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"Go go go go go, rebels on a roll" - YunG sLAp

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yuh

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Lame

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-Charles Elwood Yeager

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Good use of vocabulary. I like the way the quotes fit into your sentences.

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Just remember to pull back evenly on the throttle so your roundout will be nice and smooth.

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Great job explaining your thesis and how you will expand on it!

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Good Job, bro.

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Nice job with your thesis. It ties in the body paragraphs well.

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This essay is very good, however I feel you could better organize your thoughts in the first paragraph.

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Good ordering of the sentences. The paragraph flows together and transitions well throughout the writing.

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good grammar, sentences flow well.

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You almost killed us there. Some people aren't meant to fly.

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Good hook sentence . It makes me want to read the rest of your essay.

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Your introductory paragraph is very nice! It flows nicely and rolls off of the tongue.  The spelling could use a little bit of work but everything else looks great.

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That was a good essay

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I think Miley Cyrus and Shawn Mendes had an incredible performance at the Grammy's. It was very entertaining.

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I have great time watching movies in my free time.

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The hook makes me want to read more and there are no punctuation errors

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The thesis is confusing and does not focus on the whole essay.

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You put together a clean and concise thesis. It has a good flow and overall idea.

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Great thesis, good job talking about the topic

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too many run on sentences, needs better punctuation.

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Your footwork on that goal shows that all of your hard work is paying off

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Your topic sentence is great but could be more specific regarding the 3rd point

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Your topic sentence is great but could be more specific regarding the 3rd point

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Your hook is very strong. It ties into the thesis very well. Keep up the good work!

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good grammer and sentence structure

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Your paragraph flows very well, but make sure you check for run on sentences

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Conclusion was excessively concise and too wordy to understand.

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Interesting topic and good thesis

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Great job!

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Great title!

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this story is good.

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Sentence needs to flow better

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You support your concrete sentences very well!

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Your writing is very stinky. Write better you stinky writer.

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Thank You Dawg that was a very good read

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I think ur essay sucked.

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The Toyota Prius is the worst car ever made and looks like a jelly bean.

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You wrote in several different tenses

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This is poorly made looks like no effort at all

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Great thesis, can't wait to see how the final essay turns out!

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Your paragraph is really bad and I think you should just start from scratch

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Dope essay

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good hook I almost want to read the rest of your essay.

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Your essay looks good

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i think that your essay was very well written based upon multiple views of characters ive never seen before

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good sentence structure and grmmmer

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This paragraph is really up dog

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your writing is okay

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Horrible essay.

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this paragraph unnecessary

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Your thesis statement wasn't great.

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Thats a bad paragraph

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sentece does not flow with the essay and does not follow tense throughout the essay