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Not very creative. Very boring slides.

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too much writing, not enough visual data/design

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Basic Template

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way to much writing and data

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Too much writing on the first slide, very plain and not very appealing

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Too much writing on the first slide, very plain and not very appealing

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Too many words, specifically on second slide

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Too many words, specifically on second slide

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Not many graphs or images

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I don't like how there's so much information about New Paltz history instead of New Paltz now

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Not enough photographs or maps.

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Used a stretched image

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the pictures were bad quality and not fun and appealing

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The booklet is very vague and doesn't truly try to compel a small business owner to come to New Paltz. It also dives to deep into the history of New Paltz.

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They didnt have any data or sources to support their statements

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Not much design, looks boring and too many words in certain slides. Looks like no effort was put into it

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The information on businesses is too limited and doesn't have sufficient evidence to back it up

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Bullet Points were used

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Talks mostly about New Platz history rather than real time stats and information

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didn't really have bio that talk about who you are  and their the design were boring 

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didn't really have bio that talk about who you are  and their the design were boring 

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Some slides have too much text and the more interesting part (or what would catch your eyes), the pictures, are very small 

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Some slides have too much text and the more interesting part (or what would catch your eyes), the pictures, are very small 

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Feels like it's rambling more than anything

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it was visually unappealing (only a basic template was used and the pictures used did not add any excitement)

the information that was presented was either irrelevant to the prospect of opening a business, or did not go into the specifics of what makes New Paltz a good place to start a business

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It lacked character and had a lot of writing. Not many photos and the pages were very blank. It didn't have perfectional language in it. It felt like it was made by high schoolers rather than college students.

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It's not Persuasive at all