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2. I disagree with the idea that learning history and philosophy subjects are a waste of time . In my point of view, learning history is very important for students, it help them explore more about their knowledge in their country history- what happened in the past , culture, hero, archievements . And about philosophy,It is a subject that helps students to have clearer prejudices, it even helps their thinking become more mature. In short, there is no subject without its value, it depends on how the subject is applied in life.

Content: Topic (need paraphrasing the topic)- concluding (inconsistent to topic sentence)-body (examples: quantity - quality principle)

CC: don't use much coherence
Vocab: repeat 'history' and 'philosophy' many times
Grammar: sentences need being more flexible

Compound/Complex sentence: And about philosophy,It is a subject that helps students to have clearer prejudices, it even helps their thinking become more mature.

=> Moreover, philosophy is a subject HELPING students to have clearer prejudices, which even helps their thinking become more mature.

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5. Many people claim that history and philosophy subjects are not necessary for their career. The most popular reason is that it does not help them in the future, so they want to use that time for another purpose such as learning English. But, on the contrary, I strongly disagree with this statement because of some reasons. About history, it helps young people to understand your culture ;and how your culture and country have evolved. Suppose that you had a foreign friend, he asks you about features of your culture, you can not say anything about that because you have no knowledge of it. About the latter, philosophy exposes you to become a great debater, and teaches you critical thinking, which is important for your learning in college. In conclusion, history and philosophy subjects are necessary for all people, especially for young people.

Content:
Topic sentence: Too long
Supporting: Good supporting ideas and examples for history. Need more for philosophy
Concluding: Met the requirements
CC: Acceptable
Vocab: Have a variety of vocabulary, good
Grammar:  perfect

Compound/Complex sentence: Later, philosophy not only exposes you to become a great debater but also teaches you critical thinking, which is important for your learning in college.

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Instruction:

●Work in group in 15 minutes on Padlet

●Check your friend’s paragraph based on the rubric
MAKE ONE COMPOUND OR ONE COMPLEX SENTENCE

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4. I completely disagree with this idea. I know English is the most popular language in the world but language is also kind of culture. So, it is very necessary to save the unpopular languages. => TOPIC SENTENCE

In the past, there were over 7000 languages created but now I think it may less than 200. Many cultures were disappeared because of wars, natural disaster, … and so were languages. For example, Vietnamese spoke some languages before. But now, like you see, they just speak only one. Saving unpopular languages is not only saving languages, it also saves the culture, pride, older generation’s knowledge, ….

Main idea 1: First, saving languages means preserving the wealth of knowledge (cultures, history, math, biology). Supporting details 1: Reasons .... For example, ...
Main idea 2: Second, a language is a country's identity/ distinction.
Supporting details 2: Why (personal pronouns- calling) examples

Concluding: To sum up, ....

To sum up, it is very necessary save unpopular languages.

content: topic sentence is not clear
cc: clear
vocab: nothing to correct
grammar: missing some comma, dot and  using the dot wrong.

Compound sentence:  But now, like you see, they just speak only one -> However, they just speak only one

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6. I strongly agree we should learn more new languages for some reasons. Firstly,we have more opportunities to get a job because many companies nowadays require people who can speak more than one language. For example, the FPT corporation required applicants to speak at least 2 languages for a job. Finally/ Seocndly,  we have more knowledge and confidence when we exchange with other foreign people. For example, we can easily chat with foreign colleagues without language barrier. However, if we do not learn bilingualism, there is a risk of going backward in society. In conclusion, everyone should hone themselves in the necessary languages ​​to succeed in life.
Content:

Topic sentence: Clear topic, controlling idea.

Supporting sentence:

Coherent, clarifying the main idea

Easy to understand examples

There is a sentence that turns the problem upside down to see more clearly(but need more examples to make it clearer)

Concluding sentence:

Summarized the main idea.

Short, easy-to-understand summary sentence.

Coherence: This paragraph is pretty simple, but clear and logical, but there should be more than 3 thesis statements.

Lexical resource: have, chat, is a risk

Grammatically:

Should have more grammar.

Complex and Compound sentences:

We have more knowledge and confidence exchanging with other foreign people. => SV, AND SV

We do not learn bilingualism, so we can go backward in society.

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I disagree with the idea that learning history and philosophy subject are a waste of time since they have no value for our future. Firstly, history is an indispensable part when talking about a country, it is considered the origin and culture of that country. Not only that when we study history, we know how our country developed and then we find ways to develop the country further, avoiding the old mistakes. The second is that philosophy plays a very important role, it teaches us many things in life, such as society, people, life...So there is no subject where students waste time, each subject has its own role.

1)Content:
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- Clear content but not strong enough, develop more
- Paraphrase is not good enough
B.
- Few linking words
C.
- Concluding sentence is not relevant

2) CC: No coherent
3) Vocab:
Hardly don't use new words
Repeat some word too much such as country, history
4) Grammar: small mistake in grammar

Complex sentence: history is an indispensable part when talking about a country,  because it is considered the origin and culture of that country/ nation.

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1. I strongly disagree with some people thinking that studying history and philosophy is a waste of time and unhelpful for the future for a few reasons. First, studying history and philosophy will help students have an understanding of the country's heroic history and thereby follow the example of their forefathers. Second, history is like a book to remember the gratitude of those who sacrificed to protect the peace of our country. In short, any subject is important to each of us.

Content: conclusion not the same with the topic and secondly lack of supporting sentences+ EXAMPLES, PHILOSOPHY, ART
CC: clearly
Vocab: repeat the word's history and philosophy too much
Grammar:  nothing :)
History is like a book that helps us remember PEOPLE  who made sacrifices to keep our nation safe.

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All companies should have corporate social responsibility. Do you agree or disagree?

Topic sentence: I strongly agree with the idea that we should apply Corporate social responsibility in all companies.

Main idea 1: increase the quality of business

Supporting details 1: the Product will be known by lots of customers. The graduate reputation of company

Main idea 2: attract quality employees

Supporting details 2:  Surveys of young  workers  show that many are drawn to companies that are socially responsible

Concluding sentence:Corporate social responsibility should be implemented by all businesses.

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All companies should have corporate social responsibility. Do you agree or disagree?

