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Step 1: Paste your summary here
Step 2: You will have a partner
Step 3: Analyze their summary. And write comments about the following: (1) word count (~80 words), (2) did they miss any main ideas? (3) did they paraphrase effectively? Make the parts they should change bold. (4) did they change the order of ideas?

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(1) Nara's deer are famous and a national treasure
(2) The government has approved killing deer
(3) The deer cause damage to agriculture, rice, bamboo, and vegetables
(4) The Friendship Association hopes to save deer through the Adopt a Deer Program

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The Nara deer park has a problem. The Friendship Association has called on people to adopt deer to save them from government-supported killing. Currently the government has set 120 box traps at the parks border. The purpose of trapping and killing the deer is to decrease the approximately 1200 deer that are destroying agriculture, rice, bamboo, and other vegetable crops. It isn’t known how many people will adopt deer, but this will protect Nara’s national treasure as of 1957. Every year tourists come to see the deer.

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Every year, a large number of tourists come to Nara, they enjoy the peace of those historical attractions, and play with 1,200 deers, these deers move in the central park. However, the deers of Nara will be increased, some deers are starting first cull. Because of this reason, the deers in Nara has protected now. In order to decrease the number of deers and to be continued, the Nara Again Friendship Association is let each people to take care of a deer. This is a personal way.

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Japan the ancient city of Nara is famous for its old Buddhist temples. Every year tourists come to experience the peace of the historic sites. There have deer that freely roam through the park. In 1957 Nara government kill the first deer. But deer are divine messengers of the Kasugai Grand shrine, a UNESCO World Heritage site and one of Nara's main attractions. There have group try to protect deer. The people allow bring the deer back to home. The locals and the tourists accepted it happily.

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The city of Nara is famous of temple, Shinto shrines and deer. Tourists came for peace with the historic place and fun with the 1200 deer. Deer are roaming in the park, but their numbers are extremely limited, because of eating rice, bamboo and vegetable crops. They’re under the Law for the Protection of Cultural Properties, however, the permission of hunting deer was granted. They are finding a humane way of solving deer problem by adopt a deer or take it home.

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Nara is a city in Japan which is famous for its deer, but the government of Nara starts to decide decrease the amount of deer recently. One of the government organizations agreed one person to foster one deer, other even starts to kill Nara’s precious animal-deer. Why they do this? Because Nara’s deer are excess, they made a huge amount of agricultural loss, the government must decrease the amount of deer to make people and deer live together in peace.

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The ancient Japanese city is very famous in Japan, there are many people come to Nara every year, there are thousand of deer you can see in the park. But the number of deer is getting smaller, the government would kill the deer which selected to be killed since 1957. Although there has some law to protect deer, but when deer make agricultural damage, they will send to the park. For keep the deer population, people could take them home

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The ancient Japanese city is very famous in Japan, there are many people come to Nara every year, there are thousand of deer you can see in the park. But the number of deer is getting smaller, the government would kill the deer which selected to be killed since 1957. Although there has some law to protect deer, but when deer make agricultural damage, they will send to the park. For keep the deer population, people could take them home

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TOKYO is famous in deer.  A lot of tourists will go to Nara, south of Kyoto. There are a deer park in the middle of site, but they are smaller.Because of Nare government accused that deers damage the vegetables and fruits. So they advice to kill the deers.They have do some measures to catch the deers. But  some other nation  people don’t agree that, they think the mercy way to contorl the number of deer is make people feed them in the home.

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Nara in Japan is famous for their deer. They said divine messengers of the Kasugai Grand shrine and protect the law of cultural properties. Every year, a lot of tourists from all over the world to come to Nara experience the peace of the historic sites and the playfulness of the 1,200. They are natural treasure in 1957 but now the Japanese government start to kill a number of deer. Because they damage agricultural. They allow people to feed food to these deer.

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1) mean point is correct. But you forget add the reason about why people try to not kill the deer.

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(1) 87 words--great!
(2) basic idea of main points is correct--but the meaning is not. For example, there isn't anything about locals and tourists accepting the deer back home. The article just says that this is the idea.
(3) More paraphrasing needed. I made some of the examples that need more paraphrasing bold.
(4) don't forget to change the order of ideas.

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The main points is correct, lost natural treasure in 1957

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Every year  tourists are attracted by over 1200 deer where are  in Nara, south of Kyoto .As the deer increase the deer are blamed for eating rice, bamboo and vegetable crops so the Nara Government had to kill some deer .To try to lower the deer population the government allow people to adopt one deer .Some Japanese or foreign tourists have taken the group up on its offer.

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1 93 words
2 main idea is correct, but Nara is not most famous deer. and you can decrease some information
3 paraphrase more words
4 not change the order of ideas

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1.Include main points, add more details.
2. 80 Words
3.Change words order more.
4. Paraphrase more words with details and examples.

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She have metion the reason of why the goverment will kill a number of deer.
She also metion the tourists are mercy because they advice other people can feed the deer at home.
The gramma is basiclly right!

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Every year in Nara there are many tourists come to japan at this time there are 1200 deer are allowed come to the middle of cities. The deer are designated natural treasure at 1957. However, the population of deer in japan is going to decrease, because the japan government thinks deer will damage the agricultural. They use box traps to capture 120 deer. After that japan government want the deer population become more sustainable, so they think about a humane way to dealing.

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1.There are 1200 deer are allowed come to the middle of the park, not the cities.
2.83 words, that's great.
3.Miss the idea of "what is a human way to dealing?"
4.Didn't change the order of ideas.

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(1) 69 words--nice and short
(2) main ideas are here. Try to include the most important details and examples for all the main points--just like you did for why the deer need to be culled. For example, people are attracted to the deer because they are part of Nara's national heritage
(3) Good overall paraphrasing! Great job!
(4) please remember to change the order of main points.

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The summary is clearly ut not comprehensive. People can bring the deer home and feed them.

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The summary is clearly ut not comprehensive. People can bring the deer home and feed them.

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85 words. Good
The article is talk about Nara, not Tokyo.
The park isn't become smaller, the amount of deer is the one that become smaller.
The article never talk about people from other nation disagree it, the "mercy way" is decided by the Japanese government.

One aspect is good, you change the order in the article
But you misunderstand the whole article.