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1: I liked how Macy's picture were sorted and ow she talked about her subject.
2: I liked how Jason's was put together and how he put his work so neatly.
3: Lance did not share his.

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1.  The pictures in Eliot's stood out.
2. Emma's was very neat.
3.  Athena's brochure had lots of photos on the bottom, and not a lot on the top making it stand out.
3. Dimitra's slide was also very neat.

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1. I like Ariela's pictures and I think hr brochure was great.
2. I like Jade's organization and I think her slide was great.
3.  I like how Konrad decorated his Brochure.
4. I like the picture Dylan used for her brochure but I think the Brochure needs a little work.

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1. Eliot the pictures that you put in we're clear.
2. Josh's slide was very neat and organized.
3. Cyrus I liked how you showed pictures that show the history of origami.

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1. Emma, I like how you used lots of images of finished origami to see what it can look like
2. Cyrus, I liked how you showed pictures that show the history of origami
3. Eliot, I like how you titled different sections so you can tell what you're going to read about.
4. Athena, I like how you had more photo's on the bottom half, it lets readers see examples of what you talked about
5. Dimitra, I like how you subtitled paragraphs

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2.  Brody I liked how it was simple and fun to read also very colorful
3. Jade I liked how very well organized it was and how different it was compared to others.
4. Konrad was very colorful and cool to look at.
5. Dylan I liked the pictures

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Emma, I liked the color scheme and space management
Josh, I liked the numbering and the placement of text boxes and pictures
Cyrus, The placement was good and it was easy to read
Athena, I liked all the pictures
Dimitra, The design was cool

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1. Joshua- I like how the lay out is and how he described it.
2. Cyrus- I like the pictures and how you wrote the text
3. Eliot- I like the topic you  choose, great pictures to understand it.
4. Anthena-  I like the zen gardens, and how much texted you wrote about it.
5. Dimitra- I love that you put pics where they made the tea

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1. Ariela, I really liked the pictures and how you organized it all.
2. Brody, I think it looks really good and well organized.
3. Konrad, I really like how you made it, it, i also liked all the pictures you put. It is also organized really well.
4. Dylan, Looked really well, very organized and great pictures!

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1.  Yaqub : I really like the layout and pictures in your brochure, it made it look organized and simple
2.  Lance : *!!DIDNT SHARE!!*
3.  Jason : *still adding notes in*

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1. Ariela: I like the layout and the pictures used, I couldn't see the information she used because i wasn't looking to much but it looked great.
2. Brody: Good brochure, Slides look a bit empty though, repeated pics.
3. Jade:  Great Brochure, you used space well and the pictures look in the right place.
4. Dylan brown: Good deisign

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1. Fred, I loved the picture that you had about the proper raking technique in a zen garden.
2.  Matilda, your design was wonderful. The pictures and the text flowed so well.
3. Alfonso, your explanation of shibori made it really easy to understand the process.