Topic sentence: I totally agree with the idea that companies should participate in corporate social responsibility

Main idea 1: It helps to attract more employees and young talents

Supporting details 1: Because the young generation with talent is often directed to companies with CSR activities, the company can attract talent.

Main idea 2: Encourages Customer Loyalty

Supporting details 2: Starbucks has many loyal customers

Concluding sentence: So if the company have corporate social responsibility, they will have good quality employees and loyal customers

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All companies should have corporate social responsibility. Do you agree or disagree?

Topic sentence: All companies should have corporate social responsibility

Main idea 1:Preserving and developing the company's cultural identity

Supporting details 1: For example, doing charity helps improve the company's image.

Main idea 2: Create favorable working conditions for employees

Supporting details 2: companies easily connect with employees

Concluding sentence: To sum up, all companies need to be socially responsible to employees, partners and shareholders.

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All companies should have corporate social responsibility. Do you agree or disagree?

Topic sentence: I strongly agree with the idea "All companies should have corporate social responsibility"

Main idea 1:It helps to attract more employees and young talents

Supporting details 1

Main idea 2: It can improve innovation and collaboration within businesses

Supporting details 2: A lot of skills can be developed when taking part in any kind of CSR activity and beyond this, employees are able to learn about potential clients, develop their communication skills and improve leadership

Concluding sentence: Finally, CSR is an important project for companies in today's growing economic sector

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All companies should have corporate social responsibility. Do you agree or disagree?

Topic sentence: I completely agree and support that all companies should have corporate social responsibility. It is extremely important for any business, for the following reasons

Main idea 1:  CSR attract talent

Supporting details 1: Because CSR can improve culture helps attract and retain top talent, improve employee engagement and morale

Main idea 2: Drive profitability

Supporting details 2: Customers tend to buy products from socially responsible companies.
Example: Starbucks corporation, after they ranked #3 in Fortune magazine's 2017 list of WMAC, their stock jumped a staggering 1,200 percent within 8 years.

Concluding sentence: In summary, corporate social responsibility is considered as one of the most important factors for a business to help it survive and develop.

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I totally agree that businesses should imply corporate social responsibility for some ways.First,CSR can help companies attract quality employees.For example, if you have a good standar you can attract good employees for your businesses.Second,you can have a Costs savings.For instance,you reducing resource use, waste and emissions, you can help the environment and save money too.To sum up, we need to have a corporate social responsibility because it very useful for our corporations.

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In my point of view, I agree that all companies should have corporate social responsibility. First of all, it will improve the reputation or productivity of that company. For example, with CSR Starbucks corporation after ranked #3 in Fortune magazine's 2017 list of WMAC, their stock jumped a staggering 1,200 percent within 8 years. Secondly, it create a better playground for its employees. With the corporation which has social responsibility, the workers will have a proffesional way to do their job, care about company's purposes or vision more than the money. To conclude, corporate social responsibility is considered as one of the most important factors for a business to help it survive and develop.

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I agree with the idea that all companies should have corporate social responsibility. Corporate social responsibility brings many benefits to businesses. Society is very developed in terms of social networks. Businesses have to build an image slowly, going from low to high, good and quality to attract customers. Partly to enhance the image of the company. The quality of the business is not only communication but also the voice of customers. Responsibility demands high from the smallest positions in the company. In short, every company should include CRS plans in its business. Because CRS is not only a trend it is also a company ethos.

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I completely agree that we should incorporate Corporate Social Responsibility into our business for a variety of reasons. First and foremost, CSR will maintain a positive reputation by demonstrating consciousness in a variety of areas, which can garner publicity and provide tangible proof of a company's conduct. For example, through environmental consciousness, we can reduce waste, recycle, reduce our carbon footprint, and implement other best practices. Furthermore, CSR can boost employee loyalty. Employee loyalty can be increased by providing good jobs and encouraging high professional and moral standards. To summarize, all businesses should implement corporate social responsibility.

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All companies should have corporate social responsibility. Do you agree or disagree?

Topic sentence:

Main idea 1: Implementing social responsibility contributes to increasing profits for businesses.

Supporting details 1: CSR has a positive relationship with return on internment, assets, and revenue growth. CSR will form the basis of success for all the important business activities in the organization. on the one hand, CSR helps businesses reduce produce production costs through safe and economical production methods

Main idea 2: enhance the image of the companies

Supporting details 2: if the company wants to develop long-term, it must build a good image and quality to attract customers.

Concluding sentence: To sum up, every corporation should add CSR plans in their business because CSR is not only trendy but it also shows the ethics of companies.

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I totally agree with the idea that all companies should have a corporate social responsibility for some reason. Firstly, if you apply a CSR in the company who help increase the quality of business and we have a good reputation with everyone. So the product will know a lot of customers lead to making more profit. Secondly, the company attracts quality employers and young workers. Par example a young worker who could be trained and selected as a result we will get quality and highly qualified workers which working efficiency will be high for the company. In conclusion, applying corporate responsible bring a lot of benefit to the company

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I completely agree and support that all companies should have corporate social responsibility. It is extremely important for any company, for the following reasons. The first is anti-corruption CSR. Bring fairness to members in a competitive environment as popular as companies. For example, many people take advantage of corruption for their own gain and take away other people's chances of success. The second is to protect the interests of workers. CSR will provide a variety of health, safety and insurance policies for employees in the working environment. The most obvious example is occupational accident insurance. Some construction companies - the working environment is dangerous, so occupational accident insurance is extremely meaningful to them. In general, the social responsibility model is considered as one of the most important factors of companies in order to benefit employees and help the company survive and develop in the long run.

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I totally agree with the way think that all companies should take a socially responsible approach, because of several reason. Firstly, attract investors. For instance,with a clear and responsible direction, investors will feel more secure when working with the company, trusting each other will help longer-term cooperation. secondly, build up a beautiful image, a trusted brand with customers. In particular, if the company wants to develop in long-term, the fact that the company's own brand is trustworthy will not cause problems in future growth, and also attracts many customers. As a result, being socially responsible is something all companies should do.

