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- Comparison Btwn 2 texts
- Choosing a global issue (portrayal of female promiscuity issues are addressed and dealt with)
- Has a main overarching argument
- describes the picture orally (gives a bit of an idea of what the picture looks like before analyzing it)
- Question: Do the visual texts have to be turned in anywhere?
- Not rehearsed or written out
- Always easier to grade a written text
- Questions from teacher

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Individual Oral Grading Notes (Sample A) 

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Individual Oral Grading Notes (Sample A) 

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- Text 1 (13 Reasons Why)
- Text 2  (Sallie Mae)
- Global Issue -- Portrayal of female promiscuity in lit
- 13 Reasons Why -- Victimized Female through bullying culture w/ female promiscuity
- Sallie Mae -- Femme fatale - Proud and open about sexuality
- Contrast of male/female promiscuity - shows effect on indiviudals
- male Shows picture -- proud body language, typical pompous jock, no shame --> Btwn males value on sexuality -- admiration
- Girls judging Hannah w/ same picture -- Gaping mouth, side eyes, judgemental --> Shame on women when open about sexuality
- Dialogue -- "Public space that's hot" - relationship based on sex not emotion for men
- Bullying culture affects Hannah -- Shameful body language, hidden victimized --> pity and sympathy
- Justin -- open and relaxed
- 13 reasons why -- female go through entirely different portrayals of sexuality
- Sally Mae -- unforgiving and proud of sexuality
- Done it before and doubtless do it again -- blunt -- brackets -- genuine about feelings and not shameful
- powerful female figure "lamb to the slaughter" -- lamb symbolizes Jesus -- degradation of relgious limitations and female sexuality
- lamb -- victims of Sally Mae -- she has power to slaughter men -- unforgiving no remorse
- "Ain't life a bitch was his head on a platter" -- shows off her sexuality -- humor in such an act
- Suggests a switched gender role -- against the cultural norm -- if females aren't shameful they are dangerous
- portrayal of female figures is completely different -- 13 following cultural norm of hiding and masking sexuality -- Sally Mae - open and proud -- two sides of how females are portrayed
- not real life -- clear difference in media and literature -- must change it
- No question about relationship -- 1st-3rd base
- Gives in to showing picture -- Bryce pressures Justin to reveal details he is interested in
- Put labels on bases of process of sexuality -- culture is too focused on sexuality and sexual relations, quick labels; awareness of issue, priority and value
- What is the purpose? Who are we sympathizing with? -- Hannah; shed light on the victim rather than stereotypical characters -- camera angles close-shot (more connection w/ Hannah); reflective of teenage culture
- Moment typical in this series -- Hannah labeled slut; never able to voice her side of the story; females have to hide and cannot be open about sexuality; so focused on what happened w/ sex vs. other details -- shows bullying cultures
- Sally MaeEntirely shameless -- Pulls different quotes from what student says -- more organized and life back together; cannot trust those words - disingenuous tone -- empty words-- doesn't believe that she will act upon her promises -- refers back to first few lines already establishes she will do it again -- 4th stanza empty promise
- Women dangerous b/c of sexuality -- What does Duffy want us to walk away with? - No shame b/c sex is natural; portrayal of female as hetero male is supposed to shock the reader out of normalcy -- why is it so shocking and unnatural?

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Individual Oral Grading Notes (Sample B) 

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Global Issue - Presence and portrayal of misogyny through power discrimination and sexual objectification in a patriarchal society
- Gold Digger
- Demeans women in blunt manner -- Male dominance present in music video
- Women standing lower than man
- Women scantily clad and vulnerable; man wearing formal clothing -- power dynamics and possession and control over women
- Contrary to lyrics -- women is controlling in lyrics b/c she uses physical appearance and sexual appearance to gain money from man
- doesn't seem to be a lot of analysis of the text -- repeats the same points many times --
- Women Materialistic
- Male gaze women portrayed in a pornographic manner and submissive
- sinful and fantasy magazine covers -- Kanye has control to label women -- MISSING a Large amount of analysis here
- My psychic told me she has an ass like Serena -- Serena reduced to physical appearance -- ORGANIZATION is very jumpy -- REPEATS same point with very little analysis
- "MALE GAZE IS A BIG FACTOR"
- Language used to depict objectification -- direct and blunt way to talk about physical appearance
- no conjunction or punctuation -- reduced to such a shallow manner -- NOT SURE WHAT THIS MEANS
- volume and space linked to reduction of women as object -- only important thing about her
- my breasts hang -- body parts exposed show objectification -- HOW THOUGH?
-- back to punctuation --
-- 2nd point -- ORGANIZATION
-- reversal of power -- model has power -- identifies as her own self instead as the artist
- Speaker's voice and attitude to patriarchal social structure
- Taboo language -- something to be looked at -- shown as a prostitute -- people will coo at -- mocking her identity -- MORE SUMMARY than analysis
- Sum up the different approaches
- Text 1 -- more focused on direct subjugation man has more power because man wrote it -- Are all texts by men like this then?
- Text 2 - written by a female feminist -- mocks and exposes the male gaze -- readers get to understand the model's perspective
- Teacher probes for wider context
- Kanye is known for objectification -- Monster -- women don't even need to be alive for them to be valued -- women rejected for their personality
- wider context for Duffy -- takes on personalities of women that have not been heard of -- portrays women as what the readers are not used to
- More or less effective as a video?
- Major effect -- people don't pay attention to lyrics; women are used to get attention in videos; women sexualized for attention for the music video -- BEST POINT SO FAR
- Music video is more engaging -- shocked by how women are shown objectification and power discrimination