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How to Participate in the Feedback Circle

1. Post Your Draft

Share your procedure draft as a document attachment

Give your post a clear title that describes your procedure

In the description, mention any specific areas where you’d like feedback

2. Provide Feedback

Comment on at least 1 classmates’ procedures

Focus your feedback on:

Clarity of steps

Level of detail

Use of transition words

Completeness of instructions

Be specific and constructive in your suggestions (5marks )

Start with a positive comment before suggesting improvements (5 marks )

Remember: Good feedback helps your peers improve their writing!

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𝑮𝒓𝒐𝒖𝒑 𝟐𝑩(𝑮𝒐𝒐𝒈𝒍𝒆 𝒅𝒐𝒄𝒔)

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𝑮𝒓𝒐𝒖𝒑 𝟐𝑩(𝑮𝒐𝒐𝒈𝒍𝒆 𝒅𝒐𝒄𝒔)

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/17PKk30kjvuaaO9FezXF1boaQ01PMHf4O1Rw9MzNm9DY/edit?usp=sharing

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group 3a(google does) from eshal and mehr

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group 3a(google does) from eshal and mehr

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https://docs.google.com/drawings/d/1m4RRQ-zbmeO4hqkqhGN5ZIKYSimKZPCbpEFiQulLWEQ/edit?usp=sharing

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Maryam, Izma, Fatima, Arooj, Aima

LINK

https://docs.google.com/document/d/17dsZBTUoowdSpy1i24cAF4edp49SENAUrF8P2MLyQIw/edit?usp=sharing

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https://docs.google.com/drawings/d/1lRBdMlopsJQjeMu8YTZeiyWGe6z40NjeSDRuAySKBG8/edit?usp=sharing

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eshaal zahid - Procedure writing  Group 3 

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Kainaat Ashfaq, Addan Qazi, Mahnoor Rashid, Aaleen Ammar

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Addan Qazi - Post it here! Your Procedure Writing .

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Gummy Bears How To make Gummy Bears How To Make

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Nabeeha, Alizeh, Parizay, Mahum, Umaima.

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nabeeha khan - Post it here! Your Procedure Writing .

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Fettuccine Alfredo Chefs; Plate pioneers