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I totally agree with the idea that people living in a city is bad for our health. Health has always been the top concern of people through the ages. We are living in a developing country, many companies are also expanding due to the employment needs of the people. Therefore, environmental pollution is inevitable. First, industrial emissions and dust from factories, emissions from traffic engines and vehicles are increasing uncontrollably. For example, Hanoi has been in the top 10 most polluted cities in the world since 03/2020. Second, water pollution will cause immunodeficiency in the body. If the water is polluted, the organisms will be equally affected. Besides, the increasing number of vehicles makes noise pollution become serious. Although, this is very convenient for human transportation. However, imagine what happens to humans when hundreds of car horns blaring at once. Therefore, we need to take many measures to prevent pollution. For example, encouraging people to use clean energy, use natural products... In short, living in the city is more dangerous than in the countryside.

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I entirely agree with the idea that  the health of people living in the city is getting worse and worse. The first reason is that there are many factories, so the amount of industrial waste  released to the air is extremely large. Consequently, citizens do not have enough fresh air to breath, which has a huge impact on their health. Then it causes a plenty of diseases in the lungs, heart, respiratory system and so on. The second reason is heavy noise pollution. Because the number of citizens has been increasing more and more rapidly, the number of people using private vehicles has also increased. In the early morning or late afternoon, the noise  reaches its peak, it is annoying to people who live nearby the road. And gradually, the diseases in the ears happen to them. Moreover, the industrial waste not treated has been released directly into the water, making it polluted. Besides, The government should have measures for these problems to help people suffering in those situations. To sum up, Living in the city is bad for the health of citizens. 

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I entirely agree with the idea that  the health of people living in the city is getting worse and worse. The first reason is that there are many factories, so the amount of industrial waste  released to the air is extremely large. Consequently, citizens do not have enough fresh air to breath, which has a huge impact on their health. Then it causes a plenty of diseases in the lungs, heart, respiratory system and so on. The second reason is heavy noise pollution. Because the number of citizens has been increasing more and more rapidly, the number of people using private vehicles has also increased. In the early morning or late afternoon, the noise  reaches its peak, it is annoying to people who live nearby the road. And gradually, the diseases in the ears happen to them. Moreover, the industrial waste not treated has been released directly into the water, making it polluted. Besides, The government should have measures for these problems to help people suffering in those situations. To sum up, Living in the city is bad for the health of citizens. 

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I agree that living in the city is the leading cause of our health deterioration. First,dust from factories and vehicles causes air quality to deteriorate, which is the cause of frequent respiratory diseases in urban areas. Second, living in this areas, people both have to adapt to the hustle and bustle and endure isolated activities in society, suffering from psychological and spiritual diseases is an inevitable consequence. Final,food sources are not clean, contain substances harmful to the body. As resul ,living in the city for a long time is harmfu for our health

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I totally disagree that if we live in a city it will be bad for our health because in town areas, people can have a large number of opportunities which are impossible for them who live in villages. First, big city have many facilities available such as hospitals, recreational spaces which rural areas do not have. For example, many researchers have proved that the number of death in the rural area is higher than who live in the big city because city people can get immediate help by doctors if they are sick and they do not die like people in the villages because they have the right cure immediately. Second, the people living in town areas have the opportunity get higher education in comparison with the village dwellers. Example, who live in town will have more better chance to work in the good company than who live in rural areas because of schools in the city have more teachers with higher knowledge to teach the student. To conclude, though some people think that living in big towns is injurious to health, it is totally a negative thought because spending life in big cities help people to get the education they need and also ensures a prosperous life.

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I totally agree with the statement living in the city is bad for our health because of some reason. To begin with, the massive scale of carbon dioxide released by traffic transports affect people's life. According to the research, approximately 70̀̀̀̀̀̀̀̀̀̀ percent of polluted air was produced by transportation. Secondly, the condition to live in a city is high pressures. To make ends meet, employees spend at least 8 hours working in factories and also need to care about their kids. This leads to stress which can cause sickness and pain. Last but not least, the relationship between person and person is not connected. As you can see in real life, nearly half of the people living in a city mostly don't have a real friend and just be alone in job or study. As a result, when trouble comes, we use all the time to solve and ignore our health. In the conclusion, Choosing to live in a city can make your health worse but also give you an opportunity to have a better income