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I completely agree with this idea that all companies should have corporate social responsibility. First, companies must preserve and develop corporate cultural identity. For example, giving to charity helps improve the company's image. Participate in communication activities, propagating the good sides of the company. Second, create favorable working conditions for employees. Companies should create the best conditions for employees such as improving facilities, creating an effective working environment. In addition, it is also advisable to absorb employees' opinions, understand employees to help connect everyone in the company together, creating a strong team to help everyone work with peace of mind. To sum up, all companies must have corporate social responsibility in order to develop.

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I definitely argree that corporate social responsibility (CSR) should be in all companies. To begin with, many people think that CSR decreases the profit of a company. However, it helps the company develops their reputation, which gives them the opportunity to recruit more talents because brilliant people love their company to be good too. Therefore, the company will have their products’ quality increased, which leads to the growth of the profit. For example, Starbucks has become one of the most popular coffee shops in the world by applying CSR in their company. Corporate social responsibility not only improves the profit but it also improves innovation and collaboration within businesses. When a company has CSR, its employees can learn a lot of skills. For instance, they met potential clients, develop their communication skills and improve leadership, which all helps building the company’s reputation. In summary, CSR is very good and it should be in all companies.

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I totally agree with all companies having corporate social responsibility. First, when every company is responsible for corporate society, all rights of employees and customers will be guaranteed. Second, if all companies strictly comply with corporate social responsibility, they will reduce pollution to the living environment of people around. Third, if every business has corporate social responsibility, it will help community development of people and colleagues in the company with a healthy working environment. Finally, every company, when properly implementing corporate social responsibility, will make natural resources not be exploited indiscriminately. Therefore, every company should carry out corporate social responsibility to improve the living environment of the people and employees, to prevent natural resources from being exhausted, and to make the country strong and healthy for neighboring countries must have a different view. Not only that, it also helps the company grow strongly thanks to the sympathy of users

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I totally agree with all companies having corporate social responsibility. First, when every company is responsible for corporate society, all rights of employees and customers will be guaranteed. Second, if all companies strictly comply with corporate social responsibility, they will reduce pollution to the living environment of people around. Third, if every business has corporate social responsibility, it will help community development of people and colleagues in the company with a healthy working environment. Finally, every company, when properly implementing corporate social responsibility, will make natural resources not be exploited indiscriminately. Therefore, every company should carry out corporate social responsibility to improve the living environment of the people and employees, to prevent natural resources from being exhausted, and to make the country strong and healthy for neighboring countries must have a different view. Not only that, it also helps the company grow strongly thanks to the sympathy of users

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I total agree with the idea that we should apply Corporate social responsibility in all companies. Firstly, Corporate social responsibility helps to increase the quality of business, more specific the product will be known by lots of customers and the graduate reputation of company. Secondly, the company's attract quality employees will be enhanced. According to surveys of young  workers  show that many are drawn to companies that are socially responsible. Therefore corporate social responsibility should be implemented by all businesses.

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I really agree with the idea that all companies should have corporate social responsibility. As it is very important in business for the following reasons. First, corporate social responsibility attracts talent. Because corporate social responsibility can improve a culture that helps attract and retain top talent, improving employee engagement and morale. It also helps employees have a comfortable working environment, so employees will enjoy working at a company that applies corporate social responsibility. Second, customers tend to buy products from socially responsible companies. Because they believe in the quality that the company gives them. Example: Starbucks Corporation, after being ranked 3rd on Fortune's 2017 WMAC list, their stock has increased by an astounding 1,200% within 8 years. It is thanks to corporate social responsibility that Starbucks has built the trust of customers. In summary, corporate social responsibility is considered as one of the most important factors of a business to help a business survive and develop.

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should we have Corporate social responsibility (CSR) "Toan"

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I completely agree with the idea that companies should have a CSR system and these are my opinions about this. Obviously, having CSR will increase our business's quality, from employee to product. When we take care of our employee, giving them a motivational environment to work, their productivity will grow, and increase our product both number and quality. Futhermore, after increase reputation through good working environment and have great product, there will be many talented people want to apply to our company, then the quality of company continue increase, create a circle of making porfit. To sum up, Having CSR will help company increasing in all way

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I agree with the way think that all companies should take a socially responsible approach, because of several reasons. Firstly, implementing social responsibility contributes to increasing profits for businesses. CSR has a positive relationship with return on internment, assets, and revenue growth. CSR will form the basis of success for all the important business activities in the organization. on the one hand, CSR helps businesses reduce produce production costs through safe and economical production methods. Second, enhance the image of the companies if the company wants to develop long-term, it must build a good image and quality to attract customers. To sum up, every corporation should add CSR plans in their business because CSR is not only trendy but it also shows the ethics of companies.

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I agree with the idea that all companies should have corporate social responsibily ( CSR ). First, CSR is help to preserving and developing the company’s cultural identity. For example, the company donate for charities, reducing waste, community organizations, … will help for company’s reputation and charismatic. Second, it will create favorable working conditions for employees. Most of employees will see themselves as valuable and work more productively and effectively. Besides that, CSR will help companies attract quality employees and it’s leads to increased company profits. Customers and investors are attract with the company committ to CSR too, this is the foundation to grow the company, increase profits and return capital in the fastest way. To sum up, all companies need all companies need to be socially responsible to corporate to develop and maintain the company for a long time, thereby developing the country’s economy.

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In my opinion, all companies should have corporate social responsibility also called CSR because of some reason below. Initially, CSR can attract top talent also improve your business's value because it can improve culture helps attract and retain top talent, improve employee engagement and morale. Besides, CSR also drives profitability because almost all customers tend to buy products from a company having social responsibility, so CSR can increase sales. On the whole, corporate social responsibility is considered as one of the most important factors for a business to help it survive and develop.

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I completely agree with the idea that companies should apply corporate social responsibility model for their ones. Firstly, profit is a crucial factor for running the firm so that this model is one of the wise option. Customers often pay attention to the way companies react to social and political issues; therefore, it usually leads to boycotting to reduce values of the company. Companies using corporate social responsibility promote positive values, which ultimately increases company profit. Secondly, corporate social responsibility also help to increase strongly sustainability. For example, organizations can reduce carbon emissions and start using alternative energy. As a results, this actions can save so much many money.  In conclusion, I believe that companies should prioritize corporate social responsibility as the most important model to manage the firms

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I completely agree with the idea that we should apply Corporate social responsibility in all companies because of some reason. First, CSR can help our companies increase the quality and reputation of the company because when we use CSR we will pay attention to the product quality and their origin. Since then, our products will be highly appreciated and widely used by consumers. Second, company use CSR can attract quality employees. Surveys of young workers show that many are drawn to companies that are socially responsible because they think this is a good, friendly environment to work and develop, or we can do CSR-oriented employee training that improves quality employees recruits excellent employees. To sum up, CSR gives our companies a lot of benefits, so we should apply Corporate social responsibility in all companies.

