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good topic! speak a taddddd louder

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great topic
try to talk a little louder

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Great job explaining your information, but maybe speak up a little

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You are very professional.
Speak up!
Great Topic: but very controversial, be sure to not offend the real    judges.
You seem very interested and well-educated on your subject.
This presentation is very well put together and i can tell you worked hard on it.
Your pictures are sometimes pretty biased-looking.
Keep in mind that videos will add to your run time.
That said, the video you showed us is very powerful and drives home your argument.
Work on your opposition. Be sure to mention that not all cops act this way, and they're not all bad.
Also, media outlets are sometimes tied to a political party, so you don't want to necessarily show that you possibly support one or the other, because some people will ignorantly automatically disagree with a source that they don't believe in. It's stupid but true, unfortunately.

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- Oppose- officers have split second decision to think life or death
Time- 8:15.86

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speak up a little
with the quotes they are great but make sure you tell us who they are
very heart fulling
make sure you  cited the personal stories for sub 3
what does judy lubin do? like why is she a vaild source

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on the history of argument slide change the color i cant read it at all

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speak up and have more pictures

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This is the most Ive heard you talk!

Very well spoken!

Make sure that you practice so that you can be comfortable when presenting .

On the history of argument slide the orange is very hard to see would recommend changing the font.

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structure your table of contents neater. nice and funny approach, be a little louder when you speak.

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-  Great connection
-  words are well spoken
- citations are needed
- i like the different color slides (its eye  opening)
- for your items bring in your books you wrote.
- Time- 7:29.04

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you have a really good topic but try to speak up more so we can hear you clearly

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The Argument slide and the History of argument slide was hard to read, maybe change the background color

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-speak louder
-your argument slide has a red background and yellow writing and that is hard to see from the back
same with your history of  argument slide
-you need cited information this seems more bias then you want it to be

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- great connection
- pictures on your subpoints
- are  your counter arguments the opposing?
- insert interview
- Time: 7:48.58

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Great Presentation!!

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great topic
great information
cite your sources on your sub points
try not to read the board word for word and since your are well aware of your topic, maybe talk more about your experience from a students stand point (if that makes sense)
good pictures

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Very Intriguing slide designs.
Nice Pictures!

Make sure to practice  so you don't have to look at the board so much

Add Interview.

Great topic very relatable.

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- great connection
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good facts and info

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Abigail Reynolds                  Why Tests Shouldn't Make or Break a Student's Grade

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Abigail Reynolds                  Why Tests Shouldn't Make or Break a Student's Grade

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You have a somewhat long title.
You are very professional.
Keep in mind that your real judges are going to be educators, so be careful not to offend them!
Your presentation is very stylish, i can tell you've worked hard on it.
You could maybe better define "personalized learning."
You are obviously well educated on your subject, so don't read so much!
You have a lot of information on each slide, which can be a bit overwhelming at times. Try to shorten your sentences a little bit. Also, you could put some of that info on you sub-point supporting slides.
Your counter arguments are very good.
Also, you could probably touch on the effects of personalized learning on aspiring college students.
Your first-hand experience with this issue is very important to us.
More pictures would be nice.

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Good information, but more eye contact= less reading on the board

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make your title not cursive, its hard to read from far away
your eye contact could improve
did you have a thesis slide?
"umm" and "uh" are your fillers
what is the ADAA?
nice j

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That was really good.

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great confidence

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you need to make sure you cite
"so" is your filler word
make sure your works cited is alphabetical
you could put more infor that effects wando/charleston
the opposition?
you need to make it a little more understandable of what you are advocating for

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good interest in topic and background info

make sure not to use the word we

make the social media icons a lot bigger on the title screen for social media

remember to label your slides just make sure everything is as clear as possible

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good speaking
good topic
try not to move so much because it could be a distraction to the judges.

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Make sure to fix the "i" to an "I"

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Henry Feingold                  Rising Concerns About Lack of School Psychologists

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Henry Feingold                  Rising Concerns About Lack of School Psychologists

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Great Handshake.
You are very comfortable in front of the audience.
Interesting topic.
Nice speaking voice.
Great interests, we can all relate.
Try not to read as much, you're obviously very educated on the topic.
Try not to use "we."
No opposition?
Social media is a good example.
Great pictures.
Keep in mind that that you don't want to possibly offend the real judges, as they could be in theis career field.

