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Yoogan (2D)
This is about my friend Adam story and his dog Jack. One day, Adam play a video game at home. Suddenly Adam's mother was come with a present. Adam's mother said stop playing videogame and open your present a and Adam was excited to open present. After that Adam opened the present, suddenly inside the box has a dog namer jack. The dog doesn't have a leg and Adam hated the dog because jack had no leg. Jack wanted to play with Adam and Adam does want to play with jack. After that jack give the ball to Adam to play with him. Adam stood up and he also did not have a leg and the Jack looked at is leg. Adam went outside and he played with jack kindly. After that he become friend with jack and he played with jack by throwing the ball.

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Last Sunday, Mike was helping his father to repair his damaged cart.Then, Mike ask his father's permission to play with the cart again with his brother Max.

In the evening, Max brought Mike to the park and play with the cart. Mike suggest Max to push the cart and ride it together across the park.

after a long distance of riding , the cart start gaining some speed until it is out of control. Out of the blue, they realize they were falling of a hill and were  paralized and injured after falling.

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One day,shawn was looking around the garage,while he was looking he saw a old wagon and decided to call his father to help him fix it.
After his dad fix it he decided to bring it out to play with his friend and his dad to him to be careful
while playing with it. Shawn bring the wagon to a hill with his friend.
While playing Shawn call his friend to push him down the hill after they played a couple of round, Shawn accidentally pushes to hard and they two falled of the hill and they two was injured badly.

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During the weekend, George felt bored so he decided to find something to do in the backyard. While he was roaming around the shed, he saw an old and broken wagon. He immediately told his father to repair it.
After some time of repairing, George felt extremely excited. He went to a nearby hill with his friend Jeremy to test out the wagon. They had lots of fun, but George wanted to try something even more intense.
At first they were enjoying the ride. But suddenly, they couldn't stop the wagon from speeding off the edge and crash landed on the muddy ground. They sustained a few injuries and promised not to repeat the same mistakes again.

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During quarantine,Jack was bored.He saw his father fixing an old wagon and asked his father if he can play with it.His father allowed him to play with it and warned him to be careful.
After his father finished repairing it,he and his friend went to the nearby hills to play.Jack asked his friend to push him to down the hills while he is sitting on the wagon.
As soon as the wagon is going down the hills,Jack was extremely excited.As the hills were getting oblique,the wagon was getting faster and faster and his friend were unable to control the  speed of the wagon.Out of the blue,the wagon raced down the hills as fast as a lightning.
Their heart missed a beat when they were going off the hills.Unfortunately,both of them have crashed onto the floor and injured heavily.

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One day, as Kelvin was playing with his toys, he saw his father fixing an old broken wagon. Kelvin was watching his father fixing it and ask him if he can play it with his friend, Hobes. His dad agrees but told him not to injure himself when playing it.

As his father finished fixing the wagon, Kelvin was very excited and began to take the wagon followed by Hobes to a nearby hill. Kelvin told Hobes to push it down the hill as they went in the wagon. Hobes did as told and got in the wagon with Kelvin.

Soon after, the wagon seems to be going down faster than before. Kelvin and Hobes was both frightened. As soon as they reach the bottom, they fell off. Kelvin’s father was very worried for both of them. Thankfully there are no serious injuries.

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On a dull evening, Pete was strolling around the backyard and was thinking of something fun to do. Suddenly he saw an old crooked wagon. He asked his father to fix it.

After his father tightened the tires and finished repairing the wagon, Pete was thrilled to give the wagon a ride. He called his friend Josh who lived next door to ride the wagon together. They had a whale of time riding the wagon. Pete wanted to go to a steeper down hill. Josh chickened out at first but they went anyway.

The speed of the wagon was out of control and they couldn't stop the wagon. Suddenly they hit a big rock and fell out of the wagon. They were injured badly and were grounded by their parents. And the wagon's life ended there sadly.

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One day, Calum was bored at home so he decided to check out what his father was doing in the backyard since he hasn't seen him all morning. Calum found his father repairing an old wagon that he always used to play with when he was younger. He figured he could have some fun with it so he decided to ask his father if he could borrow it. His father agreed and told him to be careful outside since it was raining earlier. Calum simply nodded and left.