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I completely agree with this opinion that we should apply corporate social responsibility in all companies because of some reason. Firstly, companies will attract quality employees with this model. It will create a good working environment for employees and make employees work better. For example, When the company gives employees an extra day off at the weekend, which will help them feel more comfortable and work harder. Secondly, companies will increase the quality of business. The product will be known by lots of customers because of some donations for orphans, nursing homes. To sum up, all companies should apply corporate social responsibility in all companies.

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Living in a city is bad for our health. Do you agree or disagree?

Topic sentence: I strongly agree with the idea that Our health will be harmful when living in a city

Main idea 1: Air pollution, Emission of the factories and cars

Supporting details 1: the amount of motorbikes in VietNam has increased day by day

Main idea 2: Dirty, fast-food

Supporting details 2:  Fast food is high in cholesterol.
conclusion: To sum up, Our health suffers as a result of living in a city.

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I completely agree that all companies should have CSR. Because CSR will bring a lot of benefits for them. First, it helps to attract more employees and young talents. CSR can improve culture helps attract and retain top talent, update employee engagement and morale. Second, CSR can improve innovation and collaboration within businesses. Because a lot of skill can be developed when talking part in any kind of CSR activity and beyond this, employees are able to learn about potential clients, update their communication skills and leadership. To sum up, CSR is an important and all companies should have this

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I completely agree with the idea that all companies should have corporate communal responsibility .First, most companies are always preserving and developing the company's cultural identity to improve their company’s reputation.For example, they participate in a lot of charity work or open it to make the company's image more famous. Second, they create favorable working conditions for employees to help other people have a job easier and also their company has an abundant workforce. In short, all companies need to be socially responsible to employees, partners and it will definitely bring a lot of benefits.

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I agree with the idea that all companies should have corporate social responsibility. Since the implementation of corporate social responsibility contributes to increased profits for the business. CSR has a positive relationship with corporate social responsibility. return on investment, assets, and revenue growth. On the one hand, CSR helps businesses reduce production costs through safe and economical means of production. Social responsibility contributes to attracting good labor. Competent labor is the decisive factor. Productivity and quality. In short, every company should include CSR plans in their business as CSR is not only a trend but it also represents a company's ethics.

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Nowadays, many companies focus mostly on corporate social responsibility(CSR). From my own point, I totally agree with them for a number of reasons. First, CSR would improve your workforce because some talented employees want to dedicate for the company that care about making good impact on the community issues.. Secondly, CSR will help our companies to build a good reputation and increasingly profit. For example, a company organize a CSR plan which has many positive effects on the environment and then the customers can see it and they decide to pay their money for this company’s product.  To sum up, every corporation should add CSR plans in their business because CSR is not only trendy but it  also shows the ethics of companies.

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Nowadays, many companies focus mostly on corporate social responsibility(CSR). From my own point, I totally agree with them for a number of reasons. First, CSR would improve your workforce because some talented employees want to dedicate for the company that care about making good impact on the community issues.. Secondly, CSR will help our companies to build a good reputation and increasingly profit. For example, a company organize a CSR plan which has many positive effects on the environment and then the customers can see it and they decide to pay their money for this company’s product.  To sum up, every corporation should add CSR plans in their business because CSR is not only trendy but it  also shows the ethics of companies.

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I agree, because each company with social responsibility will make that country more and more developed and civilized.Simply put, social responsibility can help people see your company as a positive force in society. The projects you and your team take on can help raise awareness for important causes and keep your business top of mind. Businesses that are socially responsible can also appear more attractive to investors. In my experience, investors in a business have one common goal: to have greater returns than invested funds. I view businesses that are able to manage finances while still helping their communities as accountable and transparent in their dealings.In conclusion, businesses can no longer operate with the sole aim of making profits at the expense of the environment, society, economy, consumers, and employees. Companies need to consider how they can give back to society, and this can help you attract customers and keep your best employees. Customer satisfaction and employee retention are the keys to any successful business, after all

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I totally agree with the idea that all companies should have corporate social responsibility. firstly, It helps to attract more employees and young talents because the young generation with talent is often directed to companies with CSR activities, the company can attract talent. Second, customer loyalty, for example, to attract customers and win their hearts, companies must care what customers want. Thistly, It promotes, when companies implement CSR forcing them to create and innovate to fit in with society. Fourthly, attract investors and collaborations, investors care about the company's image and loyalty, and position in the market, so CSR can help the company strengthen itself in this area so it can attract investors. To sum up, the company has a corporate social responsibility, they will have good quality employees, loyal customers, and be sustainable in this society.

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I strongly agree with the idea that companies should have corporate social responsibility. At first, it will help the company attract more employees and young talents so they will have a very abundant and quality human resource. Because young people nowadays tend to look for companies with corporate social responsibilit. Secondly, CSR will help that corporation attracts investors and collaborations because it is a good company and thinks for the society and because today's investors often focus on the environment and society. So if the company have corporate social responsibility, they will have good quality employees and big investors.

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I totally agree with this statement that All companies need to have corporate social responsibility because of serveral reasons. First, there are preserve and evolve the corporate’s cultural identity. In order to do so, there are many ways to construct. For example, many people doing charity help improve the company’s image or be able to act how staff behavior. Second, Create favorable working conditions for employees. If our’s corporate create benefits for employees, staff will be more comfortable to working. Besides, companies clearly connect with employess.  To sum up, all companies need to be socially responsible to evolve about side image of corporate to construct a brand

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I totally agree with the idea “All companies should have corporate social responsibility” for some reason. First of all, It helps in engaging customers, Building relationships and rapport with both customers and clients is obviously important within any company and having a social responsibility policy can impact this. Second, It can improve innovation and collaboration within businesses. For example, A lot of skills can be developed when taking part in any kind of CSR activity and beyond this, employees are able to learn about potential clients, develop their communication skills and improve leadership. To sum up, the companies should have corporate social responsibility.

