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Some may argue that, it is very challenging to make a difference in the world because of selfish people. However, it is not difficult at all. All you have to do is one small thing. It may be giving money to the homeless, helping an old lady cross the street. Or a simple as giving a puppy a home. You are making a difference. Selfish people has nothing to do with it. That's just an excuse for being lazy.

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some may argue that, being selfish doesn't make change hard to accomplish because f they are selfish then they think for themselves and not for others. and if they think for themselves they will not bother others. But, just because they think for themselves doesnt mean they will stay to themselves. selfish people may also put others down to make themselves look better

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some may argue that, making a change in the world would be easier but i would disagree. If each and every one of us did our on thing and not get in other people businesses.

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However, some may say making a difference is not hard because of selfish people. They may think this because they think  its hard to make a difference  because it is often expencive. However,  without selfish people, it would be easy to get the money for something world changing because the rich would not be selfish enough to not let you have the money you need.

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Some may think, that the world could be an improved society if it was not for selfish civilians. However if the world would give some money to charity it wouldn't be that selfish. Changing the world would be as easy as changing clothes.

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Some may argue, that making a difference in the world is simple but i don't agree. If everyone would be focused on themselves and not other people in the world, then our society would be better than everyone putting out their opinions about our society
Blayne Deese- needs to follow the three parts

grammar issues- Dylan Tyus

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Some may argue that, changing the world will be fairly simple but i have to disagree. If everyone in the would did their part and didn't worry about people other than themselves changing the world would be as easy as breathing. In this world we have a lot of different people; That have many different opinions. This causes people to have conflicts.

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It may seem, as though selfishness may mar the chances of making a difference and while there is some merit to this point there is still people making a difference every day around the world with out the challenge of facing selfish individuals, so to sum up, there are still people who are not selfish who are making a difference.

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It might seem, that making change is not much of a difficult task as people think, however I believe that selfish people hold humanity back from a great future. It would be a extremely difficult challenge to change because everyone is selfish with phones, cars, everyday things that people take for granted. even if people wanted to change a majority will not because of the sacrifices they will have to make.

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Some people may think, that the world could possible be perfect if there wasn't any selfish people. The people that are not selfish could help change our word by getting the selfish people to change and get them on the right track.

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some may think that the world would be perfect without selfish people but the world would still be the same beacuse there is6 so much more than that.the world that we live in today there is no way you can make it perfect because of selfish people
such as money can get the best of peopple
Amya Oxendine - needs capitalization and punctuation
Kloee Athey - grammar issues

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yes they may be millions of selfish individuals in today's world however, the millions of people that are unselfish could maybe put in some effort and change the individuals that are selfish so we we can have more unselfish individuals so making our world a better place would not be such a difficult task that we make it out to be.

Amya Oxendine- needs capitalization
my man  your puncuation-camron

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Some may argue that it would be pretty easy to change the world with all the help they can get  this may be true however, its really not that easy because there so many selfish people in this world who just don't want to cooperate and want to make everything about themselves if that's the case our world would have some decadence.

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Some may argue, that its actually really easy to make a difference in our world today. However, its a lot harder than you think. Some people like to be selfish, and difficult and prolong events, that are really important and time sensitive. Similarly, a couple of years ago Jackson County was going to have a fair to raise money for a cancer patient, well one group of people kept adding problems and wouldn't help come up with solutions; in effect the patient lost his leg do to the disease.

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some may argue, that it is easy to make an difference cause of them putting their lives on hold to help the ones in need. This may be true, however most will see this as a good chance to profit of these people and gaining money without thinking abut the ones who need a difference to happen.

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some may argue, that it is easy to make an difference cause of them putting their lives on hold to help the ones in need. This may be true, however most will see this as a good chance to profit of these people and gaining money without thinking abut the ones who need a difference to happen.

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Some people think we can make the world a better place with or without the selfish people. But when we try to make the world a better place the selfish people will try to stop us from making the world a better place when we do they will be the last problem that will hold us back.

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Some may argue, That the fact that people are selfish will not be a problem in making a difference. However, If the act was not to occur we would not know what difference to make in society.

Matt K: add period
Pro-good job and instead of saying "that the fact that" you should say "the fact that" because it isn't as wordy. -Hailey Chambliss

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Some people think, that we can change the world with or without the selfish people. But the selfish people will stop us from trying to make the world a better place because after we try they will be the only problem left selfish people is a real struggle.
Jersie Mcginty- you had no evidence, but i like where you going with it.

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Some people think making a difference in the word is easy because of others helping. this may be true, however, some people don't like to help others

Kloee Athey - incomplete
Heaven Land - incomplete

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Some may retaliate, That a difference is not a challenge due to selfish people. However, if the selfish act was not occur the  world would not know what we need to change and make a difference.

Matt K incomplete no period.

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Some may retaliate, that the best way to make a difference in the world is teamwork. This may be true, however, selfish people keep us from making a difference because they like to bring others down instead of giving them the confidence. If there were more people to bring others up we wouldn't have as many selfish people bringing the world to selfishness.