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Nowadays, the health of the people living in the city has been decreasing. I totally agree with these ideas for some reason. The cause for this is air pollution from factories because the country we live in is developing each day, so it requires more factories to provide the need for citizens. In addition, the emissions from factories are a lot. It's not only the emissions are from factories but also from the vehicles. Consequesion is, people who go out to work every day will interact with those atmospheres and make their bodies get worse throughout time without them knowing it. secondly, the threat to the health of people is noise pollution especially for people who have to live near urban. When we hear those loud noises it leads to us do not pay attention to what we do. For example, when we are working at coffee or home we can not focus on what we doing because to louder out there and also makes us feel uncomfortable. Therefore, stress happens to people, and if we stress it has an impact on our health. In conclusion, if you want your body to become healthy you must know how to prevent yourself from the negative effect on your body.

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Nowadays, people tend to move to the city to live because of the desire to have a better job opportunity, higher salary, and more complete living conditions. But there are still many opinions that "Living in the city is bad for our health", I completely agree with this opinion. In fact, there are many amenities in the city such as schools, hospitals are available everywhere, supermarkets and small and large markets are available in every locality, or other things that are harder to find are in the city center. However, benefits must also be harmful, the air in the city is not fresh because of the development and competition between other factories as well as means of transport, so the volume of harmful gasses appearing in the air every day in the city is a lot. In addition, the population density is dense, so it will not be possible to avoid daily conflicts and frictions. In short, in the city, the facilities are very complete, but besides that, the price is quite expensive plus the polluted air makes the city not really an ideal place to live.

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Nowadays, science is more developed day by day than before. So that means factories are also established a lot. Because of bad factories, the environment is being polluted, especially the city. I totally agree with this idea. Firstly, waste from factories is polluted and many of them haven’t done waste treatment before it comes to the environment. For example, a few years ago, Formosa didn’t do that. They discharged trash into the sea. It makes fish die a lot, causing many problems for central Vietnamese. Secondly, not only the pollution, but also the noise. In a big city, there are many workers, factories and vehicles. That makes the city very noisy. Sometimes we can be stressed because of that. Like you see the traffic jams, construction sites, etc.. When I think about that I will get mad because of the noise. Finally, living in the city also means we have to work every day. This is a reason why the city’s people usually don’t have good relationships with the others. How can they contact each other when they are working? To sum up, living in the city is bad for your health. If you can, you should live in the suburbs.

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Living in the city is bad for our health. I agree with this opinion because it is the current state of the city. First, the noisy living environment in the city can affect our sleep. And once sleep is affected, it will make our health decrease. Second, smog pollution affects the air quality in the city. Breathing is the most important thing for humans because it helps us maintain life. If the breathing environment is polluted, it will have very bad effects on our health. The last thing, the crowded traffic environment of the city is very dangerous because it is prone to traffic accidents. Therefore, living in the city can have a very bad effect on our lives.

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I totally agree with the idea that living in a city is bad for our health. Someone living in the cities has a bad health due to the reasons. First, traffic in the cities is crowded every time and factories release smoke, which makes carbon dioxide increase in the atmosphere. Therefore, they cannot have fresh air as in the countryside. When they breathe, they will put a large amount of carbon dioxide into our body. Their lungs will be affected a lot, which will lead to reduce health. Second, eating habit, it is made from working late. A lot of people in the cities have to work overnight, they must eat at midnight, which is not good for digestive system and weight. Eating at midnight can increase their weight, which can affect to heart, blood, so on. Therefore, living in the cities is bad for health due to the atmosphere and the way of working.

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I strongly agree with the statement that spending our life to live in the urban area brings many harmful effects on health because of some reason. The first one why I am in agreement with this opinion is the traffic jams in the city often occurs, affecting people's breathing ability. For instance,  toxic substances in the exhaust of motorbikes and cars can cause diseases related to the lungs. Moreover, people who live in urban always be affected by noise pollution. For example, construction works affect citizens' sleep as well as their mental health. In conclusion, it will be better to live in a peaceful place such as a small city or rural area if you do not want your health to get worse.

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Nowadays, so many people like to live in a city because of benefits it can bring to them. Therefore, society has many kinds of people from bad to good, and I agree to living in a city will hurt our health. To begin with, there are so many people living in, that means we will have a lot of motorcycles and the more motorcycle we get the more pollutions we cause. It has a horrific impact on our life in an indirect way. For instance, the natural environment and many animals nows become extinct because of pollution and imagine what would happen if all animals and plant life went away. Humans will lose their food resources and then they die by inches so, I say it has an indirect effect on us. Secondly, it is not easy for us to control the infection of viruses. Many people from many countries crowded in a single region and we do not know who gets sick and who is not. For example, covid-19, if we can control before it becomes popular all over the world, the pain would not begin. If we made other countryside develop their economics, people might have more choice to live in and decrease the number of people live in a city. To summarize, we can get into a lot of trouble about health because we still do not have the solution for these problems. We have to pay more while living in a city instead of countryside.

