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2. What is the Cost associated with this project?
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3. Is there a demand for this product?
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4. How many transactions are needed before profits are made?
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Senior: Alano Felix
Freshmen: Henry, David, Quentin

-Good premise that's not costly
-Gives service hours for school as well
-Two hours once a week seems very slow and inefficient, maybe raise that higher,

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Great job on your project, really love your idea and I can see how much passion you put into it, just make sure that you finish up on the slides :)

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Senior: Alano Felix
Freshmen: Aaliyah, Adalyn

-Uniquely assists a demographic that needs it
-Donations help with how costly it can be
-Would need a much larger support or donation system to be incredibly effective

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Great job with your present keep going I´m really like where the project is going Helping with the animals is good.

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Senior name: Nicole
Freshman name: Martina
-Great research project idea, it is clear that it is a topic you are interested in
-Reliable mentor with a solid plan for success
-Not much demand for the project

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From:Darrel Hicks
Remember to introduce yourself
Good determination
good well organized plan
Overall good project just put more enthusiasm into your presentation and confidence at all times and you will do just fine .

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Senior: Tripler Letuligasenoa

Impact: Community
Message: Too spread self-love and create a safe environment through leaving kind messages on rocks.
Learning struggles: Time, painting supply, procrastination and reaching the deadline
Learning Wins: Creates a safe-place,Unity within the community, core memories and art around school

🌹: The project was well thought out and organized
🌹: Affordable and Eco Friendly
🥀: Can become dangerous when used as a weapon.

Commentary: I really love this project. Throughout the whole presentation, I was able to paint a visual representation of how it would look. The need to help and improve our community is greatly smiled upon.

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Senior Name: Alexis Atkinson
Freshman Name:Christopher Ceballos

You did great!! You wanted to actually help others and it is a great thing to help each other. This could help you in so many ways later on in life because you are making a change in someone's life. Donating is a great way to help someone.

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Frosh peer Review-Brandon Brawley Freshman- Aleigha Tatum

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Frosh peer Review-Brandon Brawley Freshman- Aleigha Tatum

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The project was very practical and beneficial for yourself/your future, and is full of opportunities . The cost isn't financial which makes the project even more likely to be a success. Time management will be needed, for example, a daily schedule to follow.

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Senior: Daisy De La Rosa
Freshmen: Sky Flores
-Something I thought that went well in your project was that it had a good set plan
- it wasn't profit-based but more so community-based which I thought was a great idea
-One thing I would say you could work on would be to project your voice more when presenting.

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Good job on the passion project, it was awesome and I can totally see your passion for volleyball and how you want to help improve yourself and others. Still go for your first creative idea, it is still an amazing plan and if you still do it I would like to see it. Make sure you get your videos on your slide and everything turn in!

Savia Jones

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Thank you for giving me the opportunity to look at your slides and seeing how organize and how well prepared you put on your own  slide.
- Organize slides and amazing background
- Good introduction

- When you present you need to know what to say and prepared what evidence and what resources you use in your slides but overall good job!.

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Rose: I like the idea of bringing people together with food.
Rose: I like how you gave a specific number of times you would practice making the Lasagna before you actually started giving it to others.
Thorn: One thing I thought was a little unclear was how you were going to get money to buy the ingredients for the Lasagna.

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Senior: Kali Cajala

- Great idea for the community
- Smart end goal because it is measurable
- Make sure to be specific with the product you are buying in order to make your products and set goals for how much time a day you will spend on making the brcelets

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You guys have an excellent project that is going to do wonders for you. This passion that both of you have can be viable not only for the schools but for the community itself. Make sure when you are doing your project that you both know what is going on and are communicating with one another so that you both have an understanding of your project. Regardless, fantastic work from both of you, and good luck on your project.

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Senior: Daisy De La Rosa
- Well thought out plan to accomplish the goal
-Great organization with all the information
- Have more eye contact when presenting your passion project

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Good job on your project, even though you came late I think you still making good progress. I can see that you have a real clear passion for this and I can also see that you're working hard.

