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Point : The writer used a personification to describe what time of the year it is

Evidence : The writer says , "With spring rolling around."

Analysis : The writer used this personification to make the description of the non-human ,which is the spring , more vivid. The writer used the phrase 'rolling around' to describe the spring. The word 'rolling' means to rotate or move around something in circles . This may suggest that the writer is expressing how close spring is and that it is approaching and advancing . In addition , the writer may have used this personification because spring is the season and time of the year were the weather is the nicest and most people go out and don't stay home. in other words , the writer described spring as 'rolling around' referring to how energetic , lively and active people are in that season , which also describes the season itself. Spring is also the time of the year were people go to parks . the writer may has been referring to how kids roll down the grass hills in spring , which is an activity that children only do at spring. in conclusion , all of this make spring the energic and fun season which everyone wants to enjoy , even young mothers.

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Point : The writer uses rhetorical question to engage the mothers.

Evidence : "Do you miss those carefree child-free days of your youth?"

Analysis : The writer was aiming directly to the mothers by using "you", and that's a good way of addressing the audience to get their attention. He used " child-free days " , giving a mother a choice to have a relaxing , calm day without worrying about her kids. The writer also used the word "miss" to remind the mothers what does it feel like to have a day off with no responsibility , as a lot of mothers would love to get a chance to focus on their selves since some mothers have been putting their kids first and not giving some time to focus on them. The writer started with a question to engage the mothers and persuade them to agree. The writer also reminded them of their youth which could get the mothers thinking about their past life and how much they miss it.The writer was also trying to show them that they have been n a hard traumatic tense  journey and they deserves some fun. The writer ensured them that their kids would be fully taken care off which will be a relief for a lot of mothers.

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How does the writer use language to persuade young mothers?

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How does the writer use language to persuade young mothers?

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Are you sick and tired of wiping snot, vomit, and baby food off your pyjamas? Do you miss those carefree child-free days of your youth? Motherhood is a huge challenge; let us help you take a load off.​

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With spring rolling around, you’re probably itching to get out of the house. Our vibrant team at Young Mothers magazine has researched the best mother-friendly activities in the city, so you can cross planning your next outing off your To Do list. ​

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TAKE A DIP IN THE WATER PARK:​

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The Coolridge Water Park is the perfect place for mummies and their babies. Firstly, the park is running a 10% discount on all tickets for mums, while children under the age of 5 can enter for free. What’s more, the park itself is divided into several subsections so if you have tiny toddlers who are likely to be afraid of the loud water rides, you can opt for the quiet shallow pools where your child can discover his or her love for water. Isn’t that perfect?

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Point: The writer used a personification to persuade young mothers to visit The Coolridge Water Park.

Evidence:"With spring rolling around,"

Analysis: The writer uses a personification when she says "rolling around" . Obviously spring does not roll around since it is an un-materialistic thing. Spring is a season that is probably the most loved by people. So when the writer says that spring is rolling around, she signifies that the month of joy and great weather is just around the corner. Rolling is a term used for something that is moving quite quickly and smoothly, like something rolling down a hill. So by rolling she shows that the season (spring) is coming in very smoothly and quickly, so she can see signs of the weather getting cooler and flowers blooming.This helps convince the reader (young mothers) that this is the perfect time to visit this park. Overall she signifies that this beautiful season is coming around , and what is a better time to visit a water park?

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Point: The writer uses a  rhetorical question to attract and persuade mothers..

Evidence : "Do you miss those carefree child-free days of your youth? "

Analysis: The writer uses a very personal rhetorical question to make the reading follow along. She makes sure to make the reader know that her message is directly to her and trying to steal her attention from her emotions. The word "miss" is very heart touching and filled with emotions and feelings. The word "miss" is mostly used in loss especially something dear to the readers heart. "Care-free" and "child-free" is a very touching and makes the reader think about everything all over again and remember the good old days of freedom. The word "youth" is mostly used for attracting readers to remember what most people call as "the best days of their life". Everyone wants freedom, joy and hates responsibilities and extra work. "Youth" also means past and gone.. and the end of something precious..freedom. Overall all these words describe one thing which is freedom and less work and feeling fresh.

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- Point: the writer used personal pronoun, rhetorical question, exaggeration, and emotive language persuading young mothers to check out 'The Coolridge Water Park.'
 
- Evidence: ‘Are you sick and tired of wiping snot, vomit, and baby food off your pyjamas?’

- Analyze: Firstly, ‘are you?’ and ‘your’ is a great way to attract the reader’s attention, making them feel the article is written for them is heart-touching. In a way they feel that they are not alone and have a bunch of people reaching out to help them in whatever they are going through. Secondly, the rhetorical question adds so much to the text, giving the reader the opportunity to pause and think about how they personally think about the situation. Thirdly, ‘wiping snot, vomit, and baby food off your pyjamas’ added exaggeration and sarcasm. It gave me something to laugh at – as I am not a mom and have never been in a situation where I have gone through that and also have never seen a mom do so – or might give other readers, that can also be mothers, a thing to relate to. Agreeing that a mother’s job is not easy and is very messy indeed! Lastly, emotive language in ‘sick and tired’ made me feel so bad for moms. Being in a tired state or being ill means that a person is not doing well, can be both mentally or physically. Where the body is so exhausted and weak to do simple things, made me feel (as a reader) so sad to know that although being a mother is a blessing and a beautiful thing, it comes with so many struggles and responsibilities. All of this will make the moms wanting to know what they can do to make their day to day life with kids more enjoyable and easier. Suggesting to go to a water park will make them feel that this idea is great and that it’s going to be both beneficial and fun for the mom and babies, where they might end up finding best friends to hang out and spend time with!