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In recent years, the health quality of city dwellers has been decreasing day by day. And I agree that living in the city is bad for health. Firstly, air pollution from the smoke and dust of vehicles, from the daily-life emissions of people, etc. has caused respiratory diseases for people living in the city. Second, noise pollution affects people's quality of life as well as health. In short, in the city, the environment is easily polluted, which is harmful to human health.

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In recent years, the health of the people living in the city has been decreasing. I completely agree with these ideas for some reasons. The cause for this is air pollution from factories because the country we live in is developing each day, so it requires more factories to provide the need for citizens. Because of that, the emissions from factories are a lot. In addition, not only the emissions are from factories but also from the vehicles that emit cacbon dioxit. As a result, people who go out to work everyday will breathe in those gases and make their body get worse throughout time without them knowing it. The second threat for the health of people is noise pollution especially for people who have to live near the road or have to go out to work in rush hour. When we hear those loud noises it can make us lose concentration and we can not focus on work. For instance, when we are working at home to finish the job before the deadline but the noise from outside makes you unable to get the job done. Therefore, stress happens to people, and if we stress all the time it can surely make our body sick. In conclusion, if you want your body to become healthy in the future then living in urban areas is a bad idea.

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In recent years, the health quality of life in urban areas is decreasing day by day. I totally agree with this opinion” Here are three reasons why the health quality of life in urban areas has decreased. First of all, The city has serious air pollution. For example, vehicles emit a large amount of CO2 that damages the lungs. Finally, water pollution is due to poor people's awareness. For example, People put garbage into the Cau Tre River, making the river seriously polluted. In conclusion, it seems to me that it is more beneficial for our health to live in small cities although it is disadvantageous to some extent

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Living in the city will help us get a good job , but the price of it is health . I agree with living in a city will bad for our health . Frist , diaseases is increasing day by day and high crime rate . EX, air pollution is at an alarming level by motorbike and factory ,  some awareness about wrong littering cause of environment pollution or just recently Covid 19 which is seriously affecting life  . Second , overpopulation will lead to overconsumption of food . Ex , quanity food is reduce will cause trade in dirty food to serve consumers . So we need blance between countryside and urban , medical and infrastructure development . So let's catch the chance to change our life to be better

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I completely agree with the statement that living in a city is bad for your health. First, overpopulation in big cities is a complex problem that the government find it hard to solve. This causes a lot of trouble such as lack of land, unemployment,...For example, according to Tuoitre.vn, more than 1 million people unemployed in 2021. Second, air pollution affects your breath so much because there have several factories in big cities. In conclusion, it will be better if you live in a village than live in a city because it's peaceful and has a fresh air.

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Living in a city is bad for our health. Do you agree or disagree?

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Main idea 1: have a large number of opportunities which are impossible for them who live in villages

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Main idea 2: the people living in town areas have the opportunity get higher education

Supporting details 2: schools in the city have more teachers with higher knowledge to teach the student

Concluding sentence spending life in big cities help people to get the education they need and also ensures a prosperous life.

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Living in a city is bad for our health. Do you agree or disagree?

Topic sentence: Living in a city is bad for your health.

Main idea 1: Lower salary.

Supporting details 1: From 2009 to 2019, the population size of Vietnam has increased by 10,4 million people. Therfore, in big cities, unemployment rate is very high.

Main idea 2: Air pollution affects your breathing ability

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Topic sentence: In recent years, the health quality of life in urban areas is decreasing day by day.

Main idea 1: Due to air pollution

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Main idea 2: Due to water pollution/noise pollution

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5. Many people claim that history and philosophy subjects are not necessary for their career. The most popular reason is that it does not help them in the future, so they want to use that time for another purpose such as learning English. But, on the contrary, I strongly disagree with this statement because of some reasons. About history, it helps young people to understand your culture ;and how your culture and country have evolved. Suppose that you had a foreign friend, he asks you about features of your culture, you can not say anything about that because you have no knowledge of it. About the latter, philosophy exposes you to become a great debater, and teaches you critical thinking, which is important for your learning in college. In conclusion, history and philosophy subjects are necessary for all people,especially for young people.