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Senior Name: Alyssa Apodaca
Freshman Name: Valerie Ayala & John Ritz
- Really cool idea to use a phone and turn them into edited photos to make books and showcase them at places where tourists stay.
- Can see both of you have passion for your project, make sure to express that when you're talking because it's very relatable!
- Check grammar in slide deck (ie; capitalize i's)

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Senior: Alyssa S
I loved your project, you have everything down including your resources. I can see that you actually want your project to succeed so push through and do it! :)

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Senior name: Diana S
I thought that your idea was very unique. You were straightforward and ready to present just make sure to finish your slides and add more detail on your story.

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i think it is a viable as the makeup industry is a vary high market and lots of people love to buy makeup. great job on your video and i can tell you are going to be vary good in being a makeup person. just make sure you finish your slides and find your admirer.

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senior: Alexis Atkinson
freshman: Heidy
You did so good!!! This is a great way to start a little Business now. That its great how you want to bring up you peoples Confidence with the work of art that they can do. Its also great how you want to start your own makeup line. Make sure you figure out a way for this to actually happen!!

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-Great job on your project you seemed very passionate about it
-Your idea is great and an amazing way to give back to the community
-Make sure all your information and slides are ready to turn in

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Senior name: Nicole
Freshmen: Kendall and Aubrey
-Love the idea of spreading kindness
-Reliable mentor and attainable goal
-More specific on how many rocks you will paint and your goal for the project from the beginning

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Great job on your project! I really liked your idea of gaming. It was very creative. Your idea has seemed to help you develop new skills that will help you later on. Make sure to finish your project overall and be prepared with materials.
Senior name: Jackie Zuniga

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Senior Name: Lizette M.
Freshman Name: Mikayla H.
- I love the idea to make other smiles
- You never know what others are going through and this idea can make their whole day
- Make sure to find kind and inspiring quotes that can uplift others
Make me one of your bracelets ! :)

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Great job on your passion project, I really like your slides it was well prepared and really neat. Next time when you are being interviewed have more confidence in yourself and on what your are about to say, overall nice work.

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Hi, Heidy I loved your presentation, You are very well spoken and prepared! I can see how much you truly enjoy talking about your passion! The only thing I would add is more visuals of your work! Good job.
Senior: Haze Harris

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Senior: Alyssa S
I really enjoyed your project, you love to make short films and I'm glad you showed me your passion for it. I liked how you want to start small with your project with a low budget, it seems like you have everything together, just don't slack and finish last minute! :)

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Rose: I like the thinking outside of the box by creating a game.
Rose: I like how you gave a rough plan of how you would create the game.
Thorn: I think you needed to do a little more research concerning what game genre it would be and if a game like that would be in demand.

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Great job on solidifying what you wanted to do for your passion project and having everything that you wanted to do, research-wise, done. You had a step-by-step process on how you wanted your project to be done. The one thing that you could work on is not just working on the things that you can't do, but trying to improve the things, drawings, that you can do. Yet, be proud of what have accomplished even if it doesn't look the greatest. Other than that, amazing passion project, and I wish you the best of luck during the project.

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Senior- Leslie Mendoza
Freshman- Katelyn
Katelyn basically had everything she needed to make this project happen. She had a mentor, a money free way of promoting, and has a lot of time on her hands to make it possible.
-She was very enthusiastic about going through with it.
-Her presentation was amazing and she clearly explained how and what she was going to do.
- The only thing she needed to improve on wasn't based on her actual project, she just needed to speak up a little bit more.

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Senior: Tripler Letuligasenoa

Impact: Community
Message: Spreading kindness through leaving positive messages in jewelry
Learning struggles: Equipment, Time and budget
Learning Wins: improves individuals self-confidence, creates a safer/warmer environment and unity among everyone.

🌹: Put together neatly, Organized
🌹: Allow individuals to feel more connected to their environment and the people in it.
🥀: What funds will be  provided for this project.

Commentary: This project was so sweet. I love how it promotes kindness and also self-love among our community. I believe this project can become a reality.

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Frosh Peer Review-Brandon Brawley                                        Freshman-Kairah Thomason

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You had an absolutely selfless and noble project you are pushing for, which should gain much support. The topic of charity hasn't been covered much, especially during COVID, and a new vision and approach to the subject is very much needed and viable. I'd heavily research the charity's you intend to support, as many are plagued with fraud, lies, and deception. Make sure the charity you support is credible and has a promising history.

