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Ramsey,
Well done with this. You met the requirements and used your time wisely to do so. The main thing that can be improved here would definitely be editing. You used the word "so" about a million times, and didn't usually put a space after any punctuation. Fix that issue in the future please. 3.5/4

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So what do indians were?well boys were these things called sari it covers your whole body.For girls there is a thing called lehenga choli it covers everything below knees and up.It usually is white to reflect the sun they both are the sari and lehenga choli.That's what india's where in india.

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so what is a regular indian?well they have a medium paying job they have a 2-3 bedroom house.They work between 8-12 hours weekly and get payed about 1k a month.They have all the bills have a transportation car,bike ,motorcycle etc.so that's what a regular indian is like.

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So what is india's average paying jobs,well it's 1497 dollars a month.So that's not bad so let's check a high paying job.so some high paying jobs are in india is,a lawyer,electronics person to.They both pay around 50-100k a year which isn't bad.That's some of india's high paying jobs.

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So what what is india's money? India's money is called india rupee.the exchange rate is 1 dollar for 65.42 india rupee.so one rupee is .015 of a us dollar which is completely crazy,that's goes to show how poor they are.

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What can india improve on? Well they can fix the air pollution and the waste on the streets.They can fix the amount of deaths per year if they fix the air quality and the stuff they sell.Also they need to export more to get richer and fix some of the economy.That's some improvements india can make.

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But for everything that's bad there's some good to it so let's talk about india's good stuff.So what are some good things about india? Well india doesn't have a lot of rules just can break major ones.Also there are some pretty sights like havelock islands their very pretty the are i believe 12 islands.

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So some soil there is black,saline,latrine,mountain desert,alluvial,red,yellow and peat.The soil helps grow crops or make a farm.So the black and saline are really good for cropping.so you can get some of this soil from ganges and indus river.That's some of india's rivers and soil.

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So at india they have some rivers one is ganges,indus river and brahmaputra river.Those ate some of the most popular rivers in india.also they are really big and there are a ton of rivers in india.The popular one in india is ganges it's main used the most like for swimming collecting silt etc.so those are the rivers let's talk about some of the soil there.

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Also did you know india is very poor.Their almost passing china for being poor.Their in some huge problems because they have to pay for masks for the people because of the air.So they don't have a lot of new things in their country like cash registers,they just write down what your buying and your name.Crazy right well india is one of the poorest counties in the world.So why is india so poor.

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India is very poor with some bad air quality they have almost 1.1 millions die each year.Now india is surpassing china for bad air quality and death by it.India is also having a major loss in people.Which in result that their air quality is getting to bad now they're having to pay for masks for your face so you don't breath the bad air.

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Fun fact did you know that india sits at 28.36 N latitude and 77.12 E longitude.So it's pretty hot there because their really close to the equator to.So the main attractions are taj mahal.Also amber fort and humayun's tomb.It's a very famous person who dies in a terrible accident which i have no idea what happened.So that's what they can or do for fun their.

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So what we do here for fun?Well we get to speak two different languages here there's hindi and english.There are some cool rivers and their is a palice called taj mahal.Also their is amer fort  it's awesome,it's huge and really colorful.क्या आप अंग्रेज़ी बोलते हैं that means do you speak english?

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On the plane they had a weird thing on the seats. IT looked like a huge tv screen but it was for apparently for emergencies.Like who would use a tv for an emergency,well it was ok there wasn't a big deal about anything but a 12 hour ride.So that's what happened in day one.

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The plane ride to india was crazy but cool to this dude taught me some hindi.हे

That means hey in hindi.He also taught me how to say want to be friends,and what's your name.and Do you speak english , excuse me and how are you.It was a bit hard to remember that stuff but it's cool.He taught me some cool things but aren't appropriate for school.