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Some may argue, that making a difference in the world isn't a challenging task because we can all help and make things right. This may be true, however; some people are incapable of doing certain things due to their health.

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Some may argue, making a difference in the world is not a difficult challenge because now people are open to change. However, because of selfishness the world cannot change drastically because not everyone would be open to put in as much work as another individual. some may say anything can happen if you put your mind to it but their mistaken becuse selfishness  will always be in this world.

Heaven Land - good reason

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Some may retaliate,  that making a difference in the world   isn't a challenging task but some people have different views on society and may not want to change.
toby - needs correct punctuation and a better reason.
Jersie--incomplete
Raven-incomplete

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Some may retaliate, that making a difference in the world isn't a challenging task because you can work together. But if you have no one that wants to work together or help make the world a better place, some may need a reason to make it a better place or just don't want the world the same.

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Some may argue, that making a difference is challenging task because of selflessness people . However, if the selflessness act was to never occur, then we probably want know all these things now. But trying to make an difference in the world is not easy because these levels of challenges are getting hard in which it effects the world from a stand point.

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Some may retaliate that trying to make a difference in the world is hard because some people have different  opinions.

toothpick - you need a counter claim starter

Layne Mitchell- Incomplete
~Heaven~ Add a counterclaim starter them your opinion.

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Some may retaliate that trying to make a difference in the world is easy because we can make the rule and laws to fit everyone's standards. This may be true, but there will always be one who will be selfish and wont care for other and want the attention only for themselves. Even when we want to reduse the tax payment for the taxpayers the democrats will want to retaliate because they get money from the tax payers who use there hard earned money.

this is pretty good i like ur work -luke

Layne Mitchell- pretty good just pay attention to spelling

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Some may retaliate that  making a difference in the world isn't hard because we can learn to work together. This may be true, however, just because some people are willing to make a difference in this world, does not mean that all people want to participate, some people need more motivation or something to make them understand why it is important to make a difference in this world.
Pro- good reason ~Heaven~

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Some may argue, trying to make a difference in the world is susceptible if we all work together. This may be true, however, many people are selfish and careless if someone were to be killed this is what leads our society to never achieve success for a Utopian society.

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incomplete-toby
incomplete - luke
Raven-incomplete

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One might object here that you can forget the people who try to stop you and carry on making a difference. However, doing that isn't that easy. People will always try to get in your way and bring you down.

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christian conrad - no punctuation . nice smile face

Amya Oxendine- incomplete

Blayne Deese- incomplete                                                                                     great job

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Some people think that making making a difference in the world is an easy accomplishment. They also say that being nice or sharing would help out and accomplish that goal. However, There are marvelous amount of citizens who could care less if someone was killed or injured, as long as they are okay they are satisfied, some even wouldn't care if a natural disaster destroyed a town or killed hey girl
Jersie - kind of confusing, and incomplete

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Some people think that making a difference in the world is more of a challenge than it really is. There are so many selfish people that think the world revolves around them which makes the world a harder place to fix.  Selfish people only do for themselves so if something could benefit them it could inspire them to help and to make the world a better place.

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Some may argue, that trying to make a difference in the world is effortless, however, in today's society it requires a great deal of endurance.

like the idea, just finish it -luke

Katlynn.H= headed in the right track good job.

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MARKSISTRUNK                      some may say that making a difference in today society is utterly effortless and extremely difficult. This may be true however,Making a difference inst like making a sandwich it requires perseverance and a extreme amount of strength both are witch we as fellow individuals have when we work together and use several ingredients to make a mixture that will not only defeat the doubt of persevering when people think a difference is not achievable but will also act as a life lesson on working together and using strength as a object to defeat problems. The oil spill is a perfect example to support my thoughts  because,The oil spill causes many problems beneath the surface of our oceans,like death,sickness,and damage to our corals however many wild life experts and game wardens all across the U:S work together to not only solve the problems in our oceans but provide a safe house for the millions of ocean species.

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MARKSISTRUNK                      some may say that making a difference in today society is utterly effortless and extremely difficult. This may be true however,Making a difference inst like making a sandwich it requires perseverance and a extreme amount of strength both are witch we as fellow individuals have when we work together and use several ingredients to make a mixture that will not only defeat the doubt of persevering when people think a difference is not achievable but will also act as a life lesson on working together and using strength as a object to defeat problems. The oil spill is a perfect example to support my thoughts  because,The oil spill causes many problems beneath the surface of our oceans,like death,sickness,and damage to our corals however many wild life experts and game wardens all across the U:S work together to not only solve the problems in our oceans but provide a safe house for the millions of ocean species.

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christian conrad - very long for a counter claim and no name. MARK SISTRUNK- Name is there and this is not only my counterclaim it includes my counterclaim reason and rebuttal but thanks for the input good buddy.

