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Unit 9: controversial issues- gay adoption

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Unit 9: controversial issues- gay adoption

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In this task I had the opportunity to learn about another kind of speech. The preparation of all the tasks have been easy for me because I research about the topic and then I create the outline. I have a favorite kind of outline, so I have used it in the majority of the tasks. The outline is a perfect guideline to follow in this presentation, it’s helpful.

I really like the presentation in front of the class, I’m always nervous but I prefer it that the videos. I felt very good in this presentation and I have improve my English process because I used and recycle all the tools and strategies that we’ve learned in skills.

This activities are very useful for my professional and personal life because all the strategies I will be able to use in Spanish too. Also, if I will have to present something in English for an audience I have the ability to do it.

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I like your presentation !
you have very good information and you explained very well, I liked your creativity
I recommend a little work on pronunciation

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Hi Andre, I liked your presentation because I didn't know about this festival but, It look like very interesting for the people in Taiwan for the meaning in their culture, I think maybe in Colombia someday we can make one similar festival, your fluency is very good and you used the grammar and vocabulary of the lesson. Congratulations!!.

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This is the outline to introduce a person I admire

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Hi Andrea, Freddy and Michael. It was a really good news clip. You tried to to it in a very natural way, especially because you included different settings. The content was a little short, but you included most of the information according to your outline. Maybe you could have expanded the information related to “Government sources diverted” and “Foreign policies”. You mentioned problems with the government and the sayings of some foreign entities, but I couldn't find explicit content related to those two labels. In regard to language, you did a very good job including reports with both direct and indirect speech and with both imperatives and statements. You made the tenses changes effectively, but in direct speech it's common to mention the word “quote” when you start saying what the person said exactly. Language in general was very good, but you can check a few mistakes. “Guajira doesn't only face … also live the drama” - The correct verb tense should be present continuous and the subject is missing in the second part of the statement. “The most victims don't are mayors of 6 years old” - “Most of the victims aren't older than 6 years old”. “We hope with the government police change this situation” - “we hope with the government's policies this situation changes”. “Santos said would there a be...” - “Santos said there would be...” Also, check the pronunciation of "famine", “children”, “asked”, “said”. And be careful with the translation of international names. Instead of ONU you should say UN.

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I really like your video principally because you chose a national problematic which you achieved personalized.  Besides, in general the fluency and the pronunciation are good. It´s clear that you investigated a lot about the topic and the information is very interesting and specific. Congratulations!!

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Hi, I like your video, I think it`s very creative,  I liked how you used the tools like the microphone.
I like too the pronuntiation, it was clear and the team in general were very safe.
Congratulations!!!

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Guys, it was an excellent video, it's interesting that you really be concerned about colombian's situation. You use the vocabulary of the unit, the topic is clear but take care with the pronunciation of some words. In generally you used a very interesting type of journalism. You have good strategies to remember the ideas that you have to say in the video.

Congratulations.

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Unit 5: Natural Disaster- Indirect Speech

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Unit 5: Natural Disaster- Indirect Speech

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Hello andre there are my comments..
1. Content: The content it's ok, because you used varied information about the topic.
2. Communication: You had a good pronunciation and excellent fluency.
3. Language: You used the grammar of the level and the appropiate vocabulary.
4. New language: You used the modals and the new words of the unit.
5. Visuals: Although your communication were very good, you moved the head so much, and maybe in ocassions you felt nervous.
But in general was an excellent presentation, congratulations. :) Mike.

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Flow Chart by Andrea Hernandez and Michael Pedraza

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Infomercial by Andrea Hernandez and Michael Pedraza

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Uploaded by Michael Pedraza Sánchez on 2016-05-14.

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This is my outline about spiritual healing.

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I liked your video, too. Even though you had to read your notes, you managed to give us a lot of interesting information about you and about the concepts you had to talk about. It's nice that you like reading a lot. It's one of the topics of this book :-)

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Andrea I like your video, you have a good vocabulary and good pronunciation, you know about the etiiquette and you prepare very good.
In some cases have difficulties with the fluency.
I like you think travel and do the master.

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Hey Andrea, You gave a complete data and information. I like your presentation. You just need to think more quickly all you're going to say. It happens the same to me... mabe we need to concentrate and be more relaxed to speak more fluently.
Take care and thnx for sharing it!

Santiago.

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Hi Andrea, It's a good video, I appreciate that sharing slightly about you. I hope that you can travel soon to USA, It's a beautiful country, really.
It's necesary to practice every day, practice makes the master... Thank you. Bye

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Hey andre what´s goning on!... I like so much your video because you used ther verb tenses in the all recording, you have fluency and used the main vocabulary that we have studied in the different classesand I can Konw a little more for you!... Take Care

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I like the introduction because was very clear and gave a general idea to the viewers. Besides, I like that you could aply
grammar in your presentation.
I learned about the importance of nettiquete when you was talking about the importance of the spelling and the grammar in the social networks

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Andrea I really like your video.
I liked your pronunciation and fluency.
I learned about personal information about Andrea
I  recommend improve the natural movement body

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This is my first video. I'm going to talk about my personal information, digital literacy and netiquette.

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First Blood Moon & First Mystery Man Task

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LEGO Harry Potter Remastered Walkthrough Part

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This is my first video. I'm going to talk about my personal information, digital literacy and netiquette.