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To Enrique Hernandez and His partner
The presentation was very good wouldn't say its the best because it needs more information and pictures. You guys need to be more organized on who is going to say is going to say what. But other than that if guys touch those spots up it will be a good source of information.

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Senior Name: Alyssa Apodaca
Freshman Name: Brynn Clausen
- Awesome project, very selfless and helpful to our community!
- Good job determining locations to receive donations but also where to distribute them safely.
- You have a great plan just be sure to explain and show it on your slide deck.

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Senior Name:Rheno Taito'a                    Freshman Name: Aleigha Tatum

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1. It is a viable project

2. The cost that is associated with the project is that he uses his time and effort to work with younger players to increase their skills, mentality, etc.

3. The project was nice and organized as well.

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Senior name : Diana S
Your project is very organized and I liked the idea of the Kit Care. You were ready to present and you had everything ready. Make sure to record your video to be ready to present in the library.

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Senior: Mary Grace Paraiso
Amazing job on your passion project Hana! I like that your project doesn’t cost too much because you are reusing the materials that are going to be thrown away like soda cans or the soda can pop-tops.

I also like that there is not a huge demand but only trendy stuff. $5 for a plant by helping the earth.

The only problem that I am seeing is the price that you will sell your product. You should probably start at a low price and then make your price higher later on. Also, just make sure to finish your project. Other than that you did an amazing job!

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To Julissa, Melanie, Melissa, and Jasmin,

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I found your passion project intriguing and I loved the way you introduced it to me. The focus point is clear, and your slides were full of information. I think one area of improvement could be calculating the costs of materials in order to fund-raise. You guys turned this into a group project so be sure to have everyone working on it equally:)

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Your project was excellent, and your ideas to create passion in sports were great. The only thing is you need to complete your project and use images.

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good job on your video and project, i love your idea as im a sporty person to. i think it can all kids help them improve there game and when the game is on the line they can easily sink in a 3 for the game. just make sure your prepared for the big moment have have all your stuff together when you present.

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Senior: Arron
-Really helpful idea
-Research had been done finding out the nutrition of foods served here at El Camino
-Pretty solid idea of how to help fix the problem
-Definitely could use more work in preparing to explain it to people, write down questions people may ask and write the answers next to it, and practice saying them maybe? If that specifically doesn't work for you that's fine.

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I enjoyed your presentation, you seemed to truly enjoy talking about your project and i think its a great idea to want to start your own business.The only thing i would add is make sure your slides are completely ready to turn it. :)

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Senior Name: Lizette Mendoza
Freshman Name: Sky F
- I like your idea of making new friends with people who don't necessarily have any
- This also helps you to become more outgoing and social
- Don't just think of this as a class project, think of this outside of school or when you see someone who is alone

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You guys both had really well-planned presentations! Both are presentations were very well planned and had such amazing intentions for the Community! Glad to see you both enjoying pursuing your passions while also helping and uplifting others.
Make sure to speak up and enunciate! Good Job.
Senior: Haze Harris

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From: Darrel hicks
Im sure we missed the introduction part because I do not have a name down but the feed back for the girl basketball player business you have a well organized plan and I like the determination and I hope it works out for you as you would like to take the project further in your future but one thing To improve is you have to introduce yourself everywhere you go.

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Senior- Leslie Mendoza
Freshman- Daniella
Daniella had the amazing idea of starting a book drive to help give back to our teachers and helping people get rid of old books that they might not need or want anymore.
-She had a mentor already who was happy to help her with this project.
-It would benefit a lot of teachers, students, and people who have way too many books that they dont know what to do with.
-I think her presentation needed to be finished because she did have some missing things, as well as speaking louder, she was a bit shy.

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Senior: Kalani Ayala
Freshman: Jocelyn Herrera

Well written and organized, you explained your passion thoroughly which is good because it is really important to understand the passion that you chose.

Just make sure you finish your slides, and add bullet points to summarize them while you are presenting. :)

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Senior: Kalani Ayala
Freshman: Bella Luis

You did an amazing job on your project, you wrote in detail, completed your slides about your passion and have everything laid out nicely. Also you explained your passion thoroughly which is very helpful in understanding the ways this passion would become successful. Great job
Just make sure you edit the video and turn everything in :)

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Both of you guys have amazing project ideas that will both let you guys express your creativity. The purpose behind your projects are viable and will help other individuals view your topics from a different perspective. Your slides were also well organized and you were able maintained great eye contact and speaking voice. Make sure to prepare well before your actual presentation. You guys got this! :)

Senior name: Melanie S.