He thought he could play around with the wagon with his friend, Duke. So off he went looking for Duke. Eventually, he found him and told him that he had found an old wagon in his backyard. He hopped onto the wagon, asking Duke to push him around. He happily granted his request and did as he said. After a while of pushing, Duke himself had jumped onto the wagon.

Right at that moment, they lost control of the wagon's speed. It went down a hill in a rapid pace and they couldn't do anything about it. Sooner or later, they had found themselves falling off a cliff. Fortunately, they didn't have any serious injuries, just some light scratches scattered around their arms and legs.

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Last Sunday,John was bored due to the quarantine.So he asked his father to build him a tray.

After finishing  with the tray,John went out and play with his friend,Zack.Zack pushed John down the slope.as they were going down the slope,they both lose control since it getting faster.

Both of them drop to the ground and hurt.They felt regretted and wouldnt try it again

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Last Saturday, Jason was bored due to the quarantine so he decided to let his father repair his old cart. Jason wants his father repair it so that he can play the cart with his friend, Jay.

After a few hours, Jason’s father was done with repairing the cart. Jason was so happy and excited since he can play with Jay. Jason’s father told Jason to take care of the cart and be careful. Then, Jason sat in the cart and Jay started to push the cart. After Jay pushed, he quickly jumped in and play with Jason in the cart.

Suddenly, the cart went to a slope and it was really steep. The cart started to going down with a high speed but Jason can’t control the speed so they fell down and the cart crashed. Luckily, they did not get hurt.

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Last weekend,Jeremy was bored due to the quarantine so he decided to ask his dad whether he could help him with any work around the house.

Then,he found his dad fixing a tray and  roller .After a while his dad has finish fixing it so Jeremy decided to take it to the park and play it with his friend Timmy.

While they were playing the tray they went down a hill and fell down during going down and got hurt.Jeremy promise himself to be more careful next time.

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During the school holiday, Jayden was bored so he decided to go to the backyard and find something to do. He told his father that he wants to help to fix the wagon.

After a few hours of fixing, he and his father finally fixed the wagon.  So he decided to ask his father if he could test the wagon with the pet dog. The father gladly allow them to test the wagon near the woods behind their house. And reminded them to be safe and look out for strangers.

The moment when they start moving the wagon they felt something was wrong. And they realized that they were going extremely too fast. Johnny the dog tried to slow down the speed of the wagon but it was too late. They got into a dead end and fell from a cliff and drop to the ground. Gladly they were not badly injured and they told themselves that they will never ever do this again.

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one early morning while Bill and his father is tidying and taking out the unwanted things in the garage Bill saw a old cart with four rusty wheels beside it and so Bill had an brilliant idea of what to do with it.

Bill decided to put the cart and the wheels tgt to make a little go cart so Bill asked for help from his father. After a hour Bill completed the new cart of his with the help of his father. After, Bill asked his father for permission to test the cart at the park nearby. Father allowed Bill to go but he also warned bill to be extra careful while riding the cart or else Bill will be injured.

And so bill went to the park, he saw one of his neighbors named Calvin there too so Bill invited Calvin to try out the cart with him, Calvin agreed and they went to the side of the park where there was no one. Bill sat in the cart and Calvin was at the back giving the cart a little push then quickly jump onto it so it will start moving. The wheels of the cart started rolling down the small hill faster and faster but Bill and Calvin couldn't stop it so ltr the cart flew of the edge and crashed. Some parts of the cart are broken but luckily the both of them are fine. Bill and Calvin learnt their lesson and they agreed to hv more safety precautions next time.
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Yesterday, John was bored and he went to the backyard of his house. He found a cart that was broken by him when he was 3 then he requested his father to repair it so that he can play it again with his pet, Hobbes.
After a few hours, John's father had finish repairing the cart then John immediately ran to the garden together with Hobbes after his father agreed. The floor was slippery due to the heavy rain. They were very happy playing together on the cart.
Hobbes kept pushing the cart then jumped on it but later the cart became faster and faster but John couldn't control the speed. Suddenly they both fell. but luckily they didn't got injured heavily.

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Wan Wei Shyun 2E
Last Sunday, John was tidying up the basement and had an idea of asking his father to make him a wagon since there was a huge pile of wood.
His father accepted.After a few hours it was finally done.John was really excited.He invited his friend tiger to play with him.They pushed the wagon to the highest hill and ride it down hill.
They went down at a very high speed ,they had lots of fun. They didn't noticed that there was a cliff until fell in it . They got hurt and broke the wagon.

