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slayyy 💅

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what a rebuttal by the prosecution it is so close!!

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Good content, and your presentation improved!

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we need to work on the closing and wording of certain things, working on the sentence structure as well.

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be louder than you think you need to be!! great content, very eloquent and clear

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Strong argument, make sure to end emphasizing that the client is not guilty at the end, maybe cover the sequence of events in case a little more rather than the witness statements

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work on the "what" / "what, if anything"

is there hearsay???? There may be, work with me, arjun bhatkhande, to look through it.

Good job with witness identification.

Nice flow. Even, if you will.

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all of your questions should be yes/no

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remove speculation question

compound question about wearing / walking around that night

bea you did well.

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around 11pm or at 11pm question seems a little weak, otherwise good job

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For Vasquez: I would raise your voice, but the character you're selling (calm and professional) is really good

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your direct is pretty flawless and trinity you do a good job as your person

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when misspeaking try to say something like excuse me or pardon me instead of sorry

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great job dodging questions in cross, give more concrete answers than "I think so"

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you killed it on cross

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make sure to give yes or no answers, you have good redirects on that but make sure you fs say yes or no

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really good, heard a couple leading questions you will want to reword

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good job trying to work with new content, work on being louder

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Maybe could be shortened a little, but good!

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idk if mentioning that Turner hasn't experienced a case like this before will help, might undermine credibility

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Good but slow down

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good job making yang work, just watch out for objections

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"Contrary to popular belief" idk if you should say that, seems a little irrelevant and casual

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I would do a more dramatic climactic ending, but good!