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Good volume and presenting skills , add some flare to your presentation, don't forget to cite on the slides.

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Need some pictures

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Nick Stanton                    Military Draft Reinstated

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Nick Stanton                    Military Draft Reinstated

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Nice Handshake.
You seem very interested in your topic.
Explain your topic a bit more in the beginning, i was confused about the  i was a bit confused about your what side of the argument you were supporting.
Slides are out of order.
Sub point supporting slides?
Great examples about the news outlets and politicians.
You need to make eye contact!
You seem comfortable in front of the audience, but you could have a better speaking voice.
More pictures!

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Make sure to add your thesis/argument

switch the order of the slides to it goes thesis/argument, list your sub points don't have the actual sub points themselves yet, interest in topic, background and history, opposition and refutes, then your actual sub point slides, and finally your personal reflection, conclusion slides

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Awesome sub-points
Cite your sources

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did you have a thesis slide?

you need better eye contact

"like" is your filler word

i think that you need to explain that your first graph had to deal with the dift being installed and how with it the military got stronger
it seemed at the end that you were against it

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Try too look at the audience more and not look at the board so much.

Practice your presentation so you already know what to say fro each slide.

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make sure to have more eye contact

try to articulate or over pronounce your words more I'm losing the words sometimes and make sure to speak up a little more

good presentation just practice a little more

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Try not to read straight off the slide. Great graphs and evidence.

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cite your sources on sub point 1
try to not look at the board too much
nice graphs

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Kevin Duong                  Violence in Healthcare

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Kevin Duong                  Violence in Healthcare

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In your argument/thesis slide: "lower less stress"  i believe you meant to ""lower stress.
you often forget to put "abuse" in past tense.
Need eye contact, you're reading a bit too much, otherwise, you seem comfortable in front of the audience.
Your graphs are very nice.
Flesh out your sub-points some more.
It would help to have some first-hand accounts and experiences quoted in your presentation.

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your nervous habit is swaying back and forth
on your argument slide you need to cite those articles
project your voice some more your a little quiet
good amount of pictures in the slides
good info
nice job!

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you did well explaining your topic!

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Great speaker and extremely informed on the topic!

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i like how you have a lot of info to explain what things mean

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Good information and good job explaining about it

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Stop saying um.

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Great topic
Good 1st sub point
Good information

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Nice Name

good hook

very good interests

good job setting up the background of the argument

something interesting to explore are the attachments used in mass shootings or in shootings to modify the selected weapon by the shooter

what about Australia for refute

try to add more images for subpoint 1 I love the cool looking cartoon cut outs of the guns on certain slides and the overall layout but try to add more images also good job explaining the 71 mass shootings argument

very good speaking skills but try to make more eye contact and don't look at the board so many times

good argument with the two similar guns

very good example of the "can't take away my guns" people and instead explaining exactly what the second amendment is and also explain the subpoint and I don't know if you did this but try to see the second amendment from both viewpoints just a little bit more

also try to go more in depth about the mental illness problem because you touched on it a little but I feel like you should talk about that a bit more.

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good topic
very well spoken and very well educated
in you sub one I would not use the word crazies in your slides, its a little derogatory and informal

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Eye opening topic! Great job on the presentation.

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Great topic.
try to take it slow and breathe when you are presenting.
I like your Lack of Knowledge slides
really like the hitting home slide

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try not to talk so fast because the judges won't understand you.

don't use the word "um" at all, it's not a good presentation skill.

add more pictures.