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From my own perspective, I totally agree with the idea that companies around the world should participate in cooperate social responsibility for some reasons. First of all, companies that follow the cooperate social responsibility, or CSR, can attract many young and talented employees. In addition, some researches show that many talented graduates want to find a company that follows CSR because they can contribute to society through the company. Moreover, many CSR cooperation believes that they can have many loyal customers. For example, many successful companies worldwide such as Starbucks, Google, Coca-Cola, etc... have a lot of customers. These consumers choose their product because these cooperations are having many friendly environment products. Furthermore, many investors want to invest in CSR companies since they make lots of profit when these companies have a number of loyal customers. In conclusion, I strongly agree with the view that all of the companies should join in CSR.

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I totally agree with the idea that living in big cities is bad for our health. The first reason I agree is the effect on mental health. The prevalence of mental disorders among people living in urban areas is significantly higher than that of people in other regions, according to a meta-analysis of 20 studies conducted over the past 35 years. The cause is the population. The market always has to worry, thinking about how to keep up with the pace of life, other factors such as loneliness, the rate of real scope, social inequality. The second reason is that the urban environment is extremely important. important. Cars, motorbikes of all kinds, including the roaring technology of the engine, all the bulky ones that roam the streets, plus the greenhouse effect, the concrete effect by hundreds of high-rise buildings... all-day The night of voting for innocent CO2 gas, an association tool for the past ten years, carelessly poured into rivers. Risks to health, exposure to air pollution (including dust, No2, So2, Ozone... ) causes increased morbidity and mortality. Diseases caused by exposure to air pollution include asthma, chronic obstructive pulmonary disease, pneumonia, respiratory and cardiovascular diseases... To keep the city clean and beautiful, we should plant a lot of trees, protect water resources protection, propaganda to raise awareness of environmental protection. People live in love and openness.

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I totally agree with the way think that living in the city is bad for our health for some reasons.The first reason why I believe is that the pollution in big cities is becoming serious.For example,people living in these cities are at increased risk of lung cancer and many dangerous diseases.Another reason why city life is unfavorable is the annoying noise from vehicles.For instance,imagine what happens to human hearing when hundreds of cars honking at the same time. It will destroy your ears and make you deaf..In conclusion, I completely agree that living in big cities is bad for human health.

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Living in a city is bad for our health. Do you agree or disagree?

Topic sentence: In my opinion, I completely agree with the view that living in a big city is harmful to our health.

Main idea 1: The more time you spend in an urban environment, the more risk of developing a mental disorder

Supporting details 1: Many people spend a lot of time working and that causes lots of stress -> mental disorder

Main idea 2: Crowded in the city that makes environmental pollution like noise pollution, air pollution, water pollution.

Supporting details 2: Traffic jams because there are many vehicles -> air pollution, noise pollution.
Many industrial companies -> air pollution, water pollution.

Concluding sentence: To sum up, I strongly agree with the idea that dwelling in an urban area is not good for our health

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Nowadays, many people desire that they can move away from the city because the life there affects badly on their health. From my perspective, I completely agree with them for a number of reason. Firstly, living in the city lead our life to the loss of green atmosphere. For example, everyday hundreds of transports go side-by-side and emit a large amout of exhaust or many green spaces are replaced by the buildings. Those problems can cause many respiratory diseases. Secondly, it increase the rate of mental illness. City life is a stressful environment, people usually work for a longtime so it strongly pressures on our brain. Therefore, our body can easily face with illnesses like: depression, emotional problems or other forms of axiety and worry. To sum up, living in urban area can give us many negative effects to our health that can cause many serious diseases.

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1.  CBD – Central Business District (n) - The area of a city where retail and office activities are distributed.

2. water supply (n) - a source, means, or process of supplying water (as for a community) usually including reservoirs, tunnels, and pipelines

3. urban sprawl (v) - the spreading of urban developments (such as houses and shopping centers) on undeveloped land near a city

4. Hectic (adj) - very busy

5. Polluted (adj) - something poisoned with harmful substances

6. Traffic jam (n) - a large number of vehicles close together and unable to move or moving very slowly

7. A wide range of - many different examples of the same thing

8. Standard of living (n) - the level of comfort and welfare achieved in any particular society

9. Overcrowding (n) - a situation when a place contains too many people or things

10. Peaceful (adj) - free from disturbance, tranquil

11. Job opportunities - possibility to be employed for jobs

12. Field (n) = meadow,grassland,green

13. The pace of life - speed of lìfe, the pace of daily activity

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I agree with the idea living in a city is bad for our health because of some reason. Firstly, almost in all cities, air, noise, and environmental pollution are mainly caused by means of transport, emissions from factories, waste from industry, and daily life. For example, in recent years, the environmental pollution index in Vietnam has always been at the top of the world, especially in big cities like Hanoi and Ho Chi Minh. Secondly, the working time is long, the cost of living is high, but the city has a higher income than other areas, but the salary is not enough to meet the living needs, so it has affected people's psychology and health is seriously threatened. To sum up, living in a city will be threatened by air pollution, the environment, and long working hours.

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The topic sentence I agree with the way think that living in the city is bad for our health
Main idea 1 The first reason why I believe is that the pollution in big cities is becoming serious
supporting details 1 Air pollution is harmful to human health. Too much ozone in the air can cause breathing problems, trigger asthma, impair lung function, and guide lung diseases. SO2 gas can affect the respiratory system and tolerance, eye irritation.
Main idea 2  Living in the city leads to the loss of a green atmosphere.
supporting details 2 People live and work crowdedly in cities with emissions, high-rise buildings are increasing, making the green environment disappear.
Concluding sentence all of the above manifestations stem from the lack of awareness of people: littering in rivers, releasing wastewater into the sea, industrial emissions, moving emissions, cutting down trees,... Think about it, Every day, tons of waste are discharged into the environment, "contributing less to more" of more and more waste. 2021 is the year of the epidemic, the days of social isolation are the days when the earth is rehabilitated. The ozone layer is rapidly restored in thickness. The environment is a strong physical influence of man. MARGARET MEAD once said, “It is an undeniable fact that a small group of conscious and dedicated citizens can change the world.”

