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Ultimately, technology is developed by people to help improve quality of human life and all of us are using technological advances in many different ways. Technology is very much a part of modern life. Many people see technology as a force that has escaped from human control. Others feel that technology has improved the quality of life.
Technology has become a part of our lives. The issue of decide if this part is or not good for life is a controversial one. Many believe that contribution technology has made to modern life improve the quality of life in different aspects. Others believe that technology is out of human control and they see adverse effects in modern life. After careful analysis of different fields such as daily life, medicine, and education, many have think that contribution technology has made to modern life has been really positive and help to improve the quality of human lives.
Thanks to advances in technology, many diseases that before was the cause of massive death, now is a past true, with the advances in technology, scientific and doctors find different vaccines to help people be healthier. The medical equipment's advances help process such as surgery in a way that was never possible before. Nowadays, it is routine to get a heart replacement, which in the past such situations was simply impossible. Most importantly, we can see how scientific are in the process of looking for the solution to current diseases, and this will be possible, with the use of advanced medical technology.
We all see how the advances in technology help students in their learning. For instance, the use of projectors and video conferences help in important amount in the process of learning; by using these approaches, different kinds of students' intelligence can be addressed. Computers are another example of contribution that technology made to educational field. The use of well equipped computer lab is truly helpful for students because they have the chance to learn computer skills that are very important in almost all the work environments. Nowadays, teachers can find information they can use in their daily lessons. For instance, in a math class, teachers can use updated statistical information finding in computers (by just a click), and they can infuse these information into a lesson, making the lesson related with real life situations for students.

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Technology is very much a part of modern life. Many people see technology as a force that has escaped from human control. Others feel that technology has improved the quality of life. Do you think that the contribution technology has made to modern life has been positive or negative? State your position on this issue and support it with appropriate examples.

Technology has become a part of our lives. The issue of decide if this part is or not good for life is a controversial one. Many believe that contribution technology has made to modern life improve the quality of life in different aspects. Others believe that technology is out of human control and they see adverse effects in modern life. After careful analysis of different fields such as daily life, medicine, and education, I feel that contribution technology has made to modern life has been really positive and help to improve the quality of human lives.

The first reason for me to believe contribution technology made to modern life is just the daily life to unprecedented levels. Houses' security systems, for example, connected to the police, is more powerfully because is build on technologies developed in the last years. As women increase their roles in society in the last times, daily homework such is cook, make laundry or vacuum take less time to do it than before, and its permits women to dedicate this time to other activities such is study, working, and other activities.

Not only the daily live is benefited by advances of technology, another field is medicine. Thanks to advances in technology, many diseases that before was the cause of massive death, now is a past true, with the advances in technology, scientific and doctors find different vaccines to help people be healthier. The medical equipment's advances help process such as surgery in a way that was never possible before. Nowadays, it is routine to get a heart replacement, which in the past such situations was simply impossible. Most importantly, we can see how scientific are in the process of looking for the solution to current diseases, and this will be possible, with the use of advanced medical technology.

The best reason for me to applaud contribution technology made is in the field of education. I see how the advances in technology help students in their learning. For instance, the use of projectors and video conferences help in important amount in the process of learning; by using these approaches, different kinds of students' intelligence can be addressed. Computers are another example of contribution that technology made to educational field. The use of well equipped computer lab is truly helpful for students because they have the chance to learn computer skills that are very important in almost all the work environments. Nowadays, teachers can find information they can use in their daily lessons. For instance, in a math class, teachers can use updated statistical information finding in computers (by just a click), and they can infuse these information into a lesson, making the lesson related with real life situations for students.

In the final analysis, I think the benefits technology offer to improve the quality of life outweigh the deficits. I do not think technology is out of human control and by the exposed in lines above we can easily see how technology helps and improves the quality of human live in the daily routine, Medical advances allow humans to live longer and more healthy lives than ever before and technological advances make the learning more easy. Ultimately, Technology is developed by people to help improve quality of human lives and all of us are using technological advances in many different ways, also to indicate that it is incontrollable.

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please, I am ESL students and need help by proffreading my essay, I can not see if I have aweak sentences.
Thank you so much!!!

Technology is very much a part of modern life. Many people see technology as a force that has escaped from human control. Others feel that technology has improved the quality of life. Do you think that the contribution technology has made to modern life has been positive or negative? State your position on this issue and support it with appropriate examples.

Technology has become a part of our lives. The issue of decide if this part is or not good for life is a controversial one. Many believe that contribution technology has made to modern life improve the quality of life in different aspects. Others believe that technology is out of human control and they see adverse effects in modern life. After careful analysis of different fields such as daily life, medicine, and education, I feel that contribution technology has made to modern life has been really positive and help to improve the quality of human lives.

The first reason for me to believe contribution technology made to modern life is just the daily life to unprecedented levels. Houses' security systems, for example, connected to the police, is more powerfully because is build on technologies developed in the last years. As women increase their roles in society in the last times, daily homework such is cook, make laundry or vacuum take less time to do it than before, and its permits women to dedicate this time to other activities such is study, working, and other activities.

Not only the daily live is benefited by advances of technology, another field is medicine. Thanks to advances in technology, many diseases that before was the cause of massive death, now is a past true, with the advances in technology, scientific and doctors find different vaccines to help people be healthier. The medical equipment's advances help process such as surgery in a way that was never possible before. Nowadays, it is routine to get a heart replacement, which in the past such situations was simply impossible. Most importantly, we can see how scientific are in the process of looking for the solution to current diseases, and this will be possible, with the use of advanced medical technology.

