during Pandemic 

# data[].attributes.body
1. Why Government Provide Free Device for Students To Support Online Learning during Pandemic. This headline is ok but issue about pendamic is no longer recent. News should be something that is newly happened. Please propose new headline.

# data[].attributes.headline
HEADLINE 4: “Girl's Nightmare: Female Student Stalked by Contractor: Safety Fears at Muadzam Shah Polytechnic Dorm”

# data[].attributes.subject
HEADLINE 4: “Girl's Nightmare: Female Student Stalked by Contractor: Safety Fears at Muadzam Shah Polytechnic Dorm”

# data[].attributes.body
1. I approve this topic.

2. Very good storyline, proposal presentation give me a clear overview of how you want to conduct your news.

# data[].attributes.headline
HEADLINE 1: Social media influencers among causes of SPM candidates to skip exams.

# data[].attributes.subject
HEADLINE 1: Social media influencers among causes of SPM candidates to skip exams.

# data[].attributes.body
1. I approve this headline

2. Story board is to general, unable to picturize how are you going to deliver your news.

3. Script still not being fixed as what has been commented in class

# data[].attributes.headline
HEADLINE 2: Police are hunting three men in the case of killing a cat

# data[].attributes.subject
HEADLINE 2: Police are hunting three men in the case of killing a cat

# data[].attributes.body
1. Approve the headline with slight changes : Police hut three teenagers for violent act killing a cat.

2. I don't understand your storyboard. Not portraying clear idea of how you want to present your news.

3. Script is too general does not deliver enough information

# data[].attributes.headline
HEADLINE 3: Scammer uses AI to impersonate Khairul Aming

# data[].attributes.subject
HEADLINE 3: Scammer uses AI to impersonate Khairul Aming

# data[].attributes.body
1. I approve the headline.

2. I don't understand what do you want to display in frame 3? article? Story board seems not clear.

3. Headline mention about khairul aming but in script is totally different story.

# data[].attributes.headline
HEADLINE 1: A TEENAGERS TOOK THEIR OWN LIFE AFTER BEING SUBJECTED TO HARSH
CRITICISM AND BULLYING BY NETIZENS ON SOCIAL MEDIA

# data[].attributes.subject
HEADLINE 1: A TEENAGERS TOOK THEIR OWN LIFE AFTER BEING SUBJECTED TO HARSH
CRITICISM AND BULLYING BY NETIZENS ON SOCIAL MEDIA

# data[].attributes.body
1. I approve the headline with slight changes- A TEENAGERS TOOK HIS/HER THEIR HER OWN LIFE AFTER BEING SUBJECTED TO HARSH CRITICISM AND BULLYING BY NETIZENS ON SOCIAL MEDIA

2. The script is too general..how does the incident happen? who involved? what is the chronology of the case?

# data[].attributes.headline
HEADLINE 2: 402 CHILDREN RESCUED FROM BEING SODOMIZE BY GISB MEMBERS

# data[].attributes.subject
HEADLINE 2: 402 CHILDREN RESCUED FROM BEING SODOMIZE BY GISB MEMBERS

# data[].attributes.body
1. I approve this headline.

2. Please ensure that you have your original work in this news not taken from other sources and make it yours.

3. Good effort to draft your proposal.

# data[].attributes.headline
HEADLINE 3: OVER 300,000 SPM GRADUATES CHOOSE NOT TO
FURTHER THEIR EDUCATION.

# data[].attributes.subject
HEADLINE 3: OVER 300,000 SPM GRADUATES CHOOSE NOT TO
FURTHER THEIR EDUCATION.

# data[].attributes.body
1. I approve this topic the figure made me wonder how many candidates for SPM in a year if those who do not want to study further are up to 300,000.

# data[].attributes.headline
HEADLINE 4: Academic Pressure: Two Students Turn to Psychiatry Amid Anxietyfrom Heavy Workload

# data[].attributes.subject
HEADLINE 4: Academic Pressure: Two Students Turn to Psychiatry Amid Anxietyfrom Heavy Workload

# data[].attributes.body
1. Why do you think this news is worth to be broadcast in TV. What is so hype about it?

2. The heavy workload of what? assignment? part time job? to what extent it becomes too serious is not being mentioned in the script. Issues in MIT about the students is not being reported in detail.

# data[].attributes.headline
HEADLINE: “THE HIDDEN CAUSE: MENTAL STRAIN AND EMOTION TUMOIL BEHIND CHILD ABUSE”

# data[].attributes.subject
HEADLINE: “THE HIDDEN CAUSE: MENTAL STRAIN AND EMOTION TUMOIL BEHIND CHILD ABUSE”

# data[].attributes.body
1. This is article NOT news. Who is the subject that you are reporting? merely an article that talking about mental strain generally in Malaysia. No factual information, chronology of incident.

2. Please propose new headline.

# data[].attributes.body
Headline 1: I dont see any report highlighting the suspect. how old is he? where did it happen? who is the witness? who called the police? how did it distract the public? script is too general.