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Many people think that living in the city is bad for our health. I  agree with that opinion. The city is a densely populated place, so traveling between vehicles will create a lot of smog. For example, on large roads at rush hour, there will be a lot of traffic vehicles, leading to traffic jams, traffic jams will cause a lot of dust, noise, thus leading to traffic congestion air pollution and noise pollution. In general, I completely agree with the opinion that living in the city is bad for our health

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I totally agree with the idea that your health can be bad to living in the city because of some reason. Firstly, when living in the city you are opposed to pollution such as air, noise pollution...  Of course, the city is better than the farm or countryside in material facilities and entertainment but we are facing air pollution, noise pollution. For example emissions of the factory, car, and also in Ho Chi Minh city the amount of motorbike increase day by day. Secondly, The lifestyle in a city is too fast, a lot of the people must eat fast food that is not healthy and not clean. In addition, living in the city will be the pressure of working and money, you work too much that will affect your health and spirit leading to your health will be worse. In conclusion, living in a city is bad for our health if you were lived there, you should take care of your health and your life.

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Living in a city is bad for our health. Do you agree or disagree

1 Topic: I actually agree with the idea that human’s health will be adversely affected when living in the city.

2 Main idea 1:air pollution and water pollution

+supporting details 1: people use personal vehicles a lot, it leads to a lot of car or motorcycle emissions and emissions of factories. About water pollution, chemical waste from the factory.

3 Main idea 2: less and less greens tree

supporting details 2: Land is increasingly occupied  more in the nation by humans. Most citizens always want to concentrate on the center city, so the area that used to have many green trees , now is decreasing substantially.

4 Conclusion: Ultimately, living in a city is not good for pp’s health, but we need to improve and find methods which help our city

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I completely agree that living in the city can make your health worse due to the following reason. The first problem you have to face is air pollution. Since most of people in city have a motobike or a car, they release much of toxic gas such as CO, NO, SO, etc when active. Some of them even believed that could kill you if inhale too much. So there is no doubt that air pollution have bad effect to your heath. Another ploblem we have is about fast food. Though these fatty and maybe contain preservatives things not only not product much energy but also have many unhealthy nutríents, there still many people ready to eat them everyday. And there fast food store still grow smoothly .In VietNam, there are sixty one point five percent of students eat fast food. It have a attraction hard to resist and of course, unhealthy. To sum up, the city is morden, but there are still many things in those city are bad for you and we should avoid them as much as we can.

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I actually agree with this statement that human’s health will be extremely affected when living in the city because of several reasons. First, the incapability of pollution currently. It has some kinds of pollution, for example air pollution - because there are a lot of vehicles outside, so traffic is always stuck or dirty toxics are released from factories or maybe plastic is able to produce dioxin gas - a gas is extremely toxic for human - and having some gas straight that deviate come into our nation. Second, less and less green trees. It is affected by the main human created currently. Actually,  humans almost want to concentrate on the center city, so land and trees are increasingly occupied more in the nation by humans, so the area that used to have many green trees, now is decreasing substantially. Ultimately, Living in a city is harmful for our health. Instead of saying we should not leave our city, we need together to improve and find methods to save our city, say private; save our planet, say general.

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I completely agree that living in the city can be detrimental to your health for a variety of reasons. To begin with, when you live in a city, you are opposed to pollutants such as air pollution, noise pollution, and so on. Of sure, the city is superior to the farm or rural in terms of material amenities and amusement, but we face air and noise pollution. Emissions from factories, cars, and motorbikes, for example, are increasing day by day in Ho Chi Minh City. Second, the pace of life in a metropolis is too rapid, forcing many individuals to eat unhealthy and unsanitary fast food. Furthermore, living in the city will put you under a lot of stress in terms of employment and money, which will damage your health and mood, making your health worse. To summarize, living in a city is terrible for our health, and if you live there, you should take care of your health and your life.

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I completely agree with the idea that our health is decreased when we live in a city because of some reason. Firstly, people who must face to face with air pollution, water pollution, soil pollution every day live in a city because a model city has a lot of factories, companies, vehicles, and a high population density that is the main reason for pollution. Secondly, they live piled on top of each other in the city that means people can sell dirty food, fake, low quality for people to earn money. Another one, people living in the city is busy so they don't care about their health too much then they eat without selection. Day by day, their health is getting worse and worse. To sum up, our health is decreased when we live in a city if we don't take care of our health carefully.

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I actually agree with the idea that human’s health will be badly affected when living in the city which have air pollution and water pollution. Atmosphere in the city is polluted by many reasons like emissions from vehicles or factories, smoke and dust from construction. About water, chemical waste from the factory and it not processed yet . This was a big problem because citizen in the city will not have clean water to use in daily activities. Large buildings often need a larger area to be built, so trees need to be cut down .The trees in the city are also significantly reduced, it makes the air quality more polluted. For this reason, people do not have clean air to breath. Ultimately, living in a city is not good for pp’s health, but we need to improve and find methods which help our city

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i totally agree with the way thinking that living in a city is a one of an important problem with our health, because for several reasons. firstly, I think it is universally accepted that one of the reasons is unhealthy food. especially at the store, which has a dished use a lot of fat, less green vegetables. so if you often eat out or orders food at home, you are more likely to experience digestive problems. moreover, the lack of vitamins from green food for a long time can easily lead to overweight and other diseases. secondly, the situation of air pollution in big cities is a factor that attracts to our health. for instance, the amount of harmful emission, dust in the air from vehicles, transports run all day in the street the cause of lung cancer. in conclusion, living in cities will cause of making our health worse than.

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Living in a city is bad for our health. Do you agree or disagree?
I agree with the idea that living in big cities is bad for everyone's health. Because in the city there are the following problems. The first cause is traffic jams, which seriously affects people's health and psychology. For example, at rush hour, stopping vehicles generates a lot of smoke and toxic dust that affects breathing and causes noise pollution throughout the city. The second reason comes from factory companies - this is where a large amount of toxic substances are produced and released, which pollutes water and air. Long-term exposure will be harmful to health. For example, prolonged exposure to dirty water will damage digestion, produce many bacteria that cause intestinal diseases, hepatitis, helminths... In short, everyone should pay attention before coming here. live and work in a big city. Because of its great potential, it brings too many problems that affect our psyche, especially our health.