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Yesterday, Max asked his father to borrow his cart because he want to play it with his best friend, Luke.

His father agreed to lend his cart to Max. However, his father told him to take care of himself and play near their house. Then, Max sit inside the cart while Luke push the cart.

Unfortunately, Luke push the cart too fast and they fall down. Luckily they were fine and no injuries.

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Calvin's wagon (real title)
One day, Calvin's dad was fixing his broken wagon because Calvin wished to use it on that day. After his dad was finished with the repairs, he warned Calvin not to break the wagon and hurt himself like last time.
Calvin promised TO obeyed AND follow his father's advice for his safety. Later, Calvin invited his friend Hobes to ride the wagon with him down a tall hill.
Hobes accepted the invitation, so he excitedly pushed the wagon downwards and GOT on it swiftly. The speed of the wagon increased with every second passing by. Calvin wanted to stop the wagon, but, alas, the wagon has launched off the hill.
Calvin, his wagon and Hobes were flying in mid air for a FEW seconds before crashing on to the ground. Calvin has done it again. He broke his wagon and got himself hurt again.

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Yesterday, Max asked to borrow his father's cart because he want to play it with his best friend, Luke.

His father agreed to borrow his cart to Max. However, his father told him to take care of himself and play near their house. Then, Max sit inside the cart while Luke push the cart.

Unfortunately, Luke push the cart too fast and they fall down. Luckily they were fine and no injuries.

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Brenner (2B)

Last Week, Garox broke his wagon, so he decided to ask his father for his help, and so he approached his father and asked him “ Father, I have some bad news for you.......I broke my wagon.....”. But his father forgived him, and so his father helped Garox repair his wagon by replacing new wheels for him.

After replacing new wheels and repairing the wagon Garox decided to call his brother Jamet to help push his wagon around. As time passed, after pushing Garox around for good amount of time, Garox and Jamet gained speed, eventually they sped off a cliff.

Out of the blue, they were falling from 125 feet above the ground, and then they crashed landed on the ground and eventually both of them said to each other “Well we're not doing this ever again."

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Last week,Lucas is bored due to the quarantine so he had to stay at home.Then he  asked his father to make him a new toy.After that his father took out a tray and started to use his creativity to make a cart for him.

He asked his father if he can play it with his friend,Jackson and his father agreed.They went to a hill near their house.Jackson pushed the cart while Lucas WAS inside and jumped in the cart.However they started going very fast AND they ended up flying off a steep cliff.

Luckily,they did not get hurt.However the cart got crashed.Then they learned to NEVER play like that ever again.

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One day, Calvin’s father was repairing his old cart. Calvin asked to borrow the cart for a while so that he and Hobbes could play.

His father agreed but he told him to be careful and to not go too fast. Calvin and Hobbes decided to ride the cart around the woods near their house. Hobbes pushed the cart like a bobsled then got in. However, they started going too fast and ended up flying off a steep cliff.

Luckily, they were fine. However, the cart flew off into the distance. They then learned

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One day, Kelvin was bored and had nothing to do.He saw his old wagon which had a broken tire. So he went and asked his father to help him repair it so he could play with Harry.

Thanks to his father the wagon was repaired. Before Kelvin left, his father told him to be careful and come back home before dinner. Kelvin went to the park to play with Harry.

Kelvin suggest for them to roll down the hill and Harry said that its a great idea. Harry started to push the wagon and went up the hill. Suddenly the wagon was to fast. Due to the wagon going down so fast Kelvin and Harry flew off the edge. However they were alright

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One sunny day, Calvin's father was repairing his old cart from the garage. When Calvin saw it, he asked to borrow his father's cart. Therefore, he took the cart and went to find Hobees to ask him to play with him.

Hobees went to the playground with Calvin. he asked Hobees to push the cart. After Hoobes pushed, he quickly get on the cart and the ride began.

The cart went faster and faster. They could not stop the cart so they were on air for a few seconds. Calvin said that he would not do these kind of stuff again. Hobees also agreed with him.

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One day, Kevin saw his father in their backyard trying to fix a wagon. Kevin was eager to play with it after his father fixed it. Later on, he asked a permission to play with the wagon with Hobbes. His father said to him that he could play but try to be careful.