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Making a difference in the world isn't as simple as it seems because millions of people can help but one can mess it up. So it is actually takes a lot because people can come together and clean up a town but then someone else come along and throw all there trash right outside.
jesse tanton: my man you need a perieod. thanks my bad.
Pro: good job with explaining it
Con:Don't start off your sentence with "So" -Hailey Chamlbiss

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some people may argue , that trying to make a difference

Renee' F-  Incomplete/ incorrect punctuation

Amya Oxendine - needs capitalization

Katlynn.H=incomplete
Blayne Deese- Incomplete, needs correct capitalization/punctuation.
TOBY--incomplete fix punctuation that is a starter not a transition sentence.
Raven-needs capitalization and incomplete

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Some may argue, that making a difference in the world isn't as troubling as some people make it out to be. this may be true but not everyone can accept differences. However, if people would just come to their senses and realize that we all bleed the same and we are all humans. people aren't just selfish by the way they live but by the way they treat people. people don't wanna work together because they may be afraid of what people say or think of them. this is a cause of not being able to make a difference in the world.

MARK SISTRUNK- Great job,however when you said "they may be afraid of what people say or think" you made it seem like you were for both sides, next time you should say " they are utterly scared of what people might say or think about them". Also incorrect grammer the word "Wanna" should be corrected to "Want to"

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Read the following claim. Then, write a counter argument! (Counterclaim, reason, & rebuttal)
After your response, read and respond to at least 3 peers. Your comment must include your name, one pro,and one con!
Claim: Making a difference in the world is a challenging task because of selfish individuals.

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Some people think that people can push away their differences with each other and come together as one and make the world a different place. This may be true, however, a lot of people in society today are stuck up and thinks the world revolves around them and they wouldn't wanna work with people they don't like due to pettiness. It's a challenge to get selfish people to forget about drama and focus on reality which is the real world and how we would make it a better place.
DAMIAN NORE' ST.FLEUR- This is pretty good i like your work.

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Some people may say that making a diffrence is not a challenge as long as everyone contributes, this would be true if people weren`t as selfish as they are today. Most people just think other people will pick up their slack and they won`t have to contribute or change, but in order to make a impactful change everyone will need to contribute. Therefore, making a difference is a very difficult task.

Layne Mitchell- follow the three parts of a counter arguement but good idea

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One might object here that selfish people are not the problem in our society today. This may be true, but however if people wouldn't be lazy and throw their trash away properly than that could result in a cleaner society and a way to help our ocean life from getting caught in this litter and dying

Matt K.- Add period...other than that great job

DAMIAN NORE' ST.FLEUR work on punctuation

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although there are some selfish individuals most people are not selfish and they want change. The reason most people want change is because the world is a huge place that has many things wrong with it. Even though most people are not selfish there are still some out there and they do take the earth for granted.

Matt K.- Capitalization corrections
Jersie - needs more explanation

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Making a difference on the world is not as challenging as it may seem. if everyone would help out and do their part it would be easy. however, there are many individuals who are careless and only do for themselves, leaving it difficult for everyone else to make helpful impacts in our society.

christian conrad- need to capitalize after punctuation. good reason.

ConnerM.- You did not include a counterclaim starter. Good consept.

DAMIAN NORE' ST.FLEUR work on capitalize
kaleb gardner- capilization good reason

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making a diffrence in the world is easy. all you have to do is go give africans some money to secure a safe water supply. that may be true ,however ,

Matt K.- Incomplete/ correct the punctuation
Renee' F.- Incomplete/ no Counter-claim starter
Conner M.-No counter claim starter, not on topic. you tryed.
Ashanti G. Incomplete but good job
kaleb g.-incomplete no counterclaim starter good piont i see your direction

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Some people think that making a difference in the world is simple. They would also say there many easy ways to impact the society such as donating money. However, many people wouldn't help because they would only think about themselves not others that truly need help. From now on it will always be challenging to make a positive impact on society.

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Making a difference in the world isn't as difficult as some people make it out to be. There are many easy ways to make an impact on society, such as helping out at the local homeless shelters, donating money to charities, or help pick up trash.  You did not include a counter claim starter/ Like the idea of how it is ConnerM.

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The opposing view is that people work together to try and make the world a better place. This may be true, however, people would not have to make these crews if people were not selfish already. These selfish people only care about themselves and it makes the world a challenging place to fix.

Mark sistrunk- Better word choice would be helpful also incorrect punctuation.
Camron tanton-i like it

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Making a difference in the world isn't as easy as people think it is. It takes multiple individuals to try an clean up a beach or help homeless. But by yourself you can only do little. Some people may argue that one person could change many lives. Though this may be true, not all the time one single person can change an entire group of people.

Layne Mitchell- follow the three parts of a counter arguement but good idea

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Making a difference in the world isn't as hard as most people would think it is. If people would help out in the society then that would be a start, but some people are selfish and only provide for themselves. However there are some people that care for others and would help them in the most possible way they can, but in one wrong step the good can change

jesse tanton: you need a perioed buddy
Renee F.- Incomplete/ No Counter-claim starter