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IT was raining heavily outside thus,I have to stay at home

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He look retarded.In fact,he is the most genius person in the class.

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Jiafu

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since both of us have exam tomorrow,let study together

Suggested: Since both of us will be sitting for the exam tomorrow, let's study together.

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last time i was only drummer in my school thus the school ask me to play for the band

Teacher's comment: Be mindful of your punctuation, Christopher. Same as Amer's?

Suggested: Previously, I was the only drummer in the entire school. Thus, the school asked me to play for the band!

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Jack is very good in math. In fact, he scored Number 1 in class last year.

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John has good grade despite that he is always absent for school.

Suggested correction: John obtained good grades despite being always absent from school.

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He passed his PSLE and was selected for River Valley High School despite not studying for the exam.

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Sally and her sister went to buy vegetables and meat IN ADDITION to they also buy milk and bread☺️

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last time i was the only drummer in school. thurs, the school ask me to play for the band

Teacher's comment: So, is this your sentence or Christopher's sentence?

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However: Jeff was a bench player. However, he was able to score more goals than our ace player.

Teacher's comment: This is a good attempt and it shows you understood the meaning. Good.

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I am not good at playing bowling. On the contary nathaniel is extremely good at it

Teacher's comment: The idea and understanding is there. Let's just learn the right way to write it.

Suggested: I am not good at playing bowling. On the contrary, Nathaniel is extremely good at it.

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For Example: Jenson is a excellent student! For expample, he pay attentions in class and hand up all his assisnments in time

Suggested: Jenson is an excellent student. For example, he pays attention in class and hands up all his assignment on time.

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The hacker guy with dark blue t-shirt is hacking a bank. Thus, he had 5 million dollars with him.

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My brother is so selfish. For example he bought a 'Fruit Plus' sweet and he did not want to share with my siblings.

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For the basketball match , all the basketballers have to be in their jersey . On the contrary they have to wear formal attire for talent showcase after their match.

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Despite: despite losing to our seniors, we are still the best in school

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However: I did not study for my exam however i managed to pass

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The fight was only between them.Furthermore,it got into a gang fight.

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In fact:

Ryan is the biggest student in the class.In fact,he is at least a head taller than the rest.

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Consequently:

Half of the basketball team didnt turn up for training.Consequently,they lost their basketballee

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Example: The man has been convicted with armed robbery and also causing grievous hurt to another person. Thus, he has been given the maximum punishment sentence.

Another possible example: The Games Day offered 5 different sports to be played on an inter-class level. Thus, it was an excellent way to get as many pupils involved in a post-exam activity. I kssk