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revision is when you change  words
editing is when correct punctuations and  cap

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For Revision you change the word .
For Editing you fix the words

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Revising is changing words.
Editing is capitals and punctuation.

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Editing is when you cheek if you have things like spaces and puncuation. Revision is when you change things.

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.go through and make your story more interesting
.take out a word and make it more interesting.

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Editing: Ware you put capitals and punctuation.
Revising:Ware you change word and make the story more interesting.

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Revising is when you change a word

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To revise is to change or remove words that don't make sense in your writing.
To edit is to add things in your writing.

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One example of editing is putting in a period. One example revising is taking out a word and exchanging it for a new one.

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Revising is when you replace or add  a sentence or word to make your story better. Editing is when you take out words or use capitals or punctuation.

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Revising is fixing a word and editing is

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Revising is changing your story and editing is fixing the story like putting capitals and punctuation.

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Revising is when you change words.
Editing is when you put capitals and punctuation.

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Revising Changing words in a story.
Example:  Us went to the market, instead of this, do: We went to the market

Editing is doing punctuation.
Example:  I looked at the birds, instead of looked, you can use gazed or glared.

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One example of editing is changing the words. And make it better like don't say good say awesome.

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Revising: Revising is that you chang words your story
Editing: Editing is when you check things like checking capittles.

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Revise is when you make your story more interesting.
Edit is when you put punctuation and capitals in your story.

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One example of  revising is to make your story better One example of editing is to watch for misplaced punctuation and capitals and correct words.

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one example of revision is when

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One example or revising is fixing word to make them better. One example of editing is using pincushion

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Revision: Revision is when you change out words, add words, and take away words.
Editing:  Editing is used with punctuation.