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1.Does the introduction tell you enough information about the background information of the film? like director, content, cast, setting, language, year, etc.EXCELLENT
2. Does the body paragraph  give you relevant information about the film plot? VERY GOOD
3. Does the concluding paragraph give you valid reasons to watch this film? EXCELLENT
4. Is the film review organized in three paragraphs?EXCELLENT
5 Do the paragraphs follow the structure:  topic sentence- supportive sentences- concluding sentence?EXCELLENT
6. Does the film review have new expressions, transitions or linking words? VERY GOOD
7. Is the grammar and overall structure of the paragraph mostly accurate? EXCELLENT
8.  Write a general comment with your opinion about it:
Something positive is: You organized the review in three paragraphs following the structure learned during the course. You wrote an interesting film review using new expressions.
Something you could do better is: chek some word forms:
return/returned/ returns
anyone/anything
EXCELLENT JOB

DIANA GUTIERREZ

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1.Does the topic sentence effectively introduce the topic:  Suggestions for visitors coming to colombia?EXCELLENT
2. Does the topic sentence engage your interest? EXCELLENT
3.  Are the supporting ideas coherent with the topic sentence?EXCELLENT
4. Do the supporting ideas give enough information about the topic and the main point? EXCELLENT
5.  Is the order of the paragraph  clear and effective?EXCELLENT
6.  Is there any information missing in the paragraph? NO
7. Is the grammar and overall structure of the paragraph mostly accurate? EXCELLENT
8. Does the paragraph have a concluding sentence? EXCELENT
9  Write a general comment with your opinion about it:
Something positive is:  You write an interesting and well structured paragraph. You gave relevant information well connected to your topic sentence. You followed the paragraph structure.
Something you could do better is: Check to visiting/ to visit.

EXCELLENT JOB
DIANA GUTIERREZ

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Task 3 Hotel Review (THE VILLAS OF GRAND CYPRESS)

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Task 3 Hotel Review (THE VILLAS OF GRAND CYPRESS)

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I going to tell you about my trip, I took a pleasure trip to Orlando Florida with my parents in 2015, because we wanted to know Disneyworld and everything.

We were staying in a double suite with a king bed, and a double bed, in this hotel there are a lot of services and facilites, for example there are sauna, pool, gym, laundry service, in room-mini bar and shuttle airport, the last one was very useful when you don't know the city, there's a Disney world free shuttle, also you can fund a championship golf courses.

There're two restaurants, but I tell you the truth, the food is bad, I don't liked that, and there're a lot of fast food and exotic dishes, the price was cheap. This hotel is near to Disney world, and others theme parks near there. The hotel is near to the airport about 30 minutes, and to the Buena vista lake.

In my opinion is the best hotel to stay, a little expensive around (US 350) per night in a suite. There's a lot of things that the website doesn't show, If you want to walk there're a lot of places to do in the hotel or nearby. The hotel is very clean and the staff are very helpfull, the people (foreigners) are very nice, and the best thing : THEY SPEAK YOUR LANGUAGE.

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1.Yes, you're doing great.
2.Its ok, but you can expand the information
3.Yes, but improve vocabulary
4.Yes, you're doing great.
5. You can expand the plot of the movie review.
6.There is an representative starring actress that you didn't take in account. what's her importante in the story?
7.Yes, you're doing great.
8.Yes, you're doing great.
9. You've made a good job. Its necessary to expand information and make rich your plot preview.

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1. Yes, but its important to use a title to introduce the topic.
2.Yes. In my opinion its necessary to organize the paragraph using keywords and expand the supportive sentence.
3.Yes, you're doing good.
4.Try to expand the information.
5.Its important to link ideas around the topic. Your paragraph is one before third line and other after.
6.I think that your paragraph's topic is clear, also you can complete with another activities around entertaiment outside of the cities.
7.Yes, you're doing great
8.Yes, you're doing great
9. Your paragraph is clear and consice, but you can expand the information at the supportive sentences.

Andrew Martínez

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1.Does the topic sentence effectively introduce the topic:  Suggestions for visitors coming to colombia?
2. Does the topic sentence engage your interest?
3.  Are the supporting ideas coherent with the topic sentence?
4. Do the supporting ideas give enough information about the topic and the main point?
5.  Is the order of the paragraph  clear and effective?
6.  Is there any information missing in the paragraph?
7. Is the grammar and overall structure of the paragraph mostly accurate?
8. Does the paragraph have a concluding sentence?
9  Write a general comment with your opinion about it:
Something positive is...
Something you could do better is...

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1. Does the introduction tell you enough information about the background information of the film? like director, content, cast, setting, language, year, etc.
2. Does the body paragraph  give you relevant information about the film plot?
3. Does the concluding paragraph give you valid reasons to watch this film?
4. Is the film review organized in three paragraphs?
5 Do the paragraphs follow the structure:  topic sentence- supportive sentences- concluding sentence?
6. Does the film review have new expressions, transitions or linking words?
7. Is the grammar and overall structure of the paragraph mostly accurate?
8.  Write a general comment with your opinion about it:
Something positive is...
Something you could do better is...

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This excellent film tells the history of Maverick (Tom Cruise), as military pilot of the United States, in 1986. In this movie you can find drama, romance, and a lot of action. The director of this fantastic film is Tony Scott, and was written by Jim Cash.

The story begins in the Indian Ocean at F-14 pane, Maverick and cougar (Anthony Edwards) were flying, and an allied plane had a failure, and Maverick return to help Them, and from that moment the comander Stiger Jordan (James Tolkan) said that Maverick and cougar have to go to Top Gun and there the story began.

In my opinion this movie is unforgettable for example, when Maverick flies his plane invert and parallel to the Mig 28 (another military plane), or when cougar died. His movie is my favorite in the world, I think is better than anyone, Have you seen this movie? If your anwser is not You have to see It.

This is the trailer of this fantastic movie

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Colombia is a great place to visit and spend time with friends doing a lot of interesting things. You can play sports like soccer, baseball, golf, tennis, and more, also you can spend time with your friends to visiting different places like restaurants, malls, pet shops ETC. If you are bored, because you are alone in a city, you can visit a lot of small, medium, and big cities for example Pasto, Cartagena or Bogota too. Have you ever play rana or tejo? only in Colombia you can find these sports! Just coming to Colombia you're going to enjoy the real beautiful life!