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Excellent job !

Keep up the great work !

Way to go !

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1. Great reasoning ~ way to show your work! 2. Way to go ~ I like the use of theorems and postulates to support work! 3. Awesome ~ Your calculations were spot on!!

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1. You did an excellent job of getting your ideas written down on paper. Please consider using a graphic organizer to structure your writing.

2. Nice work on your comments. Please review your work to make sure that you have met the minimum word length requirement.

3. Make sure to remember to review your work!

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awesome job

you got it with a high five

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1. Great job demonstrating and citing your evidence.

2. I like how you added your analysis on the topic, make sure to include your evidence also.

3. It made great connections between the claim and the evidence you cited.

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Great way to show your work

Keep the good work up

Always begin with the end in mind

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1. You have created a great problem for your character. What events would you create for your character to solve their problem?

2. Great job of helping the reader create or visualize what you wrote.

3. What words would you consider to improve the style or intensity of your thoughts for the reader?

4. You have a good start of beginning, middle and end of your writing. What words could you add to clearly identify the beginning, middle and ending?

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1 - Your vocabulary is impressive. Think of ways to make your pronunciation clearer next time

2 - How can you express yourself if you don't know the word in Spanish? Think about other means you could use to make yourself understood.

3 -Excellent use of language. How could you talk around the word you didn't know

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Great work.

Excellent Job.

Nice to see your improvement.

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Please elaborate on this point. Be specific.

Include additional resources to support this thought.

Great job using and citing your sources here!

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Nice work

include more insights for the clarity of concept

Excellent work

Impressive work

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1. You've done a great job with your claim! Make sure you explain how your evidence helps prove your claim.

2. Your answer looks good! Make sure you use full sentences in your answer with correct grammar. Please make corrections to your grammar and resubmit it.

3. Remember, you need to do more than just answer the question. You need to give evidence why your answer is correct.

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1.) You have a clear claim, but what observations from the lab support the claim? That would be your evidence.

2.) You've provided clear evidence, but haven't clearly explained how that evidence supports your claim. Reasoning is the explanation that connects the claim and the evidence.

3.) You've provided clear evidence and started with reasoning. However, you need to more fully explain what the evidence means about your claim.

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Bravo!

You’re on the right track!❤️

Perfect!

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1- Your analysis was thorough and showed extensive research

2- Your answer started strong but was lacking detail and explanation

3- Don't forget to cite your sources

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1. Great exercise! How can this help improve your cardiovascular fitness?

2. Great start, can you give me more details such as proper form and safety concerns?

3. This is great information. I cant wait to see you put this into action!

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1. Great job on your essay! You're effectively developing your ideas with clarity. However, try incorporating more advanced vocabulary to enhance your expression.

2. Remember to include transition words or connectors to improve the flow and coherence of your writing.

3. Pay close attention to your punctuation and capitalization—this will ensure your work is polished and professional. Keep up the good work!

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You have a great topic sentence but you need to include more details along with your explanation.

Be sure to cite your evidence.

Please proofread to check for mistakes and resubmit.

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1. Very clear and concise instructions in your lab procedure, keep up the great work!

2. Remember when giving evidence to support your claim, use actual data that was collected during our lab.

3. Can you think of ways to improve the lab if it were to be repeated in the future? Maybe a way to increase the accuracy during data collection?

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1. This is a great start!

2. This is a great piece of evidence, but don't forget to format it properly. Besure to include your quotation marks and your parenthetical citation.

3. Excellent work! I can see how you applied the feedback from your rough draft to your final submission!

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1. I love this idea! Can you add at least 1 more detail/example?

2. Tell more more about the "why" in this idea

3. Refer to the rubric to improve this paragraph

4. Pls add a transition word

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*** The structure of your work was well-organized, making it easy to understand your main points.

** While your assessment was strong, there are a few areas where you could improve, such as---

* I recommend reviewing the materials on X topic to enhance your understanding.

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1. Nice work...you included some good details!

2. Your response indicates you might need more explaining on this concept. Let's meet to go over this again.

3. Find a partner with an opposing view and discuss your claims. Were you able to sway them to your point of view?

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1. Thank you for showing each step! You successfully told a story on the page from the beginning until the final answer.

2. Reminder to keep an eye on the details. Negatives signs shouldn't simply appear/disappear

3. Please review the video on graphing exponential equations in Module 4 in Canvas.

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1. I see you are demonstrating your understanding of Google Docs shortcuts.

2. Your paragraph is formatted correctly with correct spelling and punctuation. Your font is readable.

3. Your illustration for your avatar is colorful and representative of your learning goal.

(Literacy-Technology-Media Class)

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1- Make sure you review your grammar and orthography before submitting your work.

2- Review the corrections and use a different color pencil or marker to add new ideas or to make corrections.

3- When solving a word problem follow the steps to solve a problem: List the known, and unknow, highlight the important information, write down the equations, substitute your data, solve for the unknown and check the units.

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1. Great Topic Sentence!

2. Please cite the quote/statistic in this paragraph.

3. Interesting idea! Very creative thought!

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Great effort on this assignment! I can see how much thought you put into it. Keep up the good work!

Nice job! Your work shows a clear understanding of the topic. Keep it up! Way to go!

I appreciate your creativity in this project. It really stands out! Continue to shine

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1. The story has a great introduction. Consider what other details you could provide - what do you see, smell, hear, feel, etc??

2. Your main character is very engaging. Now let's think about what you could add to the character to give her further depth. What could you share about her past or her dreams?

3. This story is missing a climax. Think about what you could add to give more excitement to this story. What is the issue they are trying to overcome?