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6. I strongly agree we should learn more new languages for some reasons. Firstly,we have more opportunities to get a job because many companies nowadays require people who can speak more than one language. For example, the FPT corporation required applicants to speak at least 2 languages for a job. Finally, we have more knowledge and confidence when we exchange with other foreign people. For example, we can easily chat with foreign colleagues without language barrier. However, if we do not learn bilingualism, there is a risk of going backward in society. In conclusion, everyone should hone themselves in the necessary languages ​​to succeed in life.

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I strongly agree with the statement that corporate social responsibility should be applied in all businesses because of some reason. Firstly, CSR can help the company attract and retain its employees. For example, the corporate social responsibility of the business shows the productive and positive work environment that makes workers want to join in. Furthermore, applying CSR also improve your company's perception of customers. For instance, you make a difference compared to other company by commiting that yours products will have a great impact on society so you gain the trusts of customers through CSR. In conclusion, CSR should be applied to all company so they will have many advantages from it.

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I completely agree with that all companies need to have the corporate social responsibility because nowadays the world is changing, employees they want to have a lot of good compensations. Example, if they know that they have to work for a company that help the society they may want to make effort to achieve their goal because if a little money of company can give for the charitable works it will make the employees work harder. Second, if the company have CRS it will make the company have good reputation and everyone will want to work for a company which have good reputation in society. Finally, it is good to have CRS in a company

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Currently, there are many established companies from small to large. Each company will have different mission and goals, but the first thing that companies need is corporate social responsibility because this is the basic thing. Copy is also the core thing to evaluate a company or a company's apparatus, so I agree with the opinion that all companies should have corporate social responsibility. As mentioned above, there are many companies established up to now, but not all have good goals, there are companies that were established just to compete unfairly with other companies so they will not care about users' health, so they lack corporate social responsibility and such companies should be eliminated by the government to have a healthy competitive environment and ensure the health of people. consumption. In short, no matter what the company is established for, whatever goal it is, it is necessary to perform corporate social responsibility because those are the basic things that all companies need to have in order for a competitive environment as well as healthy consumption

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I totally agree with the statement that every company should have corporate social responsibility (CSR) for some reasons. Firstly, CSR assists to stop the diversity of finance, which helps CSR come over the look of the managers, and decrease the legal fees. Secondly, CSR supports the corporation to keep the loyalty of staff, like they can provide stable and suitable jobs and encourage employees; accordingly, they will easily get their staff love and loyalty. Finally, CSR benefits your company images, which increases the cognition of consumers; also the persuasion of the society to the product, service the corporation has. In conclusion, the CSR has many benefits for the company for their future good so it is necessary.

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I agree with companies need to have corporate social responsibility because it is corporate commitment to business ethics and contributes to solid economic development. First , CRS makes sense for business . EX identify risks to people and the environment in the company's production chain . Second , it bring value for user . Third , need to pay more attention to consumers because they will give answers about the products that the company has sold in the market , not to mention the lack of responsibility will greatly affect the reputation of the company . Therefore, businesses should not pay too much attention to the product, but should focus more on the customer's attitude to offer better products.

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I agree with idea that all companies should have corporate social responsibility. Today, corporate social responsibility is very important to companies. First, it can help companies attract employees to work for them. According to a survey, over 50% of employees refuse to work for a company without corporate social responsibility, so it is important to apply corporate social responsibility to companies. They will have higher productivity if they use corporate social responsibility to attract employees. Second, it also means advertising for company's reputation and it will make companies become better with everyone because of charities, projects protecting the environment, so on. Moreover, activities will make profit increase strongly due to attracting a large of customers. To sum up, corporate social responsibility is a means to advertise, protect the environment, attract customers and employees, so companies should apply this theory to develop in the future.

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There are so many ways that you can give back to society and send thanks to their customers also employees. However, in my opinion, CSR is very necessary for the growth of the company. To begin with, CSR can help you to attract and retain employees. People work in a company, not only just because they like that job but also because of those which the business can give to them are the benefits. For example, when an employee has two jobs with equal wages they will choose the business that has a benevolence. Moreover, CSR can save your money. Some people think that CSR will lose their capital because it requires investment in projects, but it is not. CSR shows a sign of accountability to investors so, many customers will pay more for products from a socially responsible brand. Therefore, they can earn much more money to help other people also make their business even bigger. To summarize, all companies should have CSR. It can help you to pursue achievement and long-term goals.

