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Read the following short essay along with the assessment of the student's writing from their professor. Do you agree/disagree with the professor's assessment? Why or why not?

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Read the following short essay along with the assessment of the student's writing from their professor. Do you agree/disagree with the professor's assessment? Why or why not?

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Based on the rubric how would your group score this writing

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Based on the rubric how would your group score this writing

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self- assess your last discussion board post based on this criteria discuss with your group

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self- assess your last discussion board post based on this criteria discuss with your group

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Share your feedback comments for this paper

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Share your feedback comments for this paper

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Assessment of Student Paper with Comments

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Assessment of Student Paper with Comments

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So for my next discussion board, I'm going to try reading my response out loud. I think this will help solidify my ideas and help me understand how well or not im transitioning between and connecting ideas

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For my next discussion post I would organize my ideas before I started writing the post. This would allow me to edit my words and sentences before I write and create a more thought out post. My post would most likely make more sense organization wise, if I took the time to plan the thoughts and ideas before I start writing.

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For my next discussion post, I will try to list my ideas before I write my post. I normally do this for longer assignments, but for shorter ones such as discussion posts I tend to just free write. Utilizing this method may help me form more thoughtful responses in the future.