Then, Kevin decided to test the wagon. He quickly hop on while Hobbes was the one who push it. As they headed toward a steep hill, Hobbes got a little distracted on something else.

The wagon was speeding up and they lost control of it. They had crashed and the wagon broke. Luckily, they were both still fine. Kevin should have remembered his father's advice earlier although they were having fun.

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One day ,  Calvin saw his father doing something in the backyard. Calvin asked his father what is he doing, and his father replied saying he's repairing a tray that is broken a few days ago. After Calvin's father finished repairing the tray, Calvin sat on it and asked Hobbes if he can pushed him along the road. It was fun at first, but Hobbes accidentally push Calvin down the slope because he is looking at a timer that is on his another hand and they fell down the slope.

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One day as Calvin was playing, his dad came out to him and presented a cart for him to ride on. However, he warned Calvin not to ride down any slopes
as it was dangerous. With no choice, he had to reluctantly agree.

As he was going out to try his new cart, he saw his furry friend and invited him to ride on the cart with him. However, Calvin wanted to ride down a slope even
though he knew what his father had said. They prepared to ride down slope, Calvin sitting in front, his friend behind. As they were going down the slope, it was getting faster and faster.
They soon were not able to control the cart anymore.

They went full speed down a cliff and were lauched into a river. Calvin and his furry friend regretted their decision as they were soaking wet and the cart was nowhere to be found.

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Last week, Calvin was bored due to the quarantine . He requested his father to repair the tray he used to play when he was young. His father repaired the tray using a screwdriver and after a few minutes his father repaired the tray.

Calvin’s friend,tiger wanted to play with Calvin so tiger pushed Calvin down the slope. The slope is very steep so they both lose control . Both of them hit the ground with their heads. Luckily Calvin’s father came to rescue them and send both of them to the hospital.

Poor Calvin and tiger, they can only stay at the hospital until the quarantine ends.

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Last Sunday, Calvin  was at home due to Covid-19. Since he had nothing to do, so he ask his father to repaired his broken cart so that he can go out and play however his father warned him to not go so fast because its really slippery out there.

As he walk out of his house he met tiger so they decide to go on a ride with the tray, Calvin was sitting in front waiting for tiger to push him.When tiger push him they both lose control, tiger chase after the cart as quickly as he could however they didn't make it and drop to the ground

Calvin's father came in time and rush them to the hospital unfortunately they both sprained their ankle so they are stuck at home for 2 weeks

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One day, Calvin ask his dad to make him a toy. Then his dad agreed and made him an old wagon, Calvin was very excited that he immediately take the wagon outside. His dad told him to be careful, but he did not listen.

Calvin and Hobbes take his wagon to a park and start to play with it. It was very fun but Calvin forgotten to slow down the wagon when it is going down a slope. They flew out of the wagon and fall to the ground hard.

Luckily, they were fine. From that day onwards Calvin and Hobbes learned a lesson and they promise Calvin's dad to be careful while playing. The End.

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One day, Calvin walked up to his father and asked what he was doing. He was attaching wheels to a wagon. After his father was done, Calvin ran quickly to Hobbes to show him what his father had made for him.

They decided to try it out. Calvin hopped into the wagon as Hobbes push him from behind. Off they went, faster and faster amongst the trees in the forest. Soon, they were tumbling down a steep slope.

Calvin and Hobbes could no longer control nor steer the wagon, and so they plummeted off the edge. Therefore, the brand-new wagon that Calvin's father had made was no more.

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Last Christmas,  Kelvin wanted a go-cart as his present but his parents thought that it was too expensive.  So instead of buying him one, his father decided to build him a go-cart.
Kelvin and his father worked ^for^ days on this project. Finally,  they finish^ed^ building it. Kelvin was extremely excited and wanted to try to out right away. As a result, he took the go-cart to a giant hill to try his brand new go-cart out.
At the top of the hill, Kelvin met a tiger which look^ed^ friendly. So, Kelvin asked the tiger if he could give him a push down the hill. The tiger said," sure " in a menacing tone.
Therefore the tiger gave him a really big push and he quickly got into the go-cart. On the way down the hill, the tiger tried to eat him. Before it could, Kelvin found out that the tiger was trying to eat him. Kelvin and the tiger started struggling down the hill.
Since they were struggling they didn't manage to see the edge of the hill. As a result, Kelvin and the tiger fell right straight down the hill. Both Kelvin and the tiger was terribly injured.