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- creative slides
- great presentation
- Finish slides

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- presentation was on point
- graphics were great
- don't be as nervous when talking and talk with confidence

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* I think the idea was creative and true to what you're passionate about
* The slide deck was very organized and easy to follow through
* Try to have a more solidified plan on how you plan on marketing these items and creating profit

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Great job on your project! I liked the idea of your project. The only thing you need to work on is finishing your slides.

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I like your passion project.  You have a good presentation.  All you need to do is finish up your slides and you will be good to go

-Marquis B

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senior: Jazmyn G
Your project was very versatile and you put a lot of time and thought into actually pursuing it. Just remember keep it short and simple.

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Your project was very well presented and had very good reliable information that I understood very easily. One thing I would say you would need to work on is maybe managing your time on it. Good project overall though.

- Isaiah Tuipala

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Loved your project!! you are very passionate about your project. The slides were very detailed and informed. Good luck!!

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1) Very good purpose/project
2) Good presentation with clear steps
3) Be more professional when presenting your project

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- Great presentation
- Great idea
- Make sure to be able to talk with confidence and know all the answers to questions when asked

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1. Good idea very possible to do
2. Finish the presentation
3. great presentation voice

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-Love the topic about Yellowstone Park.
-From the first time I saw your presentation wasn't fully completed but you were getting your main idea out there.
-I do advise trying to work on the project at home to get at the presentation down. Take it easy when writing your essay.
-Senior helper Milan Tye

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Senior: Jadyn Wade
Freshman: Christian, Abigail

-Organized and thought out
-Ideas that interest people
-Nervous when talking about the project and not completely finished

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Amazing job on your project, it was very creative and I love how well thought out your plans were to move forward with your project.

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-Great presentation with great slide format
-Idea and how you will succeed with your passion is good
-Try not to speak as fast during presentation, try to slow down and explain a little more.

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* I love the fact that you're a self taught artist and following a path that is true to your skills and passion
* Very lovely art work
*Clarify how you define success

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Senior: Isaias Aguilar
Freshmen: David Tovar

-Colorful, creative, and creative slide deck. Really grabs audience attention. Very good idea adding examples of his own graphic designs hes made.
-He needs to not second guess himself while talking, "but who knows" "I guess". Be firm and claim what you believe in!

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I really liked your project. You came up with a creative idea and overcame many obstacles to accomplish it. Some of the text on your presentation was difficult to read, but that's easy to fix and I'm sure that you'll have a great final presentation.

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You had an amazing presentation. It was loaded to the brim with information so I know that you really enjoyed and researched your topic. You also had great presentation skills with moving your hands and making eye contact which is really good. The only thing I have to say though is you were reading like verbatim so I say just try and shave it down a little.

-Kaylon C.

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1) Very professional slides with a nice layout
2) Really good presentation, your steps to success are very specific and precise
3) Find more ways to expand your project and be more specific on how you will remodel the room

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You know what you want to do and you have a plan already.  You have a good passion project.  All you need to do is get it onto slides and you will be good to go

-Marquis B

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Senior: Joaphnie Sanchez
Your keyboard project was really cool and interesting. I enjoyed watching your video and I thought you answered the questions very nicely. I'd just say to be a bit more relaxed when presenting.

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Great job on presenting your project, even though you didn't have your slides but you still provided me ideas how your project work. But hopefully, next time you will have your slides done

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1) Interesting project/idea
2) Steps to success are good
3) Create a presentation and include what supplies you will need in order to detail cars

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Senior Grace Seely
Freshman Laila
- great ideas
- wonderful solutions to the plastic problem
- don't rely so much on your slides to do the talking for you, if you add in more (rather than what is on the slides) you can make your presentation longer and more appealing

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-I like that y'all are trying to prove that video games actually help people.
- I feel like this would be high in demand for students or people our age.
- You can try to be a little more serious

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-good idea for presentation
-nice slides
-not enough work

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Really enjoyed your passion project, the amount of passion you put into helping people understand art and even show your art was amazing yet I would say that you should finish the final artwork

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You had a good project overall, and it's really cool to see that you are already making progress toward your goals. There is certainly demand for your service, however I would take away a couple of the memes so people can at least take it a little seriously.

