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Submitted by the Artist

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Submitted by the Artist

1. Which art movement did you focus?

2. What do you think worked well and what aspects do you feel need improvement?

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Peer Critique Directions

Please develop a thoughtful response that includes SPECIFIC feedback about what immediately resonated with you and what you like. Please also add constructive criticism or any suggestions that may help your classmate improve their work.

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1. Which art movement did you focus?
Surrealism

2. What do you think worked well and what aspects do you feel need improvement?
I think that the drawing and shading worked really well with each other, but the butterfly that I drew could have had more detail and elements to it.

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1. Which art movement did you focus?
The art movement I did was Art Nouveau
2. What did you think worked well and what aspects do you feel need improvement?
I think I worked well by using different colors/patterns. Also, matching the color tone with the picture. It makes the work feel balance. But, I think I need to improve with my neatness, for example, gluing things on the sketchbook or smudging (leaving fingerprints).

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I think that I did a good job of showing how cattle ranching causes mass deforestation by using my found object of a Mcdonald's carton to show how companies like these cause massive destruction to the environment for their own benefits. I think I could have been more detailed/there could have been more depth to it.

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earth art
I think that my idea of depicting the world as a whole and showing that only 20% of the forests remained was good, but I could have paid more attention to details and used brighter colors maybe by adding water color.

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1)   After looking at the artist you selected, what was their most important piece of art and why?
Artist:

Judy Chicago

"Domes" (1968) was one of her most popular pieces. The shapes of the domes were in a rounded shape and the complementary forms suggested femininity. This piece became Chicago's "signature style motif".
2) What is the issue you are highlighting and why did you create the artwork in this manner?
I was portraying the issue of injustice. The main idea shown in the picture was to treat others how you want to be treated and to love them. I created the artwork in this manner to show that there are many people who needs help from others.

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1. Which art movement did you focus?
earth art
2. What do you think worked well and what aspects do you feel need improvement?
I did well on the making the drawing. I need more improvement on the detail

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I think that this is really good and I agree with your opinion on the colors and patterns working well together. I think that if there was maybe some more colorful patterns and less of black it would have made the sketch book stand out even more.

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I really like that you used one simple material to draw your sketchbook. The repetitive lines makes the artwork feel "full" and "wavy". It 's interesting how you drew your characters because it looks like a stick-figure, but it's not. Things I suggest is that you should had at least one pop of color because just black/white doesn't grab my attention right away. For example, the heart in the middle could've been colored red/pink. Overall, great artwork

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I think this is really cool and abstract and I like that it's simple but at the same time there's a lot going on with the cool ripple effects in the background.

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I liked how you drew the whole entire Earth to show the issue about our planet. I would suggest to make the colors of the words lighter because the black color makes some of the words a little hard to read.
But I liked the different hues of blue you used in your picture, and it makes the picture looking more standing out. : - )

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I think you did really good on drawing the art. I think you should add more brighter color.

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Which art movement did you focus on?
The art movement I focused on was Romanticism.
What did you think worked well and what aspects do you feel need improvement?
I think I did a good job using oil pastel to mimic Joseph Mallord William Turners style. He was regarded as the “painter of light” and I showed this aspect through utilizing a white oil pastel on the mountains and sky. Turner focused on landscapes, natural catastrophes and natural phenomena such as sunlight and rain and I selected a national geographic picture that was of the mountains. I could have used paint or a different material to depict the background or mountains. My use of the pearls and sparkly glitter spots are needed to fill the requirement of three or more materials, but take away a little bit from the romanticism movement.

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1. Which art movement did you focus? the movement earth art movement

2. What do you think worked well and what aspects do you feel need improvement? I did well on the shape on the drawing

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1. Which art movement did you focus on?
Art Nouveau
2. What do you think worked well and what aspects do you feel need improvement?
I feel like the color scheme worked well, and the lines that I drew worked well with the flow of the drawing. I feel like my craftsmanship could have been improved.

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The art movement I focused on is Romanticism. I think what worked really well is the overall color scheme because I wanted to create a feeling of isolation which I believe I did with keeping the rocks on only one half of the page and also the gold drip. I think to improve I could have painted the background black to make it a bit more cohesive.

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1. Earth Art
i think what worked well was the materials that i used and the objects that i drew, however i don't know if i actually expressed the message that i was trying to express which was that pollution is taking over nature and that is killing it

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I really like how you utilized objects from the real world, I think it gives it a unique feel and adds to the story. However I would suggest maybe using markers or something brighter to go with the brightness of the wrapper.

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i like how your did your artwork, and it gives like 3D dimension, however i also believe that something that you could have done to make it better is to color the background

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1. Which art movement did you focus?
Earth art movement
2. What do you think worked well and what aspects do you feel need improvement?
I think I worked well with the use of vibrant colors like blue, green, yellow, and brown. I didn't make the background just plain blue, but I added some clouds to "help" the plain look and help make it look presentable. Some improvements that I need for this sketchbook is the idea of the drawing. I need to make sure that other people kind-of understand what is on drawn because then the artwork would not make any sense.

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fauvism
I think I did a good job using bright colors and capturing the homie and comfortable personality of my home. I tried to use short strokes to create texture in my painting and add little patterns around the house. I think I could have used some more techniques to make certain aspects of the house stand out more and I could have made it a little neater.

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I like the symmetrical design of the tree, it reminds me of a pair of lungs
The colors used are very vibrant and it stands out well also,
For improvement,maybe try to make the sky and the clouds look more realistic because at first it was a little hard to tell if it was the sky. But other than that, good job on this ^v^

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I really like the colors I used in my sketchbook and that it pops with the clean white break in the bed. I like that it creates a positive feel because the whole point of the project was to create an inspirational place for me. Although I really like it, I think I could have made it cleaner and maybe traced it with black pen to emphasize the edges.

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I really like the colors you used and that you used paint because it gives it more texture

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I really like the colors that are used, it makes the artwork feel "soft" and "relax" because you drew with color pencils, which doesn't make the colors to bright or dark. Also, the patterns on the walls help create the room look playful. Not only is just one wall but the floor has patterns, which is very interesting.

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I like what colors you chose for the sky and how the bright yellow contrasted really well with the black buildings. next time, maybe try not to leave details in pencil, other than that I love this artwork it is really nice and creative!

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Jackie Shaffer
I absolutely love how unique your sketchbook assignment is for surrealism. I thought the eyes with the clouds was interesting and the butterfly was cool. I liked the shading and the objects; however, I think you could have added more color to the background and paid greater attention to detail. Overall, it is evident that you spent a great amount of time on your assignment

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Jackie Shaffer
I absolutely loved your Art Noveau sketchbook assignment! I liked your use of color and detail in addition to the cohesiveness of color scheme. I think that you could have improved upon composition as well as craftsmanship. Ultimately, your sketchbook assignment has improved from the previous one I critiqued. Keep up the good work!

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1. Which art movement did you focus on?
Earth Art
2. What do you think worked well and what aspects do you feel need improvement?
I liked how I challenged myself with a new material: color pastels. The colors I selected to depict the ocean and the pollution's consequences were accurate and cohesive with one another. I feel like I  could have pad greater attention to detail of the sea mammas and the polluting products in the sea.

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1. What was this artist's intentions?
His intentions were to create a new understanding and perception of the land he was portraying through his artwork.

2. What type of work did they create?
He created sculptures made from objects found in nature. (ex. twigs, mud, snow, etc.)