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It WAS A SUNNY DAY.JAY'S  FATHER WAS FIXING an OLD CART  THAT he FOUND IN the OLD STOREROOM.SUDDENLY,JAY SAW THAT AND RAN FROM his ROOM AS FAST AS CHEETAH to ASK PERMISSION FROM HIS FATHER TO BORROW THE CART TO PLAY.

HIS FATHER agreed AND lent HIM THE CART.HE WAS HAPPY with HIS RESPONSE.WHILE HE WALKING,HE SAW HIS FRIEND.THEY WERE CHATting TO EACH OTHER FOR A WHILE.HIS FRIEND WAS ASKED ABOUT THE CART.HIS FRIEND WAS REQUESTED TO PLAY WITH HIM.HE ALSO ACCEPTED HIS REQUEST.

THEN,THEY WENT TO PLAY.HIS FRIEND TOLD HIM THAT HE WILL PUSH HIM FROM THE TOP OF THE HILL WITH THE CART.HE PUSHED HIM.UNFORTUNATELY,WHEN HIS FRIEND PUSHED HIM HE ALSO FELL WITH HIM.THAT WAS SO HIGH.THEY WERE SCARED BECAUSE IT WOULD HURT.THANKFULLY,THEY WERE SAVEd .FROM THAT INCIDENT THEY WERE LEARNT A LESSON.

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One day, there is a kid named Ben. He ask his father to build him a toy cause he was so bored due to the quarantine.
After a while, his father built him a cart.Ben was so excited and asked his father for permission to go out with his friend Boe and his father answered yes. Boe pushed the cart from behind as hard as he can to move the cart foward, the cart when up and down the slope but unfortunately the cart wouldn't stop so they fell of the cliff.

They all ended in a pile of mud. After that incident Ben and Boe wouldn't  repeat their mistake again.

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One day, kevin’s Father was fixing a cart in the backyard. When kevin passed by he asked his father what is that? Kevin’s father said it was a cart. Kevin thought of a really amazing idea and decided to borrow the cart from his father. His father told him to be careful.
In the afternoon, Kevin and his friend went to the park. Kevin and his friend wanted to do a challenge so they brought a stopwatch with them. Both of the sat on the cart. TheY set off immediately. Suddenly, they saw a dead end and crashed. It was really dangerous.
They promised to not do it again .

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One Day, James Was Bored. He Ask His Father To Repair A Wooden Toy That Was Broken Previously. After Finish Repairing, James Asks For His Dad's Permission To Go Out To Play With His Best Friend David.

So When David Pushes James Down. Both Of Them Lose Control And They Almost Fell Of The Cliff And Luckily James Caught Them Before They Fell Off.

David And James Went To The Hospital And They Regretted What They Did. They Will Never Make The Same Mistake Again

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One day there WAS a kid who named kayden. He was bored due to the covid-19 outbreak BECAUSE he needED to BE QUARANTINED at home.Therefore he went to his backyard and he saw his father was about to build something. It attracted Kayden's eyes. So, he asked his father whether he COULD borrow the cart once he had finish building it and bring it the the park. His father agreed and told Kayden to give him some time.

After that, his father brought the cart and gave it to Kayden. After Kayden took the cart, he ran outside to wear his shoes and quickly ran to the park. He met his friend Kevin. They sat on the cart and set off immediately. Suddenly,they didn't notice there WAS a slope.They could not control THE CART and they crashed onto the GROUND.

They LEARNED a lesson and they promised not to do it again.UNFORTUNATELY , the cart that was made by Kayden's father COULD NOT BE useD anymore.

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Yasuo was bored due to the quarantine CAUSED BY THE covid-19 outbreak. So one day Yasuo asked his dad to build him a toy , so his dad build him a toy out of a wooden box and 4 tYres. After finishing, Yasuo asked his dad for permission to go out and play with his imaginary friend Mr.zed. So he wENT to a slope and they wanted to use that slope and slide down. They were very careful but... they accidently slipPed and they startED to go down the slope as fast as a jet and they were horrified and wERE shouting for their lives as if they were about to die. They suddenly felt like they were flying but later do they know they were very high up in the sky since they were closing their eyes they couldnt see a ramp. so they flew very high and c