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Good job on your passion project, it was well thought and organized. The slides were also creative and nice to see. The only thing to really improve is to speak a bit louder and be more confident but everything else was great.

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The idea of your project is good for you considering you play the sport so nothing should be too for you to figure out. Your presenting skills are good. One thing you can work on is finishing the project and managing your time a little better, with working on it.

- Isaiah Tuipala

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Senior: Janae Leovao
Great job on your passion project, I love how dedicated you are to help those in need. Just be more specific on what steps it will take to get there and finish the slides.

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Creative slides, the fonts were perfect size to read and loved how it was in bold. Your really good at graphic designing and i know you can put it in great use for your project. good luck!!!

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- Your project has a very good motive behind it. The theme and organization of your presentation is outstanding. You just need to finish up the slides and to also find a mentor who could really help improve your skills and give advice for the success of your project/passion.

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You got a great ideas, your slides done well and I can easily understand your project. 1 thing that you should improve is confidence, your project is great so next time when your present it to someone, you should be more confidence. Don't have to be too nervous if you make mistakes, everyone does

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You had a great presentation. Your slides were extraordinary they looked great. You were very bubbly and enthusiastic and I could tell you were really interested in your topic. The only thing I have to say is maybe talk a little slower because at times I didn't really grasp what you were saying but aside from that it was an amazing presentation.

-Kaylon C

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You had a very professional and well-organized presentation. I liked that you defined your goals concisely. However, you should add more about specific steps you will take and the ideas you have for the design of the room. Great job!

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-First time we met yesterday you were super sweet kind.
-You had huge passion for this project and want to make people feel happy. Baking with your cousin and trying get a business started figuring out details good start.
-Try to figure out the cost of bakery or rent a little shop try your business out. Location and area choose business at will affect you positivity or negativity. I believe in you!
-Senior helper Milan Tye

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You know what to do.  You know who to ask when you need help.  Just do more research on your passion and put it onto slides

- Marquis B

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Dear Anthony,

Seeing how much passion you have for the community really inspires me to work harder. Explaining to me how much research and studying you did about trees really shows how organized and kind a person you are. If I may, I would recommend you find a mentor soon so you can be more successful with your project.

Sincerely,
Kiyo Anderson

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I really liked how straight forward the presentation was. You had a great idea and turned it into an amazing project. The information was just right and wasn't too much to overwhelm a person. Defiantly add proof of final product, I would love to see it. Keep it up you got it.
-Gabriel S

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You truly did an amazing job on your project. I really like that your passion is an ongoing issue that you can continue to change. I also really like your slide layout. It's not too serious but also doesn't distract from the presentation itself. I would just say to finish up those last few slides, but other than that, great job:)

-Kyylee A

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I loved your presentation and the whole idea of your passion. The idea of helping the environment whilst so making a community impact is a thoughtful thing that many wouldn't care to do. It definitely is viable though the cost is unsure, I'd say there is a need for it rather than demand. This passion seems to be a non-profit thing as well. Overall great job!! :)

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- Knew what you were talking about, which was really good
- You are able to sell your idea really good, and you have a lot of potential.
- Finish that research slide and then you'll be good.

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- Very well spoken presentation
- Organized
- Finish your project and you should be set!

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Senior: Janae Leovao
The idea of having a beach clean up for your passion project is great! I love how organized and creative the slides were. Just be more specific in how you will achieve your goals and what your opportunity cost will be.

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Senior: Isaias Aguilar
Freshmen:

-He needs to learn how to code and be able to say confidently that he knows how to code before pitching his idea that REQUIRES him to know how to code.
-It's a very thoughtful project. Many high school kids are always looking for community service events to get hours in. If he is able to build his program that gives people local community service task, his program will be very successful.

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Senior: Hayden Frappier
The idea of reselling shoes is a great profitable project and if done correctly you could make a lot of money.
-Great pitch and I liked how you guys mentioned how your mentor is a great help.
-Nice pictures in the presentation
-Try making more eye contact with the audience and have a nice strong voice