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it was the first day of school the new girl looked scared. mary went over to help her. she showed her to the right classroom. They ate lunch together and became friends

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it was a new year and the new girl looked scared .mary people went to help mary showed her the rightr was to the class.they ate lunch together and became good frieds

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It was the first day of school the new girl looked scared.Mary went over to help her. She showed her to the right classroom.They ate lunch together and became friends.

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It was the first day of school, the girl looked scared. Mary went to over to help her. She showed her to the right classroom.They ate lunch together and became friends.

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It was the first day of school, The new girl look scared. Mary went over to help her. showed her to the right classroom. they ate lunch together and become friends

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It was the first day of school, the new girl looked scared. Mary went over to help her. She showed her to the right classroom. They ate lunch together and became friends.

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It was the first day of school the new girl looked scared. Mary went over to help her. She showed her  to the right classroom. They ate lunch together and became friends.

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it  needs a  cap  and  a pirid

(Rewrite the paragraph correctly. Mrs. Sainz)

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It was the first day of school. The new girl looked scared. Mary went over to help her. She showed her to the right classroom. They ate lunch together and became friends.

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It was the first day of school the new girl looked scared.Mary went over to help her. She showed her to the right classroom. They ate  lunch together and  became friends.

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it was the first day of school the new girl looked scared. mary went over to help her.went over to help her. she showed her to the right classroom. they are lunch together and became friends.

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It was the first day of school the new girl looked scared. Mary went over to help her. She showed her to the right classroom. They ate lunch together and became friends.

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It was the first day of  school, the new girl looked scared. Mary went over to her. She showed her to the right classroom. They ate lunch together and became best friends.

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It was the first day of school, the
new girl looked scared. Mary
went over to help her. She
showed her to the classroom.
They ate lunch together and
became friends.

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It was the first day of school,the new girl was scared. Mary went over to help her. She showed  her to the right classroom. They ate lunch together and become friends

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It was the fist day of school the new girl looked scared.Mare went over to help her.she showed her to the right classroom. they ate lunch together and become friends.