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Point : The writer uses an exaggerating to show how badly mothers work on their children .

Evidence: She writes " sick and tired of wiping snots , vomit , and baby food."

Analysis: In this evidence , the writer ( Miss Zoya) used an exaggerating to describe how difficult mothers job is . For these phrases : "sick and tired ",  she used them to describe how bad and hard the work is . The word "sick" is used to show how mothers became weak , unwell , and unhealthy from cleaning up their children's mess. As for the word " tired" it is used to show how fatigue , exhausted , and out of energy the mothers are. The mothers are tired of wiping snots , vomit , and the baby food stains ( examples from the writer ) , of-course this is the worst part it. The mothers are really fed up of their children mess and untidiness .Overall, this exaggerating describes and explains everything about the mothers job , which is really difficult to manage and do .

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Point: the writer used personification to describe how badly someone wants to go out of the house.

Evidence: she writes” you’re probably itching”

Analysis: The writer used the phrase” you’re probably itching” to show that the person wants to go out of the house severely. The writer (Mrs. Zoya) used the word “itching” to describe how someone cannot stay sitting in the house without going out. The word “itching” describes how someone feel restless to do something and itching is meant to be for the body not for the feelings.  Also, it shows how someone is dying to go out and they are just burning for inside while they are just sitting in the house. They feel bored, annoyed and tiered of staying home, they want ot go out. the writer also added the word"probably" because she was sure that every mother feels the same way as her mother.

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Point: The writer uses a rhetorical question to persuade young mothers.

Evidence: She writes “Do you miss those carefree child-free days of your youth?”

Analysis: In this evidence, the writer’s use of a rhetorical question has many affects. Firstly, it makes it more personal to the reader; the reader will feel as if the writer is addressing them personally which attracts their attention. In addition to that, the question itself and its key words have an impact on the reader’s feeling. The first keyword in here is “miss”, this word is often used when someone has lost something that they used to have in the past that they would like back. So, the use of this word is to explain how mothers have lost the ability to be carefree and untroubled since having children and it makes the writer’s point stronger by indicating that this waterpark will give them that ability to have some time for themselves again that doesn’t involve worrying about their children. The second key phrase is “carefree child-free”, The writer makes a point by showing mothers and describing to them that becoming a mother has many hardships and struggles and that this waterpark provides them the chance to relive those days where they didn’t have to stress, worry and work so hard looking after their children. the last word "youth" is also used to describe how those days are no longer here and that they were in the past, which supports the idea of missing something that was in your "youth" or past.

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The writer used personification to persuade mothers Into  participating .
‘With spring rolling around,
‘Rolling’
The writer used the word rolling in the scentence which points to :movement,cuteness,puppies and excitement. Considering that she used a word with such meanings ,she Is trying to give happy vibes and excitement. Not mentioning she also mentioned spring and spring is a colourful time with great weather (not so cold but not warm) it is great time for picnics and swimming too (no burns). I believe the writer techniques were effective, considering you get joyful vibes on paragraph two.

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Point: The writer (aka Ms. Zoya) uses a rhetorical question to grab the reader's attention (the mothers) to visit the Water Park.

Evidence: "Are you sick and tired of wiping snot, vomit,
and baby food off your pajamas?"

Analysis: First, the writer asks this question directly to the mothers by adding "you and your." These words makes the audience feel that the writer is talking to them specifically.  Instead of writing a general rhetorical question with simple words like "they" or "everyone", the writer included words that really make the audiences more concerned and makes them even more curious about knowing what's coming later, since the question is addressed to them specifically.
The writer uses this rhetorical question for many good reasons. She uses it to grab the reader's attention (the audience), the mothers, in a topic that is very interesting to them: Taking care of children. They key words in this rhetorical question are “sick” and “tired”. She -Ms. Zoya - uses the word "sick" to describe the work mothers do. We normally use the word "sick" to describe a person whose health isn’t in its best state, or is ill. Ms. Zoya used this word to describe how the mothers feel when they do these works. She also uses the word “tired” so that mothers can relate to what she is trying to point out. The word “tired” is always used when the work we do is exhausting and refers to how mothers feel about doing work that is usually hard. These words fit the description of the work mothers do by taking care of children. Then the writer sets examples: "wiping snot, vomit, and baby food off their pajamas" that perfectly matches every mother's struggles with taking care of her child/children. This makes the audience – the mothers – more interested and encourages them to complete reading, by relating to the examples the writer has set. All the examples the writer set were disgusting examples that every mother would definitely love to get rid of, that's why the writer used such awful things that mothers will of course pay close attention to, in order for them to finally feel free from doing these things! Also, using this kind of rhetorical question at the beginning of the text (the introductory sentence) encourages the readers to continue and makes it more interesting for them... well, at least for me!

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Point: The writer used a rhetorical question to persuade young mothers to come and visit the water park.

Evidence: "Do you miss those carefree child-free days of your youth?"

Analysis: The rhetorical question used in the text was suggested to make it sound more friendly and direct to the reader. It was also effective because it gave a personal sense to the question and that was by stating a relatable situation that all mothers went through, we can also discuss the point where the writer explicitly related to all mothers’ by taking their memories in a flashback to their carefree childfree days; while this is a personal address to the mothers which make it sound more persuasive and convincible. When having a conversation with someone, we usually ask them questions to make them engaged and on track with your topic, in this way the other person can feel involved as well as relate to what you are saying. Similarly, the question helps keep the reader (mainly mothers) interactive as well as paying attention to what you are discussing and to the situation, which as a result has a more effective influence and state of mind on the reader. Overall, the rhetorical question implied that the reader would relate to the carefree child-free old days.