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I totally agree with anybody who thinks any company should have corporate social responsibility due to some reason. The first reason,  that activity of the company is always based on social, like service, so the company should have the responsibility to environment, ecosystem. For example, a company specializing in oil purification, they need to control the rate of pollution to the ecosystem around the factory. If they don't do that, the people who live near the factory will report to the government and make problems to the company. The second reason, the employees will care about how the company treats them, so if a company treats them well, they will have better morale and the company will retain them longer. To sum up, the company really really need focus to their social responsibility,

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Trần Lê Minh Triết
Some people believe that companies have an impact on society and I agree with that opinion. Firstly, companies must have policies to protect the interests of users and be friendly to the environment. Furthermore, corporate social responsibility is all about how companies manage their business processes to make a positive impact on society. Finally, companies must also care about product quality and ensure the protection of their employees. For example, the responsibility of businesses is to bring profit to the company and the development of the economy and behave ethically. In conclusion, there are many companies that have an impact on society are crucial, no matter how profitable it is, people must be protected first.

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I agree with the idea that companies must have corporate social responsibility. Because if each company does not have social responsibility, there will be a lot of serious problems that severely affect the economy. And without social responsibility will damage that company. A company needs to have social responsibility to create trust in customers, it can help the company cooperate with many famous foreign companies. There are many customers when choosing products that have put the requirements of social responsibility on top. Corporate social responsibility has many benefits. To sum up, companies should have corporate social responsibility

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Corporate social responsibility is a way for all the companies to follow in today's society. In my opinion, I completely agree with this idea for some reasons. First, this will help the company to have higher productivity. The most important reason is attracting many quality employees to the company because more of them now want to work for a company that cares about how it will impact the environment. As a result, if the workers get to work in a suitable place they will work their hardest. Second, increasing the profit of the company with social responsibility. Nowadays, the health of the customers and environment is very important so many consumers are likely to buy products that benefit them from the companies that are socially responsible. Furthermore, some investors will invest in the company that cares about that despite there being many companies outside. In conclusion, I believe that being socially responsible is a need for all companies.

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Nhattien                                                                               I entirely agree with the idea that corporate social responsibility (CSR) should be laid as the most important element for each company. To begin with, the first reason is that our earth has been polluting seriously, so all companies should not only focus on our benefit, but also notice their company's impact on the environment. For example, if all of them do not treat their waste properly but throw it out directly into the environment, it will have an extremely negative consequence.The second reason is that they can keep the royalty of  the employee. They will feel noticed and noticed, which motivates them to work . Moreover, CSR will build for each company a remarkable reputation, it will attract potential investors and good employees. They will help your company develop more quickly in the future. To sum up, corporate social responsibility is essential for each company because it bring up more benefit they can image

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Nhattien                                                                               I entirely agree with the idea that corporate social responsibility (CSR) should be laid as the most important element for each company. To begin with, the first reason is that our earth has been polluting seriously, so all companies should not only focus on our benefit, but also notice their company's impact on the environment. For example, if all of them do not treat their waste properly but throw it out directly into the environment, it will have an extremely negative consequence.The second reason is that they can keep the royalty of  the employee. They will feel noticed and noticed, which motivates them to work . Moreover, CSR will build for each company a remarkable reputation, it will attract potential investors and good employees. They will help your company develop more quickly in the future. To sum up, corporate social responsibility is essential for each company because it bring up more benefit they can image

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I completely agree with this idea. Each company should have their own corporate social responsibility. Because it will help workers have more reason to work, to dedicate themselves to their factory. For example, workers usually notice what they will do in the company. How much can they earn? And will they be promoted in the future? If the company can answer that question by their corporate social responsibility, I think workers will be attracted. Next, nowaday, we can see that the environment is being destroyed by polluted waste from factories. CSR is also created to improve the environment. It forces people to keep nature clean. All companies have to follow the rules like do waste treatment before bringing it to our environment. Totally, CSR is needed for each company in the world.

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I completely agree with the company should have corporate social responsibility. Because nowadays companies operate in many fields such as services, fashion, food, medical,... All of the company's benefits have a significant impact not just on the company, but also on user and society because the customers of companies are always users of the whole society. They should have responsibility with the product or service of them. Let imagine when you use medical services of a certain company that they have no responsibility to you, it will be bad because health is always the most value thing but they work no responsibility with you. What is the benefit of the company when they responsible for users and society? The first, it bring income to the company and help the country develop in the field of company. The second, it bring value and helpful products to users. To sum up, a company should always be responsible to themsalves and responsible to society as a whole.