The best reason for me to applaud contribution technology made is in the field of education. I see how the advances in technology help students in their learning. For instance, the use of projectors and video conferences help in important amount in the process of learning; by using these approaches, different kinds of students' intelligence can be addressed. Computers are another example of contribution that technology made to educational field. The use of well equipped computer lab is truly helpful for students because they have the chance to learn computer skills that are very important in almost all the work environments. Nowadays, teachers can find information they can use in their daily lessons. For instance, in a math class, teachers can use updated statistical information finding in computers (by just a click), and they can infuse these information into a lesson, making the lesson related with real life situations for students.

In the final analysis, I think the benefits technology offer to improve the quality of life outweigh the deficits. I do not think technology is out of human control and by the exposed in lines above we can easily see how technology helps and improves the quality of human live in the daily routine, Medical advances allow humans to live longer and more healthy lives than ever before and technological advances make the learning more easy. Ultimately, Technology is developed by people to help improve quality of human lives and all of us are using technological advances in many different ways, also to indicate that it is incontrollable.

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Well, for starters we certainly have a better quality of life, by which I mean less poverty, more acess to healthcare and basic sanitation, amongst other things.

You can also see here: hdr_2013_statistical_tables, that the HDI has steadily increased - on most countries-, which is a proof that life quality has indeed improved.

Included in that, is the rise on the quality of the education, which is, without a doubt, the single most important part of our society; one can say it is it's foundation. And it has improved a lot on the past decade.

A lot of light has been shed nowadays on another very important topic: the increase of the importance of the woman on our society. While a lot of people say feminism is a waste of time, the real feminism, with real and accurate goals is a great thing for women all over the globe. Women still occupy a minority of positions of great importance but that too is changing. The biggest problem is the abuse of women; that is an area I haven't seen much improvement but I do believe we live in a time of change and we will change that too. That's a much deeper topic than what I said here, but that's a discussion for another question.

Another point of controversy, technology, is another thing I believe has improved and still is improving the quality of our lives. Making distances smaller, making things cheaper, creating new stuff, improving our health, all part of a much larger set of things on which technological advances help improve our lives

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The social life of someone represents the quality of their life in many ways. Having a good job will increase the quality of ones life and give them money and security in order to live there life happily. When there is a good relation between someone and there boss and co workers it makes there life better opposed to someone who has hates there boss and does not get along with there co workers.

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Technology has made advanced life significantly cozier than before. Amid the past, life was unpleasant and hard since all the work was done without any new device, so they needed to do their clothing by hand, strolled from one area to the next by feet.

Poor state of instruction at the past, where individuals, particularly ladies, have a bit chance for swelled training due to the fact that there is segregation among men and ladies. Since globalization impact inspires people attitude, there is stability dare both of them, so they could achieve their desire.

Today parity and liberty are the most essential human rights, while in the past individuals who were affluent had control and influence over poor.

Health: When bacteria battling abilities pharmaceutical was found, people made the initial speculative strides making anti-infection drugs. Before said, the choices for battling bacterial diseases were restricted. Normally, the acquaintance of anti-infections drugs has lead to a critical lessening in mortalities. Along with this, countless advances have been made in hospital sector, comprehension of human composition, therapy vectors.

Prosperity: It is important to look past the current unfavorable circumstances here. Gigantic advances in assembling methods and technology have permitted us to bring items to practically the whole advance world. Besides, advanced farming practices have nearly eradicated starvation from the enlightened world.

In conclusion, it appears clearly that life now is vastly improved than it was previously. Though, it can't be repudiated that in the past life was not that frantic and demanding as it has turned out to be these days. Today individuals are concerned with making cash and vocation so much that they frequently don't have time for their families. Indeed, modern individuals normally live not with one another but rather next to one another. The states of life are absolutely much improved now however it can be interrogated if the quality of life is truly improved.

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What does "quality of life" means? Is it happiness, wellness, health, fitness, or fun? Maybe it refers to the absence of disease, leisure time, freedom from oppression, or safety from harm, quality of life, although defined individually, in today's world increasingly means a long and healthy life.

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Ultimately, technology is developed by people to help improve quality of human life and all of us are using technological advances in many different ways. Technology is very much a part of modern life. Many people see technology as a force that has escaped from human control. Others feel that technology has improved the quality of life.
Technology has become a part of our lives. The issue of decide if this part is or not good for life is a controversial one. Many believe that contribution technology has made to modern life improve the quality of life in different aspects. Others believe that technology is out of human control and they see adverse effects in modern life. After careful analysis of different fields such as daily life, medicine, and education, many have think that contribution technology has made to modern life has been really positive and help to improve the quality of human lives.
Thanks to advances in technology, many diseases that before was the cause of massive death, now is a past true, with the advances in technology, scientific and doctors find different vaccines to help people be healthier. The medical equipment's advances help process such as surgery in a way that was never possible before. Nowadays, it is routine to get a heart replacement, which in the past such situations was simply impossible. Most importantly, we can see how scientific are in the process of looking for the solution to current diseases, and this will be possible, with the use of advanced medical technology.
We all see how the advances in technology help students in their learning. For instance, the use of projectors and video conferences help in important amount in the process of learning; by using these approaches, different kinds of students' intelligence can be addressed. Computers are another example of contribution that technology made to educational field. The use of well equipped computer lab is truly helpful for students because they have the chance to learn computer skills that are very important in almost all the work environments. Nowadays, teachers can find information they can use in their daily lessons. For instance, in a math class, teachers can use updated statistical information finding in computers (by just a click), and they can infuse these information into a lesson, making the lesson related with real life situations for students.