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Good afternoon,

With the completion of the activity number 10 this virtual course is over. I hope this blog and platform have been very useful to you and I would like to encourage you to continue improving your knowledge in English. As you know, speaking a second language has many advantages not only when finding a job but also in your personal life. This will open many opportunities to you in the near future, so do not waste this knowledge acquired!

Continue practicing!

Good Luck,

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I just can say good luck with the learning of english... a month is nothing to learn a complex language as english is. I hope next courses you give a better performance

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Hi!

it is not difficult to infer that you used a translator to do the activity again. There are some coherence, cohesion problems and also some wrong sentences traduced from Spanish to English.

ES TRISTE VER QUE TODO LO HIZO UN TRADUCTOR!!!!!!

The last vacations ----- LAST VACATION
I went to the city of medellin, ---- I WENT TO MEDELLIN CITY
was November 23, 2016, ----------- IT WAS ON ....
I travel in road for 8 hours,??? ----- I TRAVELED BY BUS
when I come to medellin not tape-worm hotel to where to come?????? NOT CLEAR!!!
I began to search for the center of medellin --..AROUND THE CITY CENTER
After this day last in medellin 3 days mas???? SPANISH?

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Thanks for your analysis about transportation. I agree in some aspects you mentioned such as the fact of economy vs techonoly.
In terms of English there are many mistakes because you took advantage of a translator not of your knowledge. If you want to improve your English you must write your own ideas and practice your writing skills.

- As I read these articles --- After reading ...

- I also remember
this technology makes several Years, TRANSLATOR!!!
SEVERAL YEARS AGO

- the research capacity of the human being will grow,
natural resources deplete NOT CLEAR

- to migrate from the land??? SAY FROM THE EARTH

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Hi!

Good Job! The participation in the second activity is well written in terms of punctuation, grammar, spelling and coherence. It includes information about you, the things you did last weekend and things you do on a long weekend. However it was a bit short, I can not correct much because of that.

- My hobbie is ----- my   Hobbies are!! (PLURAL)
- And cheerful ---- and a cheerful person
- stomach pain ---- stomachache

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Adjunto link del video en youtube https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p_UXcuxRwV4&feature=youtu.be

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The last vacations I went to the city of medellin, to the concert of the guns and roses, was November 23, 2016, I travel in road for 8 hours, the trip was a bit boring because it had very much I deal in some routes, when I come to medellin not tape-worm hotel to where to come, I began to search for the center of medellin and found one economic but a bit far from the stadium atanacio girardot, in the stadium atanacio giratdot the presentation did the group guns and roses, after leaving my suitcases in the hotel, I went to the concert, the best concert that I have gone, the concert I last approximately 2 hours, I went out of the really tired concert, after the concert I went to eat and to I drink something for later to be going to sleep to the hotel, After this day last in medellin 3 days mas and I crossed almost the whole city, I mount in the meter of the city, also I mount in the meter cable, it was a really unforgettable experience, I wait some day to return and to continue crossing this beautiful city, and this way they were my last vacations

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As I read these articles I just thought that this technology should be applied to all airplanes or air transport vehicles to have a lower impact on the environment, I also remember the artificial satellites that are in space, that use this technology makes several Years, things that surprised me, first the way they slept, the techniques to sleep fast, the way to go to the bathroom, a great achievement but always the companies of fuels slow these advances by economic interests. I just hope this someday changes.

I think that the safest way to travel is by plane, because it has no direct connections in the trip, it is more controlled and more guaranteed by the high cost of travel, the most dangerous way to travel is by motorcycle, due to the instability of the Motorcycle at high speeds, and because there are many obstacles along the way.

I think that if humans travel to space someday, as technology is progressing more and more, and the research capacity of the human being will grow, also in the future when the natural resources deplete I think that the human being Is going to have to migrate from the land, in many years but that moment will come.

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Task 2

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Task 1