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Nowadays, many people believe that living in an urban area is not good for our health. From my own perspective, I strongly agree with the previous for some reasons. First of all, the city is a crowded place, so it has many problems with the environment such as air, water pollution, etc. For example, Ho Chi Minh city is the most modern city in Viet Nam, so there are many factories working day by day. For that reason, emissions in this city are often at a high level, so the air environment here is polluted. Furthermore, if you live alone in the city for too long, you can have depression. Since people who live in a big city need to earn lots of money, they will feel stressed about having as a high salary as possible. For that reason, if they don't get any encouragement from their family, they will have depression. In conclusion, I completely agree with the idea that it's harmful to our health when we live in a modern area.

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Living in a city is bad for our health. Do you agree or disagree?
We agree
Topic: I agree that living in a city is bad for our health

Main idea 1: Smoke and vehicle emission cause bad effect to our lung

Sup1:

1. IARC says particulate matter (PM) is one of the main components of air pollution classified as a group 1 carcinogen in humans.

2. Children who grow up in heavily polluted areas are likely to suffer irregular structural changes in the nasal mucosa. This can cause weakened airways, lung infections and inflammation.

Main idea 2: Electromagnetic waves cause bad effect to our brain

Sup2:

1. Author Professor Andreas Meyer-Lindenberg explains that we all know that the risk of mental illness is higher for people living in cities.

2. Leszczynski's research shows that cell phone waves can cause cell damage without heating them up

Main idea 3: City life can easily cause depression.

Sup3 :

1. RESEARCH SHOW THAT URBAN AREAS ACCOUNT FOR A HIGHER RATE OF DEPRESSION THAN IN RURAL AREAS.

2. there are many financial pressures, work, social relationships that adversely affect the spirit

Conclusion: Living in a city is bad for our health and causes several serious problems, so we should know how to balance life to protect our health

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Vương

I completely agree that living in a city is bad for our health for the following reasons. Firstly, electromagnetic waves have a bad effect on our brain. As Professor Andreas Meyer-Lindenberg's author explains, we all know that the risk of mental illness is higher for people living in cities, and Leszczynski's research shows that cell phone waves can damage the mobile phone. cells without heating them. Second, city life is prone to depression. Because living in the city, we will be negatively affected by financial, work and social relationships, so these invisible pressures will make us gradually become depressed. Finally, smoke and vehicle exhaust have an adverse effect on our lungs. According to the IARC, particulate matter (PM) is one of the main components of air pollution classified as a group 1 carcinogen in humans. On the whole, Living in a city is bad for our health and causes several serious problems, so we should know how to balance life to protect our health.

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Sim My

I agree with the idea that living in big cities is bad for everyone's health. Because in the city there are the following problems. The first cause is traffic jams, which seriously affects people's health and psychology. For example, at rush hour, stopping vehicles generates a lot of smoke and toxic dust that affects breathing and causes noise pollution throughout the city. The second reason comes from factory companies - this is where a large amount of toxic substances are produced and released, which pollutes water and air. Long-term exposure will be harmful to health. For example prolonged exposure to dirty water will damage digestion, produce many bacteria that cause intestinal diseases, hepatitis, helminths... In short, everyone should pay attention before coming here. I live and work in a big city. Because of its great potential, it brings too many problems that affect our psyche, especially our health.

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In my opinion, I agree with the idea that living in a town is harmful to your health because of some reasons below. Initially, smoking and vehicle emissions cause bad effects on our lungs. Some surveys say that living in the city has a higher percentage of people getting cancer than in the country and people living in-country have longevity. Because the pollutants such as smoke and chemicals from factories degrade the quality of life in the city. Besides, electromagnetic waves can cause bad effects on our brains. For instance, Leszczynski's research shows that cell phone waves can cause cell damage without heating them up or some surveys show that wifi waves can cause forgetfulness. On the whole, living in a city is bad for our health and causes several serious problems, so we should know how to balance life to protect our health, and you should pay attention when living in the city.

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Tài

In my vision, I believe that living in a city could be considered bad for our health. First of all, smoke from gas burners or vehicle emissions cause bad to our respiratory system. A research of IARC shows that particulate matter from combustion is the main factor which causes air pollution classified as a group 1 carcinogen in humans. Otherside, children who grow up in heavily polluted areas are likely to suffer irregular structural changes in the nasal mucosa. This can cause weakened airways, lung infections and inflammation. Secondly, electromagnetic waves from digital devices cause bad effects to our nerve system. To prove that, Professor Andreas Meyer-Lindenberg explains that we all know that the risk of mental illness is higher for people living in cities or  Leszczynski's research shows that cell phone waves can cause cell damage without heating them up. And lastly, a life in the city can easily cause depression. Because there are many financial pressures, work, social relationships that adversely affect the spirit. Some research shows that urban areas account for a higher rate of depression than in rural areas. To conclude, living in a city is bad for our health and causes several serious problems, so we should know how to balance life to protect our health.

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I completely agree that living in a city is not good for our health. First is the atmosphere of a city. We all know world’s most polluted places are the cities. Every city has air pollution, water pollution, smoke, lack of trees, which is harmful to us. Ho Chi Minh city for example, is a city filled with motorbikes, it is not hard to encounter a person with more than one motorbike there. On top of that, the trees in Ho Chi Minh city are disappearing day by day, a few years ago you can still see lines of trees in Ton Duc Thang street, but they were cut down lately. Not only the atmosphere, the habits of people living in a city are also bad for our health. They have a bad life-style, they smoke and eat a lot of fast food. You may come across a rural person in the city and it is very easy to realize that person because how healthier he or she looks compare to an urban person. In summary, living in a city is definitely bad for our health. However, I still enjoy living in Sai Gon and I hope one day, people will find a solution for the health problems in cities all over the world.