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Businesses have always sought to make a profit, but it is becoming increasingly common to hear people talk about the social obligations that companies have. I completely agree with the idea that businesses should simply do more for society than make money. I accept that businesses must make money in order to survive in a competitive world. It seems logical that the priority of any company should be to cover its running costs, such as employees’ wages and payments for buildinhs and utilities. on top of these costs, compaines also need to invest in improvements and innovations if they wish to remain successfull. if a company is unable to pay ists bills or meet the changing need of customers, any concerns about social responsibilities become irrelevant. in other words, a company can only make a positive contribution to society if it is ingood financial health.

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I completely agree with the statement that all companies should have corporate social responsibility. First, CSR can improve customer’s perception of brand. It help people see your company project and they will consider contributing capital if your project is fine. For example, According to a 2015 survey by Nielsen, more than 50% of consumers are willing to pay more for a product or service if the business prioritizes sustainability. Second, it saves a lot of money for your company because many customers are willing to pay more for products from a socially responsible brand and CSR can help you pay money for materials or salary. In conclusion, CSR is a good way that all companies should think about and I completely agree with the idea because I think that CSR will attract customers and keep your best employees like Microsoft.

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I agree with this idea because. The competition in the business world of today is stiff, and it can be quite challenging for a company to set itself apart in the eyes of customers. However, businesses that take social responsibility seriously can win consumers and employees in the company. Firstly, social responsibility can help people see your company as a positive force in society. This can make a big difference between our company and others. Secondly, social responsibility can win the trust of customers and from there they will continue to buy our products. For example, the customers will choose our products instead of others despite our social responsibility being better than them. For conclusion, social responsibility is a measure of a company's success and great social responsibility comes with great success.

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Companies should be responsible for social issues. First, they need to be accountable to the customers they do business with. For example, in terms of food safety and hygiene, food chains need to be responsible for ensuring food safety so that people can eat safe meals. Businesses need to have a responsibility to keep society safe and healthy. Secondly, keeping the environment safe is also an issue that challenges the responsibility of businesses. An example of the issue of corporate responsibility for the environment, the case of formosa illegally discharging waste into the environment has affected people's lives and caused great damage to society. For that reason, businesses should be more responsible for society's environmental issues. Third, they should pay more attention to the workers' lives because the employees are the ones who help them run the business and help it develop better. But now many businesses still ignore this problem, creating dissatisfaction in the hearts of employees. As a result, production activities stagnate, causing great impacts on the socio-economic situation. To conclude, businesses should pay more attention to social issues to not only help their businesses develop sustainably but also help society progress.

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I totally agree with the idea all companies should have corporate social responsibility. If you decided to start a company, you should put your reputation first. First, CRS is an enterprise's commitment to contribute to sustainable economic development, through jobs that improve the quality of life of employees and society to benefit them. Second, Implementing social responsibility helps businesses gain trust from employees. Therefore, the company will get many talents. In addition, CSR can save operating costs. For example, investing in optimizing operating processes will help the company save operating costs and reduce negative impacts on the environment. CSR is the foundation for building strong relationships with legal authorities, so it will reduce the burden on businesses. In summary, As corporate social responsibility becomes more and more a topic of interest, building a good CSR will build a brand image.

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I believed that besides making profits, many companies need to have Social responsibility.

Firstly, Social responsibility is an important concept because it helps firms in keeping to societal norms. For instance, companies must be environmentally conscious, treating garbage before discharging it into the environment to avoid harming the people living nearby.
Furthermore, CSR contributes to the company's positive reputation, which leads to more people buying and trusting the company's products. For example, consumers prefer products that are rated as being more environmentally friendly, such as sedge straws.
In short, businesses must be socially responsible in addition to making  profits

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I totally agree with the idea that every company must have a corporate social responsibility for the following reasons. First, thanks to corporate social responsibility the company can attract human resources. Nowadays almost everyone likes to work in a company that has a high corporate social responsibility. Besides, your company can improve your public image which is very important. Second, you can increase customer engagement, and it helps you increase your position compared to other competitors. As you know, customers usually choose a company that has highly appreciated and trusted by many people. If you can gain trust from people, your company can gain an advantage over competitors. When your corporation reaches a high reputation you will attract more investors, so you can have a special offer from the partner. With the money you earn from the offer you will be able to motivate the worker.  To sum up, corporate social responsibility is very important to business, if you don't have it your corporation won't be able to grow.

