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It was so well written and impactful

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I very happy with how this turned out🙂

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Omg . . . That gave me goose bumps it was so good

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Really well-written and emotional. Speed changes were very smooth.

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Strong repetition of "they said"
It really made me think how I'd react if my little brother was gone or had cancer

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Very emotionally vulnerable, which was moving and shocking and very important

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Great use of repetition and pauses to emphasize your story.

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I loved how you kept saying "they said" and you were so brave and gained hope as the poem progressed

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I love how powerful your repetition was with "they said

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Deep, moving, and impactful. You showed bravery and emotion beautifully.

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Emotional message, really good

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Great speeds
Great use of repetition
So powerful and passionate

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the long pause and the speed change was so powerful
I FREAKING LOVED IT

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The pauses in between your stanzas helped to empower your poem. The speeds and volume helped make it powerful

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Really well-written and the language is very powerful
It was interesting how you used the repetition when talking about the topic negatively and then positively at the end