# data[].attributes.attachment_link.title
Newscasting Assigment Proposal Group 6 (NEW)(1)

# data[].attributes.body
1. I want the whole team come and meet me.

2. Script is out..plus proposal is totally NOT as what have been told to do in class

# data[].attributes.body
1. A student commits vandalism by scratching the wall of the kamsis using spray- Is it worth to highlight this kind of new on TV.. seems like a small issue to be reported to HEP.

2. Please propose new one

# data[].attributes.body
This is NOT a news script. not reporting about any incident. This is just an article: Certainly. Cyberbullying can manifest in various forms, such as harassment through social media posts, mean comments, and even exclusion from online gaming groups. The anonymity of the internet often emboldens individuals to say things they wouldn’t say face-to-face.The impact can be severe. Victims often experience anxiety, depression, and low self-esteem. In some cases, it can even lead to suicidal thoughts.

Both platforms provide a space where anonymity and distance can lead to aggressive behaviors. In gaming, chat functions can be misused for bullying, while social media often amplifies negative messages. It creates an environment where hurtful comments can spread quickly.

Open communication is key. Parents should encourage their children to talk about their online experiences without fear of judgment. Schools can implement educational programs that focus on empathy and digital citizenship, helping students understand the impact of their words.

# data[].attributes.body
Why all members taking the same theme: bullying..please come and meet me.

1. BULLIES AT POLITEKNIK MUADZAM SHAH(The case of bullying that happened at muadzam shah polythecnic involved the shame of students)- this is just a small complaint to HEP not a wort news to be broadcast to the whole malaysian.

# data[].attributes.headline
Headline 2: Malaysia Reports New Local Case of Mpox Virus Clade 2 Variant

# data[].attributes.subject
Headline 2: Malaysia Reports New Local Case of Mpox Virus Clade 2 Variant

# data[].attributes.body
1. I approve the headline

2. Good organization of visual presentation

# data[].attributes.body
1. POLYTECHNIC STUDENT RECIEVES RM35,000 SCHOLARSHIP AFTER WINNING
ADOBE CERTIFIED PROFFESIONAL WORLD CHAMPIONSHIP COMPETITION.

2. The headline said scholarship but the script mention that the money is the winning prize they receive.. which one? winning prize is not a scholarship..scholarship is when you are sponsored by a authority..news is missleading

3. Fix the script..

# data[].attributes.headline
Headline 4: Woman on Motorcycle Pepper-Sprayed, Robbed & Had Her Motorcycle Stolen By 3 Men in Gombak

# data[].attributes.subject
Headline 4: Woman on Motorcycle Pepper-Sprayed, Robbed & Had Her Motorcycle Stolen By 3 Men in Gombak

# data[].attributes.body
1. I approve this headline

2. ensure it is originally a news constructed by you and not 100% taken from other sources

# data[].attributes.headline
HEADLINE 1: 19 year old teenager attempt suicide due to depression at Polytechnic Muadzam Shah

# data[].attributes.subject
HEADLINE 1: 19 year old teenager attempt suicide due to depression at Polytechnic Muadzam Shah

# data[].attributes.body
1. Please insert detail about the suicide attemt. How did it happen? who saw it? condition of the suspect during the suicide attempt? any witness? where did it happen.

# data[].attributes.headline
HEADLINE 2: HEADLINE: “A man who has been arrested on charges of grooming a child under 18 years old”

# data[].attributes.subject
HEADLINE 2: HEADLINE: “A man who has been arrested on charges of grooming a child under 18 years old”

# data[].attributes.body
1. I don't quite get the meaning of grooming there.

2. I don't get the idea even when reading the script.

3. She got groomed like how??? suddenly you jump to the result that she is depressed. what? where? when? how? please insert these wh question in your news report

# data[].attributes.headline
HEADLINE: “VICTIM HAVE TRAUMA AFTER YEARS OF HARRASMENT”

# data[].attributes.subject
HEADLINE: “VICTIM HAVE TRAUMA AFTER YEARS OF HARRASMENT”

# data[].attributes.body
1. I approve the headline. but im quite lost reading your script? who involve? what happened to the suspect? when it happen? how it happen is not being mention.

2. Your script is too general. Only talk surface about traumatrauma in what aspect?

# data[].attributes.headline
HEADLINE: “a guardian takes out his anger on a student by abusing him for being depressed”

# data[].attributes.subject
HEADLINE: “a guardian takes out his anger on a student by abusing him for being depressed”

# data[].attributes.body
1. I approve the headline.

2. please proceed

# data[].attributes.body
CORRECTION PROPOSAL

Enhance the headline: A father being charged for raping own daughter.

I have read through your script.. you may proceed

# data[].attributes.body
new

# data[].attributes.body
19/10/2024

# data[].attributes.attachment_link.title
RABIATUL ADAWIYAH-BI (BREAKING NEWS) (1) (1)