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Your screencasting really added to your video!

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Andrea, Great use of different types of slides, video, voice, and text! Information was well laid out and easy to follow and you subject was interesting!

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Andrea, Great use of different types of slides, video, voice, and text! Information was well laid out and easy to follow and you subject was interesting!

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Having your research at the end was a good strategy helping people understand and remember your presentation.

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Your video was very persuasive. You presented a serious tone through choice of music and your slides were aesthetically pleasing.

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I love your use of video and real world examples. I also like your use of one word on the slide. Your project has a great cognitive flow and is very informative about the impacts of color.

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This scrolling through the youtube videos and showing of the articles is great! It shows how ubiquitous your subject is and also shows your process in finding the information. These videos from UA are great examples! Each image is on the screen for just the right amount of time. Great images too that illustrate your points. I like that you use a list at the end. I think lists seem to really "stick" with people (like think of all the clickbait/buzzfeed links!). You're the only person that used these lists and I love how it shows you're aware of the genre.

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Great opening slide, then thesis straight after that straight forward.
Lots of video.  Did you screencast you scrolling and then add it as video?  I was thinking of doing that, too.
Very quick transitions.

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I really like the experience you offer. The mixture of music, narrative, images, and text were cohesively projected. Very awesome!

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Natalie,I loved your use of language and voice inflection when presenting points and information. Your information had great focus and clarity! 

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Natalie,I loved your use of language and voice inflection when presenting points and information. Your information had great focus and clarity! 

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Natalie- paid parental leave
-attention getting
-emotionally eppealing
-relatable
-target audience
-scale=unfair, great job!
-great solution!

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Good mix of the icon feature, the single image without text, a graph, a quote. Some humor. The narration is very persuasive with sarcasm, and the "outrage"

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Jack, The choice of music was very good as it drew you into the presentation. Wonderful use of images!

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Jack, The choice of music was very good as it drew you into the presentation. Wonderful use of images!

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A lot more large scale images.  I like this.  Very vivid colors for a lot of these images.
Again, I think the non-narration was effective here.

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Jack- Tatoos
-cool music
-impactful
-great photos
-great statistics
-didn't know anything about this before now!

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I like the use of captions with citations and imagery. The questions are great as transitions. I didn't know any of this! The pictures of tattoos and tattoo artists are really eye-catching

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Enjoyed your simple slides that allowed you to provide the information verbally which allowed the user to absorb the information.

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Cristal-Keto
-Extremely Informative!
-I've been very interested in this too!
-You showed great info, and I love the great use of icons!
-Great reflection at the end, and great icon that is representating reflection
-cohesive color scheme

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I liked your emphasis on certain narrative words. Your voice made it clear which information was the most important. I feel, if i wasn't able to see the screen, I would be able to understand the content and ideas through the narrative.

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I like the story behind why you decided to look into this
Good idea to keep the left side of the split screen the same "benefits" and then just changing the image on the right.  I didn't think of doing that to only switch images.
Longer amount of spoken text than some of the others we've seen (this isn't  critique, just something I noticed).
-- Francis

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Great use of the visuals (pizza; pyramid). Really informative video about what keto is! I like how you shared your problem-based project!

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VERY PROFESSIONAL!

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Sarah- Veganism
-I love this platform, it is so cool and fun! Great job! I love it!
-Great research!
-I want to do this after watching
-love it

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Really liked your animations! Really caught my attention (:

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The animations make your video very interactive! NARRATIONS WERE FANTASTIC!

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The animation looks really cool.  I really liked the animation and then the crossing out.
How did you get these specific animations?  Is it a search and find type thing?
Do you drag and drop these animations where you want?
I liked that you showed both sides, and then also that you returned to the main question again

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Sarah,Awesome use of facts and correlation between your presentation focus and the cartoon drawing. This look great and it was simple to understand what your message was focusing on. Good work!Chris

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Sarah,Awesome use of facts and correlation between your presentation focus and the cartoon drawing. This look great and it was simple to understand what your message was focusing on. Good work!Chris

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This is amazing and myst have required so much work! I love the way you section the screen and can animate the icons (i.e. the dog). The drawing marker thing is cool too. Your animations are really detailed!  The music in the background makes the video really professional too.

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I like your use of animations. It made it more interactive. After watching your video, it became apparent the limitations of Adobe Spark.

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I enjoyed how each slide is very concise and to the point. It made me want to keep watching.

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Cool use of citing the survey really concisely; awesome examples

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Very clear points, engagement with audience through text was great!

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Francis, Click Bait
-I love that you challenged yourself and didn't use audio, I used way too much and couldn't seem to not
-It is difficult to multitask and type this right now and watch your video, however I love the simplicity
-the color scheme is awesome

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How did you get the screen to split in the middle and fly in in transitions? ! Rad

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I liked your use of examples. It was similar to a Facebook video and I liked how you mirrored that style. It was informational and gave a sound argument without using speech.

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I like the uniqueness of just using pictures and text! Really good job (:

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Awesome appeal to ethos!

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Great imagery
- song choice gives a sense of seriousness and credibility

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I really liked your use of the formatting for the slides and presentation. The use of questions allowed the viewer to make their own meaning. Very nice work!

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Chris, Social Media
-Great first image- recognizeable apps
-Is this social media usage increase due to iphones specifically, or technology growth in general?
-You don't need sound- the graph is great!
*intermission*
-I like your strong suggestions
-Great graphs and statistics
-Great images conveying cyber buyllying
-Scary statistics, good use of images with these

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Very nice job presenting Was-Mart information.

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I love the use of the photo with the text, voice, and music over it when you give your thesis

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I like the way you made the different sections with different uses of the Walmart logo

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Very good knowledge on topic (: Also really enjoyed the background music

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Substantial information given, song choice conveys serious tone!

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Good use of the walmart logo right off the bat for brand recognition.
Music volume is a bit loud compared with voice.
I like "it's a mystery. I want to know why" with an explicit statement of what you are researching
- Francis

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Awesome credibility with the use of graphs and citations ! I really like the images too

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Really like the facts! Also very smooth transitions (:

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The graphs look good with some nice statistics and sources.

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I like the "I propose" with your argument. Clear thesis from the beginning. Good switching between which side the text is vs the image on the split screen shots, keeps things fresh.

- Francis

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I like your balance of visual and text. Especially when you use text and have a picture in the background to complete the sentence. "Walmart used to have"... *low prices* in the image. Great work!!

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Dee, Walmart-
-Love the color scheme!
-Great history and background information
-Great use of text
-great images and use of split screen feature

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I really like your use of audio, visual, and textual modes. I also appreciate how you cited each of your sources. Makes it easier to find the sources you used for future use and research.

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Use of data backs your points, use of audio/ song choice was great!

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Social Media and Age Restrictions - Chris 

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Social Media and Age Restrictions - Chris 

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Great voiceover and choice of background music.