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instead of yelling, you should put arguing. Other than that its good.

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We like the 2nd sentence because it implies that the psychopath was once a normal person before he started murdering.

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Cal, Erik,Samer           We like the third one the best because it flows better than the other ones.

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Cal, Erik,Samer           We like the third one the best because it flows better than the other ones.

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I like the first sentence the because it showed full knowledge of being able to use the appositive phrases.

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We like Mak,Karson, Ilam, and Hasan's second sentence the best, because it flows very nicely and creates beautiful imagery.

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Mak Carrick, Karson Lusty, Islam Tartir, and Hasan Abdallah

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Mak Carrick, Karson Lusty, Islam Tartir, and Hasan Abdallah

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I like Jenna, Xiomyra, Hussien, Shaun's first sentence the most because the imagery of the warm cookies baking in the oven makes the sentences sound calm and peaceful.

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1). Hayden,  Mrs. Basham's worst enemy, never stops yelling.
2). Mrs. Basham's worst enemy, Hayden never stops yelling.
3). The kid that never stops yelling is Hayden, Mrs. Basham's worst enemy.

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example 1: Hayden, Mrs. Basham's worst enemy, never stops yelling.

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1.  The psychopath, a murderer roaming the streets, stalked his next victim to her house.
2. A stalking psychopath who was once normal, carefully thought out his evil scheme.
3. The scheme roamed through his head, a previous killer who now wanted a burrito.

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Silver Oie, Hayden Godwin, Cesar Arreola, Tanner Tholen

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Silver Oie, Hayden Godwin, Cesar Arreola, Tanner Tholen

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1). My brother's favorite horse, Arlo, is the fastest on the ranch.
2). Sunset, my favorite horse, is much slower, but she is an amazing jumper.
3). My mother was jealous of our horses, so she bought her own, Mary-Beth.

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1).Erik, the nice guy likes to take care of his grandma, Sussy.
2).My brother, David enjoys watching sports with his best friend, Josh.
3).Josh and his best friend, Alex practice basketball together.

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1. Cookies, warm dough with chocolate chips, baked on the oven.
2. The warm dough with chocolate chips, the cookies baked in the oven.
3. Baking in the oven were cookies, warm dough filled with chocolate chips.

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Mak Carrick, Karson Lusty, Islam Tartir, and Hasan Abdallah 

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Mak Carrick, Karson Lusty, Islam Tartir, and Hasan Abdallah 

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1). My sister, Michelle, enjoys riding her horse, Camille, through the forest by her house.
2). Michelle, my sister, enjoys riding her horse, Camille, through the forest by our house.
3). The calmness of riding her horse, Camille, through the forest by our house was disturbed by my sister, Michelle.

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I like Mr. Bell's third sentences most because at first everything was fine, but then, the peaceful scene is subverted with gruesome imagery.

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1. The zombie, a walking carcass that was once a man, creeped slowly across the street.
2. A walking carcass that was once a man, the zombie creeped slowly across the street.
3. The peacefulness of the street was interrupted by a zombie, a walking carcass that was once a man.