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Great facts and presentation

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U keep saying um and uh a lot DO NOT use those words

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great hook, interesting topic, don't say um alot and take a breathe every once in awhile , add pictures , add on to job shadow slide, hitting home slide is perfect

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good hook make sure not to mix up sexual harassment vs. sexual violence

good interest
make sure to put the citation as asbuse" (RAINN) not abuse. (RAINN)"

good explanation of rape in the background info

practice just a little on the history slide if you get flustered take a deep breath and take it slow

make sure to impliment the quote from Jessi Burrows

make sure to include some more images to the opposing and refute slides

see if you could get some more responses maybe just go around your class ans write down their responses on pieces of paper

see if you could find some male survivors of sexual violence because you don't usually hear about that sort of stuff

try to  put a quote on your job shadow page or at least have one on another slide

try not to say we lol Ms. Cobb getting into my head now

try to specify the slides that are your sub points

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Good presenting skills but make sure you don't keep your hands in your pockets.

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very interesting topic

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-Great Topic
- You extended your knowledge on the topic (which is great!)

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on you refute slide, you misspelled "guarantee"
on the interview slide, Wando isn't capitalized

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Need more picture

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Interesting keep it up.

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Great topic
Try to keep your hands out of your pockets
More eye contact
Try to add some more pictures
Good quotes on your 3rd sub point

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Great handshake, interesting topic, add more pictures

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Good speaking skills you sound comfortable while talking

missing info in timeline bubbles

try not to use filler words like "um"

understand exactly what you're talking about in the current issues I loved what you said just try not to say I believe

So I think I may have been thrown off by your refute but do you support or don't support stem cells research

try to add images to sub point slides

make it more clear in your refute slide since now I know you ARE FOR stem cell research that you go back and be more specific with your refute and don't focus so much on the playing god argument

try not to include "I don't know why people are mad" because a judge might be one of those people

overall very good but try to change those little things.

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good topic
you use "um" a lot
I would not necessarily say it can fix everything, I would say that it fixes a lot of issues that effect the mass of the population
I love the comment that it can help with teeth
who is laura saladi, its important to metion why your sources are vaild
LOVE THE ACORN COMMENT

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Yes girl you present that topic! Add commas and periods to your quote so it doesn't seem so confusing when reading it. You're very good at speaking.

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Fix the big long quote so you're able to read it better. Practice your slides a little more so you don't have to stop and gather your thoughts too much. Good presentation, very well made (:

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great topic .. great speaking skills

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Great presenting skills! Keep practicing so you don't have to look at the board at all. Great Job!

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Good enthusiasm

Try to slow down whenever you mess up and ARTICULATE (lol you're gonna hate me for that)

Good side examples of your own experiences with children.
practice more with the quote slide.

Try not to have filler terms whenever you mess up like "hold Up".

Things started to slow down in the middle keep the pace up from the beginning.

Extremely good research.

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good speaking skills. also good pictures and examples to back up your argument.

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i like your topic
good information on your sub points
try to slow down when you are presenting so you don't make too many mistakes

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i really like the topic,
it seems a little bit scattered, so maybe explain what you are trying to say
breath, you got this!

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Nice presentation and good facts

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GREAT PRESENTATION

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Make sure you specify that the 5,000 people who died are under 21 to make the point stick.

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Nice pictures and good facts

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so what are you trying to argue? that we need stricter rules?
i love the opposing
I LOVE THE TOPIC

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You did a good job presenting and a very good topic.

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I like the format and all the photos.
I like the graph on the background slide
The history is very interesting
I liked the added positives with moderate consumption.
I like how you added in what it does to the brain

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Make a little more eye contact when speaking. Good personal reflection and conclusion.

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Speak up homeboy

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Great eye contact, but need some pictures and some graphs

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Great presentation

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add pictures

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- Very Informed
- speak up
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add some pictures so your presentation doesn't look blank

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Try to liven up.
very nice presenting skills with good posture and eye contact but try to be a little bit louder
Put more pictures
very good understanding of the topic
have more information on your subpoint slide like one or two more points.

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-speak up a little
-add some pictures please
-can  you add the definition of a concussion, some people might not know exactly what a concussion is
-add some citations to your slides

good topic and I think that the it needs to be advocated for

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Good explanations on each slide, presentation just needs some polishing up.

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Good job at explaining but don't over explain, don't let the nerves move your mouth let the brain move

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Make sure  to have some photos on the slides, it will take some  of the attention off you
Cite your sources through out the presentation
Have some of your points on the slide as well.

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Try to get your thoughts together before you start speaking to reduce stuttering a little (: