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25 MINUTES

4 PGRPHS (4 NOTES)
5 MINUTES ON EACH PGRAPH

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50 MINUTES
1) BRAINSTORM - 3 MIN
2) ARRANGE IDEAS - 5 MIN
3) THESIS STATEMENT - 5 MIN
4) INTRODUCTION - 8 MIN
5) BODY PGRAPH 1 - 8 MIN
6) B.P. 2 - 8 MIN
7) B.P 3 - 8 MIN
8) CONCLUSION - 5 MIN

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Hi Jeremy,

I am glad that you are finally home, I hope you are in pink. Plus, thanks for your greatest support to our drama team, it is highly appreciated!

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Thank you for congratulate me on our group achivement.It was a great moment and i hope you can join us next year.

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Thank you for congratulate me on our group achivement.It was a great moment and i hope you can join us next year.

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Glad to hear that you are recovering, Jeremy! Thank you for the wish. I am also thrilled that we finally managed to bring pride to our school for winning this drama competition after 5 years.

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thank you jeremy for the nice congrats words. finally, after 5 years our scholl won the competition. i quite suprised when i heard you are go to the hospital, but now you are felling better, good to hear that.

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Hi Jeremy,
I am glad that you are feeling better now. Hope you will always be in a pink of health. Thank you Jeremy for congratulating us, I am also proud that we are able to win the drama competition after 5 years.
-hanis-

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Hi Jeremy,
I am so glad to hear that you are getting well! It was too bad you can't join us during the competition! Oh, thank you so much for congratulating us!

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Hi Jeremy,
I'm glad you finally back home and feeling much better, I hope that we will meet soon. Thank you for congrats us and endlessly support. I really appreciated it.

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Hi jeremy, im glad that you already come back home. I hope you are doing fine and has fast recovery. Thank you because congratulating me. I also didn’t expect that i can bring the trophy back after 5 years for our school.

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It's great to hear from you. I hope you come back completely healthy. Thank you Jeremy for congratulating us, I also didn't expect that we were going to win this drama competition.

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Hi Jeremy,

I am glad to hear that you are finally back home and doing great. Thank you for congratulating us for winning the drama competition and bringing back the trophy for our school after 5 years. we were all very happy and very proud of it. Wish that you could be with us on the day of the competition.

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Hi Jeremy,

It's great to hear from you ! i hope you're always in a good health. Anyway Jeremy, thank you so much for congratulate us about the drama competition trophy that our school won after 5 years. for your information, the school was very proud and the student was very happy about the fact that we have won after a long time!

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Thank you Arif, it's an honour for me to contribute to the school. I am very happy myself

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Thank you Arif, it's an honour for me to contribute to the school. I am very happy myself

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I am glad to hear your health progress. Thank you for your support Jeremy, your support is also the main reason for our achievement. Our competition trophy after 5 years is for all of us.

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Hi Jeremy!

Thank you Jeremy for your warm congratulatory wishes! It means a lot for me and our group team member. Plus, it is great to hear that you feel so much better now. The trophy we got in the drama competition after five years has paid off our marvellous teamwork. This competition has created a lot of memory as it is challenging yet entertaining. It will be more interesting if you were also there at the next competition!

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Hi Jeremy,

Thank you, I really appreciate you taking time to express that! I am grafeful that our school could finally win in the drama competition! By the way, I am glad that you have been discharged and are in better condition now.

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I am glad that you are feeling better now. Thank you for you wish.  Though you were not there, I am so grateful for your support.

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Thank you so much Jeremy. So glad to hear you in much better. I'm also proud of us for doing well in drama competition. Thank you again.

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Thank you so much Jeremy. So glad to hear you in much better. I'm also proud of us for doing well in drama competition. Thank you again.

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Thank you for your congratulations, Jeremy. However, I also want to thank our school teams too, because without them, there would be no trophy. I and team wish you all the best in coping with your recovery. I hope we can celebrate this success together soon.

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Thank you for your congratulation wishes, Jeremy. I'm so thankful that our hard work are really paid off. However, it feels different without you on the play, but I'm glad that you have been discharged from hospital.

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thank you, Jeremy. it was so great that our school can bring the trophy home. thank you again

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Hello Jeremy! I feel sorry for you due to your sickness and need to hospitalised for a while. Gratefully you are discharged. I hope your health will recover gradually soon. Thank you for congratulate me. I am over the moon when receiving this trophy. It is so meaningful for me.

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Thank you so much! I'm glad to hear that. I'm soprry for younot be able to join us in drama competition last week. I am glad that you're feeling better at home Jeremy, I hope you can join the next drama competition soon with us and win another trophy for our school again.

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Hi Jeremy,
Thank you for your letter and i am very grateful that you have been back from hospital. Plus, thank you for your endless support for our team.

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From your letter , I gathered that you were finally back home from hospital. I am so happy to hear that and I hope you have a good rest at home. Thank you so much Jeremy for congrating all of us , we were truly in shocked when the speaker announced our school's name as the top winner and we cried in happiness. I really appreciate your encouraging words.

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How are u doing Jeremy? Thankyou Jeremy for congrating us. I feel very happy and excited that i had won the competition trophy to our school.

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Hi, Jeremy, I am happy to read your letter again! Thank you for your wish for the drama competition, it's really cool that our school had finally won this trophy after 5 years. I felt proud and happy too! Hoping that we can continue with this spirit.

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Hi, Jeremy, I am happy to read your letter again! Thank you for your wish for the drama competition, it's really cool that our school had finally won this trophy after 5 years. I felt proud and happy too! Hoping that we can continue with this spirit.

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Hi Jeremy.

Glad to hear that you getting better than before. Thank you for the compliment. It's really a great and wonderful moment after waiting for 5 years to seize back the title in the drama competition !. It's look like all the hard works were paid off.

-anisnajihah-

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Hi Jeremy,
I'm very glad to hear that you have been discharged from the hospital. I am sorry you had to miss participating in the State Drama Competition. Thank you for the congratulatory wish! We are all indeed proud and happy to have won the state level competition after 5 years.

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I hope you getting better soon. Thank you Jeremy for congrating us for our achievement in order winning the drama competition and successfully bringing back the trophy! 

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I hope you getting better soon. Thank you Jeremy for congrating us for our achievement in order winning the drama competition and successfully bringing back the trophy! 

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Hi Jeremy,

I am glad to know that you're home and recovering! Thank you for the kind wishes. I am feeling great as well that you are congratulating us and are happy for our success. Appreciate it a bunch!

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Hi Jeremy,

I hope you are having a well recovering period. Thank you for the congratulations you sent to me a few days ago. I definitely felt huge goosebumps when we were announced as the winners of the drama competition and finally brought back a trophy after 5 long years. Nevertheless, the team would have been much better if you were in it, too.

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Hi Jeremy,
I am on top of the world by the time I received the email from you and knowing that you are finally discharged from the hospital. Speaking of the drama competition, I was so thankful for finally make our school winning it again after 5 years. You must know all the struggles we had! Thank you so much for the compliments and reaching out to me and just so you know that how I  wish that you were there with us celebrating our winning.

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Hi Jeremy, I am glad to hear that your condition become much better. Anyways, thank you for your warm wishes and we are trully happy and grateful as we had bringing the trophy for our school after a long time. It really impossible to win without hardwork from our team including you. I hope you can join the competition for next time

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I am happy to hear that you are now getting better. Thank you for congregating us, Jeremy. All this effort would not happen without the hard work of our school teams.

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Dear Jeremy,
I am so happy to hear that you are getting recover. Thank you for the congratulation wish! I never dreamed to bring back the trophy after 5 years of blood sweat ups and downs.

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Hi Jeremy,
I'm relieved to hear that your health is getting better. Thank you for your kind wishes. Actually, I have never expect that we managed to bring back the drama competition trophy to our school. I wish you were there with our drama team.

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Hi, Jeremy,

I hope you feeling good. I planning to visit you soon. Oh my God, I also couldn't believe it myself when we won the drama competition. Thank you! All the hard works goes to everyone that supporting and trust us.

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Thank you on your achievement . It is a honour to the school after could not bring it back in 5 years ago. I also did not expect that the team of school get back it . Thank you

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Azmi

Thank you so much Jeremy for your praise to me. I hope you are feeling well at there, I glad you write that letter for me.

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It such a good news to know that you are already back home and feeling much better. Thank you for the congratulations and actually we never expected that we would win this drama competition after 5 years. It such a sweet memories to win this trophy. I am glad that you happy for us and thanks again!

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It such a good news to know that you are already back home and feeling much better. Thank you for the congratulations and actually we never expected that we would win this drama competition after 5 years. It such a sweet memories to win this trophy. I am glad that you happy for us and thanks again!

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Thank you Jeremy. It was so nice to hear from you. However, I am glad that you are feeling better from time to time.

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thanks jeremy i appreciate it. thank you for your support in my efforts. it's a sweet memory for me

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Hi Jeremy,

i'm very glad that you are finally out from hospital and stay safely at home. Thank you for congratulate us on whining the drama compitition. i really miss your roleplay too.

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I am glad to know that you are back to home. Thank you for congratulating our drama team, I appreciate that.

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Hi Jeremy,
I am glad to hear that you are getting better now.It was great that finally we were able to bring back the drama competition trophy back to our school. Thank you for congratulations us.
-faqihah

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I am glad to hear that you are getting better. Thank you Jeremy. I didn't think that I am the only one who bringing back the trophy. It is because all of the effort made my team members who were very energetic to keep practising. They were brilliant!

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What a good news! I'm so grateful and glad to hear that your health is getting better now. I hope you are having a good rest at home. Thank you for your warm wishes, Jeremy! I am very happy and proud that we made to bring the trophy back to our school after 5 years. Though you were not there, we were appreciate for your support towards our school team.

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Dear Jeremy,

I am glad to hear this good news from you. Hopefully, you take some time to rest and recuperate. I am pleased that you updated yourself about our school’s achievement despite your current condition. Thank you for the congratulatory email. We were surprised that we won the trophy.

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Thank you Jeremy for congrats us. I appreciate it a lot. I am relief that you are finally recovered. By the way, we did not expect that our team win the drama competition and it was memorable moment for us.

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I'm glad to hear from you that you are getting home. Thank you for your congrating as well, Jeremy. We also can't expected we won on this time. It's pity you can't join us on this time.

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I definitely want we to join for the drama team next year. I heard that it will take place from our drama coach. It is really fun learning new things at these drama team, Jeremy!

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Thankyou Jeremy. Its so great to hear you feeling much better. By the way thank you so much for you supporting for my drama competition.

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Thankyou Jeremy. Its so great to hear you feeling much better. By the way thank you so much for you supporting for my drama competition.

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Hi Jeremy,
I'm glad to know you already recovering. Thanks for your support from beginning to the last and I would like to thank you for your congrats!

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Im glad to hear that you are now recovering. Thank you Jeremy!  i'm on top of the world when it was announced. it was unexpected but all of us did our best while having fun during the competition.

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I am glad to hear about you, hope you are doing fine. Thank you for your wishes! You know it was my first time join this drama competition and i am very glad that our team had winning it after a long time.

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I am so glad to hear that you are feeling much better at home now! I would like to express my gratitude and thanks upon your beautiful wishes of the drama competition. I would not be able to perform really well if it was not because of your endless supports. I am beyond honoured to know you are proud of me!

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I am so glad to hear that you are feeling much better at home now! I would like to express my gratitude and thanks upon your beautiful wishes of the drama competition. I would not be able to perform really well if it was not because of your endless supports. I am beyond honoured to know you are proud of me!

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I'm so pleased that you're finally home. Thank you for congratulate me on the winning in the drama competition. It was above my greatest expectation! - anis syazana

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I'm so pleased that you're finally home. Thank you for congratulate me on the winning in the drama competition. It was above my greatest expectation! - anis syazana

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I'm happy hear from you. thank you for congrating us. I really appreciate it. But I think, it will be more wonderful if you're there.

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Hey Jeremy!

I'm glad to know that you are feeling well and went back home safely. Thank you for your kind wish! I'm happy to bring back the drama competition trophy for our school. Thank you all for your support!

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Hi Arif, good to hear that you are recovering and had back home from the hospital. Thank you Arif, it cant be happened without your help in our team. It will be great if you are with us during the competition.

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Hi Jeremy!
Glad to hear you feeling better and back to home. Thank you for congratulate us won drama competition after 5 years. I really missed having you at there.

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Indeed, we felt on top of the world when we were photographed with our trophy. The most interesting story about the competition was that our teammate, Sabrina won The Best
Performer Award! She did a really great job by playing a funny step sister role. Another interesting story was that our drama teacher bought us lunch at McDonald before going back to our school. All of us were having a great lunch together.

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I am so glad to hear that you are feeling much better at home now! I would like to express my gratitude and thanks upon your beautiful wishes of the drama competition. I would not be able to perform really well if it was not because of your endless supports. I am beyond honoured to know you are proud of me!

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I am so glad to hear that you are feeling much better at home now! I would like to express my gratitude and thanks upon your beautiful wishes of the drama competition. I would not be able to perform really well if it was not because of your endless supports. I am beyond honoured to know you are proud of me!

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-anis

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hi jeremy
i am very happy to hear that you are finally going back home and you are feeling better than ever. Thank you so much for the wish, it made me the happiest person ever to hear that from you. All of my hardwork are finally paid off and i am very happy for it, thanks again!

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Hi Jeremy,
Thank you so much for the wishes. I hope you get a good rest after the drama competition. The trophy is so mean to our school after 5 years.

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atiyah

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Hi Jeremy,

I'm very grateful! that you getting better now. Thank you for congratulating me and I'm very thrilled to finally bring this trophy back to our school after several years of struggling to get it
(Irfan)

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I'm grateful that you are getting much better. Thank you for congratulating us because win in the drama competition to our school after 5 years. I'm also happy and can't believe that we win and bring back a trophy in the drama competition.

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I'm grateful that you are getting much better. Thank you for congratulating us because win in the drama competition to our school after 5 years. I'm also happy and can't believe that we win and bring back a trophy in the drama competition.

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I am glad that you are feeling much better now . Thank Jeremy , finally after those years we had won this drama competition and it was honor to be the one who bring back the pride to our school .

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I am glad that you are feeling much better now . Thank Jeremy , finally after those years we had won this drama competition and it was honor to be the one who bring back the pride to our school .

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1. Hi jeremy very exciting for hear you! Thank you for the wishes and it was very wonderful competition. It was amazed us for winning the compettion. Hopefully you fast recovery and we will meet at school.

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Thank you Jeremy for your wish and congrating me. Im very unexpectable for this win in drama competition. Thanks for God cause give me chance to bring back the drama competition trophy. Im very appreciated!

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Thank you Jeremy for congratulating us. It is such a wonderful moment because we won the drama competition after five years. I am also happy that you are getting better now.

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Thank you Jeremy for congratulating us. It is such a wonderful moment because we won the drama competition after five years. I am also happy that you are getting better now.

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Hi Jeremy
I glad that you are doing well and recovering. Thank you for congratulating us for winning the drama competition after 5 years. I am very proud of our school and they are so happy with the winning!

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 I am happy to hear that you feeling well. Thank you for your wishing for this drama competition obtained the trophy. I am truly happy and glad too.

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 I am happy to hear that you feeling well. Thank you for your wishing for this drama competition obtained the trophy. I am truly happy and glad too.

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i am glad to hear that you feeling much better and i hope you are in the pink of health. By the way thanks for the congratulations given. Actually i didn't even expect that our school would win this drama competition. i feel so proud and very happy.

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thank you jeremy for congrats for our team. firts it was a surprising achievement because we do not enough people in our team but it is okay, we understood your condition. nikki 

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thank you jeremy for congrats for our team. firts it was a surprising achievement because we do not enough people in our team but it is okay, we understood your condition. nikki 

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jingwen   Yes, you were right. There were many interesting stories that happened during the competition which I would like to share with you. One if them is our team member, Joe met his childhood friend, Sarah who hasn't contacted with one another for six years since she moved to another state. All of us feel that they were match made in heaven. Another interesting story that I am excited to share with you is I realized the hidden talent of our teacher in charge, Mr. Tom. He was a nature born singer! We discovered that during the afterparty that night we won the competition.

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jingwen   Yes, you were right. There were many interesting stories that happened during the competition which I would like to share with you. One if them is our team member, Joe met his childhood friend, Sarah who hasn't contacted with one another for six years since she moved to another state. All of us feel that they were match made in heaven. Another interesting story that I am excited to share with you is I realized the hidden talent of our teacher in charge, Mr. Tom. He was a nature born singer! We discovered that during the afterparty that night we won the competition.

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Hi jeremy,

i am so grateful that your health becoming better than before. Thank you for the appreciation wish of our team winning the first place in drama competition. Our team hard work finally paid off, i am so happy because after the five years we can bring our trophy back.

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Yes of course jeremy its was very interesting, the competition are so wonderful with many people come to see us. Beside that, in the competition we make many new friend from that coming from other school.

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yes jeremy it's very interesting and fun. I had an experience I will never forget. There are many things I want to share with you

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The most challangers is where we see other school present thei show with very great and with fully energy. It makes us nervous in sudenly. However when the time is coming for our group we get the best show from judges.

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Yes, we have many interesting stories to share with you! Firstly, the ones that we feel weak with drama competition which is Amri get praise by the judges. Secondly, we also excited because our drama competition's teacher wants to reward us with grand prize.

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Two interesting stories that i want to shared are many school are participate in the drama competition this time. It was really amazing to watch their performance because they are very talented. Other than that, I also got a new friends from other team. We shared a lot of experienced and stories in practising the drama competition

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It was definitely our best moment after 5 years! We did not expect to win since other teams were amazing but our coach, Miss Oh definitely did not let our guard down. She motivated us by saying to imagine holding the trophy on the stage. Although our junior, Alia looked trembling the minute before our turns, she managed to overcome it right after. It was such an intense competition but we did it anyway! Those hard works sure paid off.

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Sure our drama teams cannot hide our feelings anymore! Ofcourse there’s a lot of stories i want to share to you, one of it is when there’s a team from Sekolah Bandar Baru just missed the competition because they coming about 1 hour late for the registration. The judges decided to disqualified the team. Oh another interesting moment i want to share with you is when the announcers are announced about the winner, everyone on the hall just cheer our school name together and giving us such as a huge clap! That was a very unforgettable memory for our drama teams.

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Yes, there were so many dramas going on during the contest! The most memorable one is the time when our school drama team's name which is "The Storyteller Team" being called to the stage as the winner of the drama competition! I still got goosebumps reminiszing back at the moment. Next, the second most interesting moment is during our drama team worked together to brainstorn the idea and performed on the stage. I think we have the best teamwork ever!

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hakimah

I want to share with you some interesting stories about the competition. one of our friend was very nervous at that day and she was wavering while speaking on the stage, but the outcome was very good because the audience find it funny. Besides, after winning the drama competition our teacher treat us to a restaurant. the restaurant was very good that i want to recommend for us to eat whenever we are free soon.

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I really have many interesting activities and stories I did during the drama team competition going on. Where my team had to make a sudden speech. Several participants were selected to deliver their speeches and it was amazing to see them perform. Furthermore, the audience also gave a roaring applause after we finished the drama activity.

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Of course Jeremy! I'm on cloud nine. There were so many talented people joined this drama competition. It was a great rivalry. I got to know their advantages from their drama competition. - anis syazana

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Of course Jeremy! I'm on cloud nine. There were so many talented people joined this drama competition. It was a great rivalry. I got to know their advantages from their drama competition. - anis syazana

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Of course I have many interesting stories to share with you about the competition. Our drama team was very happy for winning and we made some new friends as well. More importantly we won this time and this going to be an unforgettable win.

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Yes, I've posted the pictures of the trophy on Facebook for momento. It was amazing! We were happy since it's our win after five years. There were many memorable stories to remember on, our drasma coach Mr Ali was crying while smiling after our school was announced as the winner, When we were on the stage to take the award, we were so nervous and happy. Also, during the competition itself, our classmates Ira nearly tripped when she walked to the left to the right! Luckily she didnt fall down.. Overall, it was memorable to me.

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Yes, our school was prepared a trophy for the competition. And ya, finally used it on stage for our winning competition. I'm so happy for it and took photos and posted on Facebook to share for all my friends around.

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Yes Jeremy, during the drama competition so many things happened and of course we are very happy because after 5 years, our school managed to win the drama competition. Other school is very high competitors to us because they very great during the drama competition. Other than that, we make more a lot of friends there.

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That goes without saying! The coach certainly will agreed. Since we been missing out the best drama king ever. Hoping that you will be the next main character of the upcoming drama competition next year.

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yes, there are a lot of interesting stories happened during the drama competition. Firstly, when i get to watch various of creative performance by other school teams. Second, when we are announced to be the winner of the drama competition.

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Certainly! There were so many things happened during the drama competition as it was a bittersweet experience not only to us but to the crowd. The best part is when the audience started to cheer when we danced in the first part of the drama. They loved our dance moves. Besides, I still remember when some of them had their tears running down their cheeks when I did the monologue part. I was so proud of our school!

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Yes Jeremy , there is me in the pictures holding trophy on Facebook. All of us looked cheerful in the pictures as we were truly happy and proud with our achievement that was unexpected ! I felt like crying during the photo session. You were right , I have lots of interesting stories to share with you about the competition. Firstly , I got selected as The Best Competitor and it was unforgettable moment in my life. Secondly

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Yes, before this i posted image in facebook. Anyway thankyou, we all so happy and unexpected because we won this drama competition. The drama competition was so amazing because there are have so many wonderful students to show their great efforts. Besides that, i am also happy because many people came to see our competition which can improve my confidents. So, that was wonderful drama competition ever

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Yes, before this i posted image in facebook. Anyway thankyou, we all so happy and unexpected because we won this drama competition. The drama competition was so amazing because there are have so many wonderful students to show their great efforts. Besides that, i am also happy because many people came to see our competition which can improve my confidents. So, that was wonderful drama competition ever