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used pathos by the tone of voice/examples ext. for ethos credibility by connecting to the audience such as asking the sharks their experiences/ also does a race with one of the sharks to prove how the box worked.

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Maybe the speaker should explain how the box was created like more of the history

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She gives an example on how she was moving boxes for his friends ethos. An easy box that can be assembled in seconds making a boxing job easier logos . She makes one of the guys come up there and try to put a normal box together she also calls it sexy and makes one of the girls smile.

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She used a visual aid of a box falling apart and brought the actual boxes in to provoke pathos.

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She used a personal example of everything falling out of a box she was moving.

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Used ethos in where she stated an logical personal story about the box with her friend and how she came up with the idea.

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she evoked pathos from the voice perjection. And then she also used a personal example of everything falling out of the box.

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She could slow down a bit.

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The race she did was an effective example of how her product works. It appeals to logos since it tested how easy it is to put her box together compared to normal boxes.

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She was talking a little too fast, like she was in a rush, and it kinda made me tune out.

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She could talk slower and be more expressive with her tone which would make the audience emotionally connect to the speech more.

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she told a personal story which evoked ethos

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She could talk about her boxes not falling apart to connect it to the hook.

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Her tone of voice is very eye-catching. it's almost like you can never stop watching. She has humor and she seems very excited to share. Her visual is amazing. Connection with judges

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tone of voice and energy is very contagious, makes you want to support her, pathos

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She used a personal anecdote at the beginning which evokes ethos, credibility. She was also able to have a prop, in this case her box, and one of the guys come up and be used as an example which also evokes ethos because it makes her project legit and shows us how useful and legit it is.

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Something she can do to improve is maybe slow her pace down when talking.

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She had a visual aid which was her box and raced one of the sharks in setting up a normal box. She almost assembled hers instantly and the other guy hadn't even started. This demonstrated ethos because she connected with the audience.

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She could extend the length of her presentation of she would talk slower. She also had a major advantage in the race because it was her product that she has no soubt used hundreds of times.

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A tool that she used was using personal experience which evokes pathos because the audience can relate to her in terms of packing up boxes.

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her hook and the body of her pitch were disconnected, one about boxes breaking the other about the speed of boxing.

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Ethos- using a personal story, and then beating a shark in a race.

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Her tone of voice was very energetic and it got you interested and excited for her product

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She had really good visual aid when showing how to make the box, and how a normal box just breaks when everything is in it. This evoked ethos.

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She uses a personal story about her experience and in this uss she uses a visual aid, which evokes credibility and logic.

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She had a great visual aid along with a personal expirience which establishes pathos along with credibilty.

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she entertains the crowd by making a fun was to show her idea and addresses the "sharks" personally

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Ethos: She showed the visual of the box/ Personal story
Pathos: her tone of voice sounds enthusiastic
Logos: She explained how this could help the boxing industry

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She had a race with the audience, which isn't fair because she has used her box lots of times, I think it would have been better if the guy from the audience used her box, and she used the normal box.

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She should of included the cost of the box when comparing her box to regular cardboard boxes

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Maybe some statistics behind her box or other boxs compared to hers

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She could have talked slower and been more enthusiasic, her voice projection looked forced.

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use more logos and slowed down a little bit

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Slowed a bit down to help us absorb the idea of her product more

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She can slow her pace down because she went very fast which showed how nervous she was.

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she could have had more statistics on the time that it takes for normal packing and moving vs with her boxes.

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ethos. she used a very good visual aid with the box and her race with the shark

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She needs more info how the products work, can it hold heavy object.

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Something that she could do better is explaining her emotions of frustration when she was working with the regular box.

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Visual Aids with the box, and strong supporting verbs

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she was moving way to fast!

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good visual aid and supporting personal story

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pace too fast