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I learned that I needed to use less pronouns and choose higher level words. I also need to work on not using such long sentences.

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I learned that I need to use less pronouns, and increase my vocabulary to higher level words. My score did increase because I went back and changed some of my words to more advanced vocabulary. I changed some of my pronouns to just nouns.

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I learned that I needed to go back and re-read what I wrote , and I needed to use higher vocabulary. I also learned that I should not use a lot of pronouns when writing.

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I learned that I needed to use higher vocabulary and work on how I word things. While editing I noticed I had lots of run on sentences.

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I learned to use fewer contractions, and I learned to circle back to my thesis often. Originally, I was only circling back to my topic sentences. When I looked at the rubric, I leaned to circle back to my thesis, too.

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I learned that I needed to use higher level words and less pronouns.

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I learned to choose words carefully, and to make sure everything makes sense. I also learned to go back and reread carefully and make sure there are no typos. The hardest part of editing for me was trying to find the right words to fit best in the sentences.

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I learned that I would need to work better on how I word things, which would include to not use pronouns.

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I learned that is need to use higher level words and to us commas in compound sentences.

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While editing my essay, I learned that I had grammatical errors and I needed to use higher level vocabulary. I also deleted and added sentences where it was needed.

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When editing this essay, I learned that I need to fix my wording of sentences as time and time again I had to edit sentences because the wording of the sentence was incorrect. I also need to work on limiting run on sentences.

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I learned that I need to use higher level words and stop using pronouns. While editing, I found that I had a lot of pronouns that I needed to adjust. Also, the pdf word searches didn't work so I had problems citing pages.

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I learned to not use as many pronouns and to move words or sentences to make the flow sound better. I had the most trouble finding higher level words to substitute other words.