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(Original)Even though others may have divergent perspectives it is clear that rain did the right thing because cap is now in a better place
(new) To conclude rain did the right thing Because cap inst left behind the hippy age

In conclusion Rain did the right thing since cap is in a better place and is back with all the new friends he met and he's happier than ever

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1)  While many may disagree, it is clear that Rain did the right thing so cap (CAP) stay with his friends .

2)While others may disagree it is clear that rain did the right thing because so cap can stay with his friends.

3)Inclusion, rain did the right thing since cap is having fun with his friends and when he is going to a new school.

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In conclusion, Rain did do the right thing.  Rain did the good thing for Cap because she is a considerate person. Also she thinks about others first.  It is clear that Rain did the right thing.
(OG Thesis Statement) While many may disagree, it is evident that Rain did the right thing because Cap can stay in society.

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Finally Cap Rain did the correct thing by giving cap a better life.

It is clear that rain is a positive influence in the book.

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Have you ever been someone else? In "Schooled" by Gorman Korman, the students bullied Cap because they were following what Zach told them, even though they were nice.

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Although others may have divergent perspectives, it is clear that Rain did the right thing because she made him happier and gave him a better life.
In conclusion, Rain made Cap happier by giving Cap a better life. It is obvious that Rain is a positive and genial person.

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Original Thesis: Even though some may disagree, it is apparent that Rain did the right thing because it made another person happy which is the main objective of being a hippie.

New thesis: Although some may have divergent perspectives, it is evident that Rain made the better decision which was to sell Garland so Cap could go back to his modern society.

In conclusion, Rain did the right thing because she ended up making Cap happy.

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Although others may disagree, it is evident that Rain did the right thing 

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In conclusion, Zach is a bad person by bullying others and pear pressuring other people to bully people . It is clear that, Zach is a mean person to others because he is pear pressuring others and being rude.

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Even though others may have a divergent perspective, it is appearance that rain did the right thing because she wanted cap to get a better life and understanding the new society. primarily, rain did the right thing.

In conclusion, rain did the right thing by providing a better life for cap and understand the new modern society.

it is clear that rain has a positive interaction in the book with people.

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In conclusion, Rain is a selfless person by thinking about Cap's future. The story "Schooled" by Gordon Korman describes that Rain is selfless. This shows that Rain is thinking about the future; Cap's future. These words illustrate the relationship between Rain and Cap. It is obvious that Rain is a good person.

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Although others may have divergent perspectives, it is clear that Rain did the right thing because Cap liked going to C-Average.

In conclusion,  Rain did the right thing since Cap liked going to C-Average, she wanted a better life for him. Gorden Korman's work, "Schooled" conveys that Rain is selfless.This shows that Rain cares for everyone else. These words illustrates the relationship between Rain and everyone else. It is clear that Rain is a positive influence in the book.

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1. original: Although others may say she didn't do the right thing, it is clear that Rain did the right thing because if she id otherwise, she would have let Cap suffer even more.

Revised: to conclude, Rain did the right thing by not letting Cap suffer more in the future.

Call to action: it i obvious that Rain had more of an influence on Cap throughout the book

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While others may disagree, Zach is a bad person because he bullied Cap throughout the book.
Reworded - In conclusion Zach is a bad person by bullying Cap a lot in the book.

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1) Although others may disagree, it is evident that Rain did the right thing because when rain is gone Cap would have a difficult time in society.

In conclusion, Rain did the right thing by giving Cap a better life.
The story "Schooled" by Gordon Korman describes Rain as a selfless person.
It is clear that Rain did the right thing

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Although others may disagree, it is clear Zach is a mean person because he bullied Cap

In conclusion, Zach is a mean person since he bullied cap. Zach starts to try to be cool and bully the new kid (CAP) and just bullying him because he is different. This shows how Zach could be with different kids. It is obvious that Zach is the most disrespectful person in the book ¨Schooled¨

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Original thesis: Although others may disagree, it is evident that Rain gave Cap a better life.
New thesis: In conclusion, Rain gave Cap a better life by selling garland farms.
Rain did the right thing because she is a selfless person. Because of this she gave Cap a better life.

