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I liked how you took time to talk the the things that you put in your smore on assistive technology.I also liked that you spent time talking about your blogs.

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I think the one improvement I have is to work on the audio, the background noise was very distracting.

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I like who for the digital identity research project you highlighted only the apps you especially liked or could see yourself using.

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I think the video was very long and there were some things that you could have been more concise with.

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I liked that you stated off by talking about your lessons and why you make specific decisions when you created them.

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One suggestion that I have is that you could have had some ideas jotted down on the side to lessen some of the pauses that you had.

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I like how you talked about the apps in your Tagul and what you used them for.

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One suggestion I have is that you could have talked more about your blog responses and what the blogs were about.

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I liked how you talked specifically about the technology you used in your lessons.

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I think that you could have given a bit of an introduction to what you were talking about in the video.

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Positive Feedback:
I liked how you jumped right into what you liked about the project and the website and how you use symbloo now that you've learned about it.

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I think one thing I could suggest is to have talked a little more about the lessons that you created.

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Positive Feedback:
I like how detailed you were in talking about your lessons and the technology you used and created in them.

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I think that you could have added more apps to your symbloo because most of the tiles were empty and you could have added the apps from your digital identity research project.

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I think that its great its great that you explained how the resources were linked to the external sights so that people could access them easily.

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I think that you could have explained the apps that you picked because they looked very interesting and I've never heard of some of them.

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I liked how you addressed your classroom set up and the reasoning behind why you are laying out your classroom that way.

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The only real improvement I can suggest is that the audio skipped in a few parts, overall it was really well done.

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I liked that you talked about why you picked the background of the website. I also liked how your favorite aspect being the lesson on Rainbow Fish.

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I think that you could have talked more about the apps that you choose for your digital identity research project and I also think that you could had added them to your symbloo because most of the tile spaces are empty.

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Positive Feedback:
I like how you stated highlighting your favorite parts of the project, you are the only person that I've seen so far do that.

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One suggestion I have is that you could have created a little script or write up to look at so that you weren't thinking of things to add on the spot.

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They video was very well planned out, you were clearly interested in the tools you found. I loved that you highlighted tools that you liked and would use for math.

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I think that the video was a bit long, even thought the pacing was good I think that you could have cut out some details or aspects that were not a priority.

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I liked the details that you provided for all the aspects of your website. I think that even though the video was a bit long, everything had the appropriate amount of detail.

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The audio was very mumbled and hard to hear through the whole video. I think that if you recorded in a different area or used a microphone/head phones it would have been better.

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I like how you talked about the apps and websites that you would find useful in an English class.

Improvement:
Your audio was hard to hear at times, and your voice echoed in the background.

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I like how you assed information about yourself on the website as well as adding the bit about music education.

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I think that a selection bar to navigate the website would be more effective than the "learn more" option. It makes it easier to go through the website.

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Positive Feedback:
I like how you addressed every project that you completed on your projects page.

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I think that you could have gone into more detail about the apps and websites you picked for the Digital Identity Research project. You talked about the categories but not the apps you picked.

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Positive Feedback:
I loved how you used your own experiences to relate to the tools on the website.

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I think that you could have used a bit more details when explaining along with your own experiences.

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Positive Feedback:
I think that you did a great job giving an overview of the website. I also think that you did a good job explaining all the components.

Improvement:
I think that the audio was difficult to hear overall. I think that you could have used head phones or a microphone.

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Positive Feedback:
The descriptions were very organized and detailed. I think that you used your time very well and gave each aspect the appropriate amount of time.

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One improvement I can suggest is that you could have talked about how you would use some of the tools in your own classroom and why you liked them.

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I like how you talked about each aspect of the project. I also like how you talk about how you would use the technology in your own classroom.

Improvement:
I think that the video was very long, and maybe if the video was more organized in it's script than the timing would have been better.

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I like how you went into great detail about all different aspects of your website. I also liked the fact that she had pre-set pictures that she moved through as an alternative to scrolling through the actual website.

Improvement:
I think that the audio was quiet and hard to hear at times with the background noise.