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I totally agree that all companies should have corporate social responsibility because of following reasons. First,CSR will create a good reputation for the company, so the number of invitations to cooperate will increase. Second,CSR activities help create more cohesion between employees and the company. Moreove ,labor productivity as well as product quality are also better guaranteed. Final,the company having CSR contribute to environmental protection. Environment and environmental protection are common concerns around the world. Environmental friendliness is a highly appreciated factor in the common sustainable development goal of mankind. Therefore, corporate social responsibility is inevitable in all companies.

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People are moving to city more and more because they want to have good job and money, this cause city become more crowded . I agree that living in a city is unhealthy. Firstly, air pollution is a serious problem because of emissions from cars, trains and airplane, etc. It can lead to dangerous disease for people’s health. As the result, air pollution which can lead to cancer, respiratory problems. Many victims die from this disease every year. Secondly, the fact that everyone is very busy almost every day. They do not have enough time to preparing a meal for himself or herself. Therefore, instead of cooking at home, they go out to eat fast food which is bad for their health. In conclusion, I firmly believe that the drawbacks slightly outweigh the advantages. Living in big cities are convenient, but everybody needs to consider to give the best choice

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I agree with the idea that the company should be socially responsible for businesses. Because they need to do something to make their daily life more developed and help everyone understand more and more about knowledge. Thanks to scientific technologies, we humans have made a great step forward and helped the country modernize more and more. For example, the smartphone has made it possible for everyone to update the situation faster and to be more knowledgeable in many areas. So from that we can see that companies are now very important to the our lives, but they also have to be responsible for what they create to serve people.

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Some people believe that corporations should also be responsible for social issues, besides making a profit. In my opinion, while paying high priority to earnings, firms also need to consider public responsibilities. On the one hand, it is undeniable that generating profits brings various benefits for the public as a whole. On the other hand, enterprises should also conduct their businesses in a socially responsible manner besides paying excessive attention to generating profits.In conclusion, although I believe that making profits is the most important principle in doing business, considering public responsibilities is also needed.

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Instruction:

●Work in group in 10 minutes on Padlet

●Check your friend’s paragraph based on the rubric

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1. I strongly disagree with some people thinking that studying history and philosophy is a waste of time and unhelpful for the future for a few reasons. First, studying history and philosophy will help students have an understanding of the country's heroic history and thereby follow the example of their forefathers. Second, history is like a book to remember the gratitude of those who sacrificed to protect the peace of our country. In short, any subject is important to each of us.

Contect is clear , stick to the topic
Conhesion : have a connection of paragraphs
Grammar: a few-->some
Remember-->remebering
Any subject--->every subject

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2. I disagree with the idea that learning history and philosophy subjects are a waste of time . In my point of view, learning history is very important for students, it help them explore more about their knowledge in their country history- what happened in the past , culture, hero, archievements. And about philosophy, It is a subject that helps students to have clearer prejudices, it even helps their thinking become more mature=> example . In short, there is no subject without its value, it depends on how the subject is applied in life.

Grammar: Help ---> helps
About ---> of.
Knowledge in their country history--->their country's history.
Hero, archievements ---> heroes, achievements.
, It is ---> : it is
prejudices, ---> prejudices, and
, it --> .It

Coherence:  In my point of view, In short
Content: Topic (need paraphrasing the topic)- concluding (inconsistent to topic sentence)-body (examples: quantity - quality principle)
Vocabulary: paraphrase more

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Add comment to your friend's paragraph
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4. I completely disagree with this idea. I know English is the most popular language in the world but language is also a kind of culture. So, it is very necessary to save the unpopular languages.

Main idea 1: First, saving languages means preserving wealth of knowledge (cultures, history, math, biology). Supporting details 1: We should preserve languages because .... For example, ...
Main idea 2: Second, a language is a country's identity/ distinction.
Supporting details 2: Why (personal pronouns- calling) examples

Concluding: To sum up, ....

saving unpopular languages is not only saving languages, but it also saves the culture, pride, older generation’s knowledge. In the past, there were over 7000 languages created but now I think it may be less than 200. Many cultures were disappeared because of wars, natural disasters, … and so were languages. For example, Vietnamese spoke some languages before. But now, like(as) you see, they just speak only one. Saving unpopular languages is not only saving languages, but it also saves the culture, pride, older generation’s knowledge, ….

