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It was a scorching hot day. The sun shone like a brilliant disc in the sky. "Help!" shouted Mother. She just came back from the grocery store and saw her children watching television programme. She was very tired from carrying all the groceries. When she entered the house, she was walking unsteadily and panting heavily. It looked like she was about collapse.

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It was a scorching hot day. Mother just came back from the groceries store.Beats of sweat trickled down Mother's  face as she went to the bed  to rest.

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The sun shone brightly as mother dragged her feet home. She was breathing heavily as she was very tired. She was as pale as a ghost. She opened the door and walked unsteadily into the house. ''Help me carry the groceries,"  she murmured weakly.

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About a year ago, something terrible happened when mother came home from the grocery store. Mother was perspiring because the weather was unforgiving. The sun shone mercilessly across the great blue sky. Mother returned home from the supermarket, staggering.
She walked into our apartment and felt like collapsing. Suddenly, she collapsed to the floor.

''Ding dong!" Jane and Peter just returned from school.

''Ahhhh'' both of them screamed. They did not know what to do so they decided to call their neighbour.

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It was a very warm and hot day and the sun was shining brightly at Mother. She knocked on the door and called her children to open the door.

"Bang bang bang!" she knocked louder but no one helped her. She screamed at her children and then collapsed.

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It was a scorching hot day,  the sun shone like a sparkling disc in the clear blue sky. After buying the groceries, she entered her house unsteadily.When her children Jane and Peter saw Mother, Peter took Mother's groceries and Jane brought Mother to her bed and asked her if she wants some water. Mother nodded her head.Jane

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It was a scorching hot day at the zoo. Emily and Eric planned to spend the entire day there. While they were driving to the zoo, their mother called them and asked them if they could return home to help with the chores as she was sick .

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It was one scorching hot day. The sun shone like a  brilliant disc in the sky.''Bring.......'' the door bell rang.Mother was very very weak and was breathing heavily and Mother was shocked as Peter and Jane were playing video games while eating potato chips. Mother came back from the noisy and crowded market stores. As Mother  entered the kitchen she was walking unsteadily as if she was ill.

Jane saw  Mother walking unsteadily and went to the room to take the thermometer to check Mother's  tempreture .As to Jane's surprise Mother was sick.Jane took  her Mother to her bedroom to rest.

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It was a scorching hot day . The sun shone like a brilliant disk in the sky.Mother came back home from the supermarket carrying heavy things.As it was a hot day,mother had giddy spells and was breathing heavily.Her face was as pale as a ghost.CHILDREN,COME AND HELP ME!she shouted in a weak voice.Jane and Peter sprang into action.They helped  her to  bring the groceries to the kitchen.
They fed her some medicine  and she went to rest.The children took over the house chores . When their mom woke up, she appreciated the effort

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One scorching hot day, the sun shone like a brilliant disc in the sky.
Mother went out to buy groceries at the super market. When she came home she unsteadily walked into the house and fell ill .Jane and Peter saw her walking//

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“Rrrringgggg！”the  alarm clock rang.⏰Mother  went to the toilet to brush her teeth,wash her face and change her clothes.🙌.She carried her bag💼 and went to  the Supermarket to buy some vegetable and fruits  .🥗
On her way home 🏡，the  sun shone like a brilliant disc⛅in the sky.☁

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Ring! It was a super scorching hot day. Mother was as pale as a ghost and looked super exhausted as she just came back from the grocery store. Jane scooted to mother and help her into the master bedroom.

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''Ugh, so heavy!" Mother cried.
Jane and Peter were playing video games and did not realize that Mother came back home unsteadily. when they saw Mother,  they rushed to help her carry the groceries .

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It was a scorching day when Mother came back from the grocery store.  Ding dong! The door bell rang. Jane and Peter opened the door and saw that their mother was about to faint. Mother walked  unsteadily into the house.

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A great job done by you!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Your work is flashback and setting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Good job!!!!

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Your work is great! Anyway, you could make your story longer!

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You started with weather keep it up!

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GOOD STORY BUT TOO SHORT.

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GOOD STORY BUT TOO S
GOOD STORY BUT TOO SHORT.

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Karis, Kevann and Rosalind
One scorching hot da
One scorching hot day, the sun shone like a brilliant disc in the sky.
Mother went out to buy groceries at the super market. When she came home she unsteadily walke into the house.

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Yi Cheng, Valerie and Gregory
😅 The helpful children😅
     😅 The helpful children😅
“Rrrringgggg！”the  alarm clock rang.⏰Mother  went to the toilet to brush her teeth,wash her face and change her clothes.🙌.She carried her bag💼 and went to  the Supermarket to buy some vegetable and fruits  .🥗
    On her way home 🏡，the
  

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Zong Hao, Kai Ren and Rosalind
The sun shone bright
The sun shone brightly as mother dragged her feet home. She was breathing heavily as she was very tired. She was as pale as a ghost. She opened the door and walked unsteadily into the house. ''Help me carry the groceries."  she said weakly.

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It was a scorching h
It was a scorching hot day . The sun shone like a brilliant disk in the sky.Mother came back home from the supermarket carrying heavy things.As it was a hot day,mother had giddy spells and was breathing heavily.Her face was as pale as a ghost.CHILDREN,COME AND HELP ME!she shouted in a weak voice.Jane and Peter sprang into action.They helped  her to  bring the groceries to the kitchen.
They fed her some medicine  and she went to rest.


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We think that you used flashback great jo

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Your work is fantastic!!! I guess your group put in a lot of effort.

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Good job using Flashback , Sound ,Dialogue and Thank you for commenting our work!!!!!

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We like what you wrote and your emojis!!! 😊

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picture for the writting.

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One humid morning when mother went to the grocery store, Mother had a very bad giddy spells. "DING DONG!" Mother rang the door bell. Jane and Peter quickly opened the door and mother said "I have giddy spells, can you carry my things grocery items? Their very heavy." Jane and Peter quickly got the grocery items and brought it to the living room.

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At 15 Years old, I Was Told I Had 6 Months to Live