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"Peace cannot be kept by force. It can only be achieved by understanding" - Albert Einstein-

Introduction: Abert Einstein was a scientist and the one who discovered nuclear fission. We was also a worker for peace. But by his indirect actions, he made the strongest weapon of humanity ...

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3/ The proofs of the truth of this quote

Conclusion: Peace is something humanity will never get. For get a fake picture of  peace, human have use a lot of time force to maintain it. But this kind of peace is corrupt and false because the use of force reduce our freedom and our own personal peace. For making peace we are destroying peace

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Intro : Only by reading it, we can see that the author of this quote, Albert Einstein, is against war, or any kind of violence. He wants to tell us that fighting with our brain is the only way peace can be kept. And that to fight physically for peace does not work.

1: topic sentence : What do I think of it, how do I receive the message ?
2: topic sentence : Apply the quote to everyday situations, link it to nowadays' problems.
(3: topic sentence : From Albert's time to nowadays, does the quote still make sense ?)

Conclusion : The message released from the quote calls us to be open minded

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" peace cannot be kept by force . It can only be achieved by understanding " - Albert Einstein-

Introduction: Albert Einstein who  is the author this quote was a scientist. After I saw this quote, I  could not understand. I think he is telling us to be kept peace, we need to fight with our brain. He didn't want us to fight with force.

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"Peace cannot be kept by force. It can only be achieved by understanding" - Albert Einstein-

- introduction: When we read this quote, we can understand what Albert Einstein wanted to tell us is that we can't maintain peace by using power. We have to understand about each other. It mean we have to stop fighting. Thus we are able to get the peace.

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- introduction:  albert Einstein was a famous scientist if not the most famous. He is also the theorist behind the relativity theory. He made many quotes during his life on various subject. In this quote, Einstein shows his perpspective on war.

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- 2. Why did he say that/ exemple that this quote still apply in modern society/ how and why is the quote applicable to everithing

- 3. My personal view of this quote, do I agree?

-  conclusion: This quote resumes Eintein's view on war. Since he made it more happened and nothing wa solves

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The quote refers to the war. The people think if we want to keep the a world peaceful, we need to kept by the force. The war is to try to dominate the other countries. He's a lot of misunderstanding between the people, between the country.

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Explain how it's important to understand
Why I agree with this quote.

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Should peace involve both either force or understanding? For example, to achive higher welfare level, more force of tax payment should be imposed on people. Does this mean that force must be there to achive peace? In my opinion, no. When I have a look at countries who achieved high level of welfare, tax payers do not consider the high tax rates as force. Conversely, they consider

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"Peace cannot be kept by force. It can only be achieved by understanding" -Albert Einstein

In our world peace is something rare and often, by lack of knowledge and commun understanding, people tend to achieve by violence. In fact, peace can only be obtain by showing positive values and tolerance toward other cultures and populations.

- argument 1: peace comes from peace, passive attitude can't lead people to fight
- argument 2: violence can't resolve problem and people can't understand their mistakes by pressure and agresivity

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"Peace cannot be kept by force. It can only be achieved by understanding" - Albert Einstein-

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- conclusion: STRONG!