To sum up, it is very necessary to save unpopular languages.

Content: The essay very clear main idea
Coherence: The essay has strong organization
Vocabulary:
also kind of culture --> also a kind of
may less than 200 --> may be less than
natural disaster --> natural disasters
like you see --> as you see
not only saving languages, it also saves --> not only saving languages, but it also saves
very necessary save unpopular --> very necessary to save
Repeat the word unpopular:
unpopular=not well-known

Content: topic sentence - main idea 1 + supporting details 1 + main idea 2 + supporting details 2 - concluding sentence

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I totally agree with the idea that all companies should have corporate social responsibility. In my point of view, In addition to making products, companies also need to care about social problems like: Environment, ethics, equality, product quality,...Firstly, for customers, companies need to take responsibility for their product, don't trade the health of consumers for profit. Secondly, for employees, companies must take care of them. It's not only good for them, but it also makes it easier for the company to develop because their employees are satisfied with their needs. Finally, care must be taken in the environment by some actions just like: reduce emissions, do not discharge waste into rivers and seas,...In conclusion, social responsibility are important to companies.

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I completely agree with the idea that every corporation ought to conduct corporate social responsibility. First, CSR can create a positive and productive environment for employees. If they know that they are working for a company that helps society, they will make effort to achieve their goal. For example, a small percentage of money that they earn will be given away for planting trees, they will try their best to do it. Secondly, the CSR strategy will also rise their reputation in public and this can bring them profits from the fame that they have built up. For example, more employees and experts in their majors want to work for a company that has a good reputation. Eventually, companies that have CSR are the company that have the most profits from many sides, they earn from them more than they can lose so it is a great choice for them to consider.

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Businesses have always been desired profit, but it is becoming more frequent to hear individuals talk about businesses's social responsibility.  I strongly agree with the notion that corporations should serve society in ways.
Firstly, the majority of companies are damaging the environment by contributing to various issues like water polluted, air pollution,etc. For instance, dye manufacturing industries produce excess extremely poisonous liquid that they previously dumped into rivers. As a result, it is an organization's job to mitigate environmental harm by supporting local businesses to clean it up or by upgrading their work procedures.
Secondly, the companies should fulfill its obligation by paying tax for the government rather than focusing on profit. By paying appropriate taxes, it can help the government providing basic necessities to the community. For instance, the tax money is used to manage infrastructure such as road maintenance, water supply, and dranage. Thus, since the business utilizes such facilities on a regular basis, the business should consider paying taxes, which will help both the business and society indirectly.
In conclusion, all companies sholuld consider fulfilling various social obligations such as paying taxes and contributing to the repair of environmental harm, which will benefit them as well as meet its responsibility to the society

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Many people claim that history and philosophy subjects are not necessary for their career. The most popular reason is that it does not help them in the future, so they want to use that time for another purpose such as learning English. But, on the contrary, I strongly disagree with this statement because of some reasons. About history, it helps young people to understand
your culture ;and how your culture and country have (been) evolved. Suppose that you had a foreign friend, he asks you about features of your culture, you can not say anything about that because you (don't) have no knowledge (about) of it. About the latter, philosophy exposes you to become a great debater, and teaches you ( how to use your ) critical thinking, which is important for your learning in college. In conclusion, history and philosophy subjects are necessary for all people,especially for young people.

( The writer didn’t tell us about the most popular reason )

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I'm totally agree with this. Corporate Social Responsibility is an enterprise's commitment to business ethics and contributes to sustainable economic development, improving the quality of life for employees and their families, local communities and society. association in general. And is considered an important factor, becoming a mandatory condition for businesses to exist and develop. If according to me, I completely agree with that, because corporate social responsibility is to preserve and develop the corporate cultural identity. Protecting the rights of employees, Anti-corruption, Protecting the environment, creating favorable working conditions for employees, Narrowing the gap between employees and leaders. That much alone can see its importance in life or day. A socially responsible business contributes to improving quality, brand value and reputation. It even increases revenue, attracts partners and investors. The better the enterprise demonstrates its social responsibility, the higher its competitive advantage.
If an enterprise only focuses on increasing productivity, revenue, and profit without performing social responsibility, the enterprise will be able to face legal punishment because the above criteria are all regulated in the law.