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The best experience I had during these past 5 years is having been able to participate in a high-performance scholarship during 3 years, I am very glad to have had that honor of having been able to acquire a lot of knowledge during all that time and I also met incredible people and now I consider him as a second family , moreover I passed trough difficult challenges during that time since I had to maintain the scholarship and  get good grades in my high school  but thanks to God I was able to finish it successfully and graduate from that scholarship.

Hello, María José.

Thanks for sharing your paragraph.  I observed you had meaningful details in your description.  Good job.

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Hello, everyone, I want to tell you about one of my best experiences, I have lived so far. It was when I went to Guatemala with my family to visit our relatives on Christmas.

We went to Livingston in the Caribbean in this place I met the Garifuna culture and spent time with my cousins who only see once a year. They showed me one of the most beautiful beaches I have ever seen in my life, then we went to buy in the local market and I bought a hammock for my grandmother. Since then I go to Livingston whenever I go to Guatemala. Sadly, the last year I could not go because of the Pandemic.

Hello, Rafael.

Thanks for sharing your paragraph.  There are a lot of meaningful details in your description.  Thanks for sharing it.

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I have had great experiences, but in the last 5 years I had the opportunity to know many places, and one of these places is Nicaragua, Puerto Cabeza.  Puerto Cabeza is a very bright place because it has beautiful beaches and the people are very funny and friendly, I also got to play with new friends and learn a little about the dialect they speak, Miskito.  When I remember I think that I have never been in a better place than Puerto Cabeza is.  I have also known the capital of Nicaragua which is Managua.

Hello, Emerson.

Thanks for sharing your experiences.  There are remarkable parts in which you are using the grammar structures we've studied.  Well done!

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I've visited a lot of mountains with my friends, but couple years ago i  had my best experience with my friends, we were camping while we singing around the bonfire, and the clouds despair, we could see a lot of beautiful stars, it was a emotional experience and I've never saw that's beautiful stars, I told my grandmother and she saw those stars when she was a kid.

Hello, Wilber.

Thanks for sharing your paragraph.

Just pay attention to a few grammar mistakes such as:

"we singing"  ------------- "we were singing".

"I've never saw" ........... "I've never seen".

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When I was 17 years, I remember going to Guatemala to dance with my high school band, it was great! My mom has always accompanied me to those events and I really liked having that opportunity. Also I have always liked to dance and I enjoyed it a lot.

Hello, Marilin.

Thanks for sharing your paragraph.

I observed you did a good use of grammar structures.  However, try to include more details in your description.

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Hello I want to tell you that one of my favorite places to visit will always be the beach. Last year I visited a very nice place with my family, I tried a lot of food, I ate a lot, I loved everything and I enjoyed it a lot.

Hello, Neidy.

Thanks for sharing your paragraph.

I observed you did a good use of grammar structures.  However, try to include more details in your descriptions.

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I have gone to the beach many times, but 1 year ago i went to the beach with someone special. I consider that when you go to your favorite place with your favorite person makes the place better. I took many pictures that day.  I have never swam but that day I tried it. I ate a lot of food and i spent a lot of time at the beach. I used hamacas, I have always loved hamacas. It was amazing!

Hello, Sofia.

Thanks for sharing your paragraph.  Just pay attention to the past participle in the following verb:

"I have never swam" ----  "I have never swum".

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I have had good trips and vacations with my family, but two years ago was the best vacation I have ever had. We have gone to a water park with all my family and my best friend, too. But things went wrong because there was a lot of people and we couldn´t enter. Anyways we just wanted to have fun, so we decided to go to another water park and there things went wrong again because we have carried food and it was not allowed there. Then, we went to the beach. We have arrived late, but we really enjoyed even the bad parts of the trip. I think is the best experience I have had with my family.

Hello, Kenia.

Thanks  for  sharing  your  experience.  Just  pay  attention  to  the following mistake:

"We have arrived late" ----  "We had arrived late"

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Two years ago was the premier of the las movie of the avengers called "Avengers end game" and I remenber that I was so exited about that, because I really love all the marvels movies and this will be the last one, the hype is growing up not only in me also in all my friends because we have never seen a movie of this quality. The movie was about to start at 12 p.m. and all of us were waiting for transportation from 9pm to 11pm I arrivedand all of us were waiting for transportation from 9pm to 11pm and then we went quickly to cinemark, there were a lot of people only for that movie, after that we saw the movie, we laughed, we cried, and was a very beautiful experience.

Hello, Herber.

Thanks for sharing your paragraph.  I observed you included a lot of vocabulary in your description.  Just pay attention to the following detail:

"Arrivedand".

Also, try to include periods at the end of your ideas.

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My family and I have done tours very often. Although, there is one that brings a lot of good memories.
We were in a beach and that vacation I invited my best friend, We had swam all the afternoon,
and when the sunset start we just sat on the sand and talk about future, We were talking like for an hour or more, furthemore, we haven't had time to talk in a long time, so that chat was great.
Also, that day I rode a horse, I have ridden a horse before, but that day I did it with my nephew and it was very funny, because he was scared. Besides, that day
I cooked with my mom and dad, And I went shopping with my sisters. So for me a good experince is spend time with my famiy and friends.

Hello, Katherine.

Thanks for sharing your paragraph.  Just pay attention to the past participle in the following verb:

"We had swam" ----  "We had swum".

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I've been to Consuma many times with my family. One time, I got the wonderful idea to ride a big roller coaster. Everyone had told me not to do it because I had just eaten pupusas and I get dizzy fast, too. Anyways I was in stubborn mode, when my parents finally allowed me to do it. I've ridden several roller coasters before but that one was new for me because I had never had the oppotunity to ride it. Unfortunately, the roller coaster was going extremely fast and I threw up on everyone there. Besides, my family just made jokes about me. They made me feel better in a way because I was laughing. I think this is the best experience I've had because I won't forget it.

Hello, Liliana.

Thanks for sharing your experience.  Undoubtedly, it was a memorable event.  Well done.