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It is perceived by many that metropolitan cities are ominous for our well-being as opposed to living in rural areas. While the former offers a hectic lifestyle and has much more pollution, the latter grants a tranquil and favorable environment for our physical and psychological benefits. I completely agree with this viewpoint for several reasons Firstly, almost all big cities have an intolerable level of air, sound and environmental pollutions primarily due to the increasing number of vehicles, carbon emission, wastages of industries, metro facilities, and amenities for a modern lifestyle. On top of that, the population density in big cities is much higher, and it creates an unhealthy living standard in many parts. Secondly, living costs in big cities are high. Although people earn higher in metro areas, their salaries, oftentimes, do not meet their needs and expectations, which adversely impact their psychology. Long working hours combined with severe traffic jams consume their time and they have little time left to spend with their families. All of the above manifestations stem from the lack of awareness of people: littering in rivers, releasing wastewater into the sea, industrial emissions, moving emissions, cutting down trees,... Think about it, Every day, tons of waste are discharged into the environment, "contributing less to more" of more and more waste. 2021 is the year of the epidemic, the days of social isolation are the days when the earth is rehabilitated. The ozone layer is rapidly restored in thickness. The environment is a strong physical influence of man. MARGARET MEAD once said, “It is an undeniable fact that a small group of conscious and dedicated citizens can change the world.”

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I actually agree with the opinion that living in downtowns is unhealthy because of following reasons. First of all, economic center of a country is city where have a dense population. Leading to a hustle and bustle as well as pressured living environment. With this living condition, city dwellers tend to feel anxious and depressed.  For example, many people go there to find their job because of abundant job opportunities. It also make a high rate unemployed in the downtown so they inevitably feel stress and  unhappy. Second, environment pollution is a prevalent status in many city. Especially, in industrial zone and factory areas have a huge emission of carbon dioxide and toxic fumes in the air and river. Long-term exposure to them can seriously affect to body such as respiratory or cardiovascular system. Based on these aforementioned reasons, I believe that living in a big city is not a good choice in term of the health.

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I completely agree that living in a city is bad for our health for the following reasons. Firstly, electromagnetic waves have a bad effect on our brain. As Professor Andreas Meyer-Lindenberg's author explains, we all know that the risk of mental illness is higher for people living in cities, and Leszczynski's research shows that cell phone waves can damage the mobile phone. cells without heating them. Second, city life is prone to depression. Because living in the city, we will be negatively affected by financial, work and social relationships, so these invisible pressures will make us gradually become depressed. Finally, smoke and vehicle exhaust have an adverse effect on our lungs. According to the IARC, particulate matter (PM) is one of the main components of air pollution classified as a group 1 carcinogen in humans. On the whole, Living in a city is bad for our health and causes several serious problems, so we should know how to balance life to protect our health.

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I totally agree that inhabiting large cities is harmful to human’s health. The government should allocate more resources to improving public transport, infrastructure for better quality of life. The first reason for my belief is that the pollution in large cities is worsening. Firstly, the number of private vehicles skyrocketed, causing air pollution. Air degradation stems from the carbon footprint from thousands of cars, motorbikes that run on the road every day, which have a serious impact on people’s respiratory systems. Secondly, a myriad of transport facilities also are the main reason for noise pollution. Infrastructure in some cities doesn’t adapt with the growth in the number of vehicles, creating traffic jams. For example, imagine what happens with a human's hearing when a hundred cars sound the horn at the same time. It will devastate your ear and make you become deaf. Another reason for my belief is that living in big cities not only has a bleak impact on a human's physical constitution but it also causes serious mental health problems. Life in urban areas is too fast, people no longer have the opportunity to spend their time relaxing or family, causing a modern epidemic called hurry sickness, leading to rudeness, short tempered- behavior and even violence. In addition, research shows that many people living in major cities such as Hanoi, Ho Chi Minh City are having much more stress than people in rural areas because they have to worry about a multitude of problems such as jobs, housing, and money.

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I completely agree with the idea that living in the city is not good for our health. Firstly, when we live in the city we hardly have a fresh air because there are too many means of transport used by people in a day which makes the atmosphere in the city always a lot of smoke and dust from vehicle. Therefore, we are prone to respiratory diseases when we have to breathe in an atmosphere with too much dust and pollution. Secondly, if you live a busy city like Ho Chi Minh, you barely have enough time to prepare a healthy meal for yourself and that will lead to consuming too much fast food and junk food, which is one of the problems causing diseases and ill ness. In summary, everything has two sides, although living in the city affects out health, in return we enjoy better health services and education than in the countryside. I hope one day the city's atmosphere will get better.

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I completely agree with this opinion that living in the city can be harmful for our health because of some reasons. Firstly, the increase in air pollution in the city is aggravated. The amount of motorbikes in VietNam has increased day by day. In a crowded city, so the number of vehicles is a lot, this thing pollutes the air and also makes noise pollution.Moreover, the factory in the industrial area near the city also pollutes the air. Secondly, the food in the city can be harmful to our life. There are many fast food stores in the city, people in the city like them because fast food stores are very convenient and people in the city are too busy to cook. However, fast foods are not good for our health because They are high in cholesterol.To sum up, living in the city can be harmful for our health.

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I completely agree with the idea that living in the city can be detrimental to your health because of reasons. Firstly, It is impossible not to talk about Air pollution, Emission of the factories and cars. According to statistics, in Ho Chi Minh City, the number of car and motorbikes is nearly 8 million, of which the number of vehicles used for more than 10 years accounts for 67.89%. Secondly, the pace of life of people in the city is very fast, they cannot avoid fast food that is harmful to health. The Ministry of Health said fast food is high in cholesterol, but high levels of cholesterol can increase your risk of heart disease. To sum up, Our health suffers as a result of living in a city.

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Nowadays, there are many cities that are thriving and the percentage of people living long is decreasing. Therefore, there are some people who have the opinion that living in the city will be harmful to our health. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the view that living in a big city is harmful to our health because of the following reasons. Firstly, the crowding in the city will cause environmental pollution such as: water, air, noise... For example, Bien Hoa is currently a city with the number of industrial parks and factories in the top of Vietnam, that's why the air in Bien Hoa is full of smog and the weather is becoming hotter and hotter. Secondly, if you live in the city then you will need a lot of money to make a living. So you will have to bear a great pressure of money and have to work a lot, which in turn will cause stress, even depression or mental illness. From the reasons I stated above, I completely agree that living in the city is unhealthy to us.