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Our group liked how this story began in a mysterious way with a 'family' ghost. We thought that this would get the reader curious and make them read more.

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Our group loved how _________ made the reader ...

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Our group thought that the use of guided imagery was...

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Our group thought that the use of _______ was ok...

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Our group didn't like this beginning: the quote was a bit cliche and didn't make us interested in knowing more.

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began in a mysterious way with a 'family' ghost. We thought that this would get the reader curious and make them read more.
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Entry 2
Our group loved how _________ made the reader ...
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Entry 1
Our group thought that the use of guided imagery was...
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Entry 3
Our group thought that the use of _______ was ok...
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Entry 4
Our group didn't like this beginning: the quote was a bit cliche and didn't make us interested in knowing more.
 
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Our group like  how this story began with  a bold opinion . As it clearly shows what the author is trying to say.

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we thought that the paragraph was really descriptive as it used show not tell describing the character that kevin drew.

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Entry form4: we like this as the introduction is short and sweet.

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Entry form4: we like this as the introduction is short and sweet.

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Our group liked how the author described the action of the characters and how the author left the first paragraph on a cliffhanger so that the reader will be curious and want to read more.

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Our group liked story beginning number 2

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Entry form 3: We like this because it is a simple starting yet descriptive and also it is interesting, making us curious and want to find out more about what will happen next.

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The introduction is short but eye catching and unique as it starts with a quote/speech by someone .
usually the quote or a speech is in the middle or end of a story. Not at the introduction.

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our group liked the first story beginning that was taken from Or else the lightning God and other stories by Catherine Lim.

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entry 1:We like the vivid words as it draws our attention and it draws us into the story.

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entry 1:We like the vivid words as it draws our attention and it draws us into the story.

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Entry form 2:  We liked how the writer kept in suspense why the envelope came a day earlier and why couldn't a small card fit into the letterbox. What was in the envelope?

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This entry makes us want to find out what happens next more than the other entries. It is also very interesting. It makes the reader want to know what is in the envelope

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The intro is mysterious and makes the reader wonder as to what the envelope in for and will thus make the reader read on.

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Our group liked entry number 2 the best. It descriptive and interesting

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Our group liked entry number 2 the best. It descriptive and interesting

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we liked how the writer used alot of descriptive words and even used the show not tell technique to potray out what was happening

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We didn't like this as much as the starting of the story: description of the drawing was honestly boring. But the word 'OUCH' in caps caught our attention. Let's just say that the start was boring but the end wasn't.

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We like it because its the most interesting and the entry is short and simple but has a lot of meaning and also there are the use of metaphors.

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We like it because its the most interesting and the entry is short and simple but has a lot of meaning and also there are the use of metaphors.

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entry 1: It was very descriptive and had many vivid adjectives

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entry 1: It was very descriptive and had many vivid adjectives

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Our group liked how the story started off with a family ghost. This made the introduction more mysterious.

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We like how the author said what the character did

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this beginning of this story makes us want to continue reading the story.

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entry 4: It was short but interesting and had a deep meaning

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entry 4: It was short but interesting and had a deep meaning

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The introduction is unique and interesting as it starts with a description of a person. The introduction of the story also tells the reader what type of person he/she was and what he would usually do at times.

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We like it as it is unique and different from the others.

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Our group loved the suspense as it makes the writer be interested in it

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entry 3: It was logical but not eye-catching

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entry 3: It was logical but not eye-catching

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Our group liked how the author started the story informally. The author described his father's actions vividly.

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Entry 2:There are many descriptive adjectives that makes the story very interesting and engaging with the reader

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Entry 2:There are many descriptive adjectives that makes the story very interesting and engaging with the reader

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its simple n short