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Even though others may disagree it is clear that Rain did the the right thing because Cap can now live a better life.

In conclusion, Rain did the the right thing by caring for Cap and giving him a better life.This shows that Rain cares for Cap .As a result it is evident that Rain did the right thing.

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Although others may disagree, it is clear that Rain did the right thing because Rain only wanted the best for Cap and wanted him to understand the real world.

In conclusion, Rain did the right thing since she provided a better life for Cap.

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While others may disagree, it is apparent that Zach is a bad person because he bullies Cap.

In conclusion, Zach is a bad person because he bullies Cap. This shows that Zach is not a good person because he bullies Cap. These words illustrate the relationship between Zach and Cap by how much Zach bullies Cap. It is evident that Zach is a bad person.

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While others may disagree, it is clear that rain did the right thing because so that they can live in a better place.

In Conclusion, Rain did the right thing by providing cap a better place to live in.

This shows that rain wants cap to have a better life.
This words illustrates the relationship between cap and rain

Call to action: It is clear that Zach is a negative influence in the book.

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Although mat disagree, it is clear that theme is to stop bulying becase zach bullied cap.

In couclusin the theme of shcooled is to stop bullying.The theme of school is t]o stope buling becase zach buliexd cap.The story ¨shooled by gordonuyling  kroman islasteates the them of stop bullying .

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While other may disagree it is clear that Rain did the right thing because she wanted a better life for Cap

In conclusion Rain did the right thing because she wanted a better life for Cap This shows that Rain loves Cap. These words illustrate that Rain feels for Cap and wants the best for him. It is obvious Rain is a very nice caring person

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Although others may disagree, clear that Rain did the right thing because it was time for both of them to have a  fresh start.

In conclusion, Rain did the right thing by moving out of garland and into our society.This shows that Rain did the right thing.

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Line 1: Original thesis statement: Although others may disagree, it is clear that Rain did the right thing because Cap could have better future.

Reworded thesis: In conclusion, Rain did the right thing by providing Cap a better future. Rain did the right thing because Cap could have a better life. It is clear from the book that Rain cares about Cap.

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While others may disagree, it is evident that rain did the right thing because garland is now really old.

In conclusion, Rain did the right thing since garland got old. Rain tries to start a new life for cap. This shows that rain cares about cap and shows their bond. It is obvious that Rain has made a big change in the book at the end.

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Whie some may have divergant perspectives, it is clear that Rain did the right thing beacause Cap needed to learn more about the real world.  It is evident that rain did the right thing.

In conclusion Rain did the right thing beacause Cap needed to learn about the real world.

When I'm gone you'll have to get along with the real wolrd. That just won't happen if we stay at Garland...  This shows that you should not be scared of change.

It is evident that rain did the right thing.

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Although others may disagree, it is clear that Rain did the right thing because it can help Cap in the future.

In conclusion, Rain did the right thing because she wanted to help Cap. This shows that Rain cares for Cap because she was trying to help Cap for his future life. It is clear that Rain cares for Cap.

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While may others may disagree it is evident is that Rain did the right thing because she cares about cap.

In conclusion,  Rain did the right thing because she wanted a better life for Cap and her.This shows that Rain shows love for Cap even thought she is not his real mom. As a resulti it is evident that Rain did the right thing.

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Although others may disagree,it is clear that Rain did the right thing because they live in a better place and a better life.

Finally Rain did the right thing because it is a better place for Cap to live better than Garland.

Rain did the right because now Cap has a better life.

Call To Action:
In Conclusion,Rain did the right thing.

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Although others may disagree it is clear that Cap is a better person then Zach. It is obvious that Cap is a nicer person then Zach.

Finally, Cap is an out going person other than Zach were he is full of him self.  These words demonstrate that Cap is nicer than zach. it is evident that Zach is an evil person

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Although others may disagree, it is clear that rain did the right thing because Cap can have a better life.

Finally, Rain did the right thing so Cap can have a good life.
This shows that Rain cares a lot about Cap. This shows that Rain cares about doing anything to make sure Cap has a good life. It is evident that Rain is very wise and helpful to the story.