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The comment that helped us in the process of producing, was the focus groups. This is because our focus audience were able to tell us what they expected in a horror trailer which made it easier for us to know what to put in there and how the tempo in the trailer should be.

The comment that helped us in the process of editing was the positive as well as the negative comments of our teacher. This is because she told us what we did right and wrong which made it easier for us to know what to change in our trailer and how to improve it better. In addition to this, the ideas that she gave us about editing would help our trailer be more like a horror trailer.

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What the comment taught you for the process of producing and editing a trailer

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What the comment taught you for the process of producing and editing a trailer

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How did some of those comments might have change the way you work in the future as a group or an individual?

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How did some of those comments might have change the way you work in the future as a group or an individual?

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We need to make more research on how we are going to be marketing our trailer. As our target audience is from the age of 18-25 we need to research how they find their trailer and our storyboards it might be hard to represent someone that has schizophrenia so we need to think about the different elements that we are going to have to put there in order to give our target audience an idea of what the story is about.

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This is some more negative feedback that we got from our peers before we started the construction

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We did get negative comments. For example from our teacher she dais that in our trailer we needed to add a selection of captions, so titles or even small sentences between some clips as it is one of the codes and conventions of horror trailers. She also added that in terms of lightning and quality, some of our scenes were a bit grainy. In order to fix this we might have to re film.

We also have to focus more on how steady the camera is where needed and also on the selection of shots transition and other effects.

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What negative comments were made by your peers, teachers, and focus group?

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What negative comments were made by your peers, teachers, and focus group?

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Elton also brought up a good idea which was that the person with schizophrenia should paint numbers everywhere around them as this is one of the characteristics of the mental disease. People with this mental issue normally see numbers around them and name everything with number. This could be a good idea in order to make our trailer as realistic as possible. Furthermore they told us that our trailer should have a good finally and that our trailer need to make them curious about what is going to be happening later in the movie.

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This is the ideas and feedback that we got from our focus group:

Due to our focus group we found out that our target audience liked our trailer idea which reflected positively on our  planning method. They also gave us different idea on how to improve our storyline so for example they thought that it was not necessary for us to go in much details about why there is a clown as it’s just a trailer but we do need to make the audience understand why the clown is there in order for it to make sense. In addition to this they thought that the twisted bit where the clown end up being the main character that has schizophrenia was good as we didn't know if the twist would work and if our target audience would like it. They also thought that our trailer need to be gory, quiet jumpy and slow pace to create tension and to make it more interesting. They also gave us ideas on the types of locations we could use for our trailer so a forest or woods.

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Before starting our trailer our focus group helped us in terms of production

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From our teacher, the feedback she gave us was very useful. She said that we had a good variety of shot sizes and that the shooting material was appropriate to the task which means that we followed the task of moving image and that the shots that we made and used linked with our genre which is horror. In addition to this she stated that the way we edited our trailer made the meaning clear so she was able to have an idea of what genre was about due to a lot of short cuts and flashing images that was used in our trailer.

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What positive comments your peers, teachers, focus group had about your video?

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What positive comments your peers, teachers, focus group had about your video?