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Work in groups of 6

Each groups will receive three writings

Use the “Feedback form” to give comments on your friends’ writing

Post your comments on the padlet

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Work individually

5 minutes

Look at the notices

Go to padlet

Type all the keywords that you can find in each notice

Submit your answer on padlet

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Is this a paragraph?

Does he/she describe all three pictures?

Does the writing have the correct number of words (from 35 to 50 words)?

Are there any grammar or spelling mistakes? (Eg: past tenses, plural and singular nouns, etc)

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Jane
Finished with that book
My brother needs it
School project
Louise

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two pizzas
the same time
a third one for free
Mon - Fri

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This week
don't use the car to get to school
Coming by foot
Doesn't take too much time

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The museum will be open to children over 12 years old and adults

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Picnic area,no ball games,use the other side.

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finished with that book
my brother meed it

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Two pizzas at the same time
Give a third one
Free
Mon - Fri only

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Don't use car to get to school
Coming on foot
Doesn't take much time
This week

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Museum open from 12
Children must be with adult

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Key works : Picnic area, no ball games , use the other side of park.

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finished the book
my brother needs it
school project

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open from 12 years old
Children have to go with an adult

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Picnic area
no ball games
use the other side

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is Writing a good work jim and mary go to the park and see bags and purses and they give it to the people who lost it

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1. This writing is a paragrah
2. This writing is also describe about three picture
3. This paragraph have too much words
4.

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Are there any grammar or spelling mistakes? (Eg: past tenses, plural and singular nouns, etc)

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Is this a paragraph? 1 . Yes
Does he/she describe all three pictures? Yes
Does the writing have the correct number of words (from 35 to 50 words)? Yes

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Finished with that book
My brother needs it
School project

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Open from 12
Children must be with an adult

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Picnic area
No ball games here
Use the other side

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Writing 3.
1.This writing about park
2.

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Writing 2
- This is not a paragraph
- He/she describe all three pictures
- The writing have the correct number of words
- Grammar or spelling mistakes: There is girl and a boy; playing

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1. Yes
2. Yes
3. Yes
4. Yes

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Is this a paragraph? yes

Does he/she describe all three pictures?

Does the writing have the correct number of words (from 35 to 50 words)? yes

Are there any grammar or spelling mistakes? yes

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finished that book, my brother need it

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Museum open from 12 and children have to with an adult.

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Picnic area , no ball game here , use the side of the park

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This is a paragraph

She and he describe all three pictures

No because the writing has 56 words

Many he and she

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writing 3
1. this writing about a paragraph
2.she describe 3 picture

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Có Diệu Linh là con thấy lúc con làm thì bạn ấy có mở mic còn những người khác thì lúc con lmaf thì chả nói gì

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Có Diệu Linh là con thấy lúc con làm thì bạn ấy có mở mic còn những người khác thì lúc con lmaf thì chả nói gì

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finished with that book , my brother needs it , school project

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football class will be teach tomorrowbecause teacher can't teach today

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open from 12
children must be with an adult

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Key word:
-Picnic area
-No ball games
-Use the other side of the park

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finished with that book
my brother meed it

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mr Hall can't teach today , football class will be in tomorow

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open from 12 and children have to with an adult.

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Picnic area
No ball games here
Use the other side

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This afternoon, football class , will be tomorow instead , Mr Hall is away today

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picnic area,no ball game,use other side

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Football class will be tomorrow beause Mr Hall can't teach today.

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picnic area
no ball games here
use the other side

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Football class, start tomorrow ,Mr Hall is away today

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The football is they will be in they tomorrow yourr in Mr hall is they everyday

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football class be start tomorrow Mr Hall cant teach today

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The football class will be tomorrow because MR hall cant teach today

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football class be start tomorrow
Mr Hall can't teach today.