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the holocaust has change live past and perevent

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First of all, the Holocaust changed many lives in the past and present because of the childrens family that were disjoint. To explain, lots of children were taken away from their homes and their gardain was taken from their childhood. They were then taken to a concentration camp

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First off, the holocaust changed many lives in the past and the present because of the children's family's that were disjointed. To explain, lots of children were taken away from there homes and their guardian's were taken from they're childhood. They were then taken to a concentration camp and treated terribly with no food, water, forced to were the clothes of a person that has passed away, many were too young to wait for death to overpower them. (The boy in stripped pajamas)

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How has the Holocaust changed lives in both the past and present?

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The Holocaust was a horrifying event that happened off one man trying to make a "perfect" world without Jews . A man named Hitler controlled all of these Germans to take innocent lives over 6 million Jews were killed in the camps , making them think they were taking a shower but really putting acid in there and restarting the process by bringing more Jews in. Now as in a story called " The boy in striped pajamas" a Germans son was meeting up with a Jew and days later the Jew named Shmule asked German , Bruno , to help him find his dad , Bruno said yes and they went looking together. Bruno's mother was looking for him and told the father , as they went to look for him Bruno was going into the process of a "shower" with Shmule... Bruno's father finally saw his sons clothes and started shouting for him. As you may not know Bruno's father was a soldier for the German . The reason I say this is because Bruno's father was sad and upset , how do you think the Jews felt when there families were disappearing.

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first of all, the holocaust changed so many peoples lifes,

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First of all, the holocaust changed lives in both the past and the present through the death it caused. To enumerate, during the holocaust, jews were forced to go to concentration camps were they died or were killed. This evidence illistrates that those who survived these concentration camps would aprishiate there lives more. In like fashion, those who survive usually fatal illnesses would also aprishiate there lives more.

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The holocaust an event that can never be forgotten especially by Jews. Families slaughtered taken apart. Just because one man wanted a perfect vision of the world in his eyes and sought to create it.

Pro: good job with giving a description of the Holocaust
Con: Your second sentence is incomplete -Hailey Chambliss

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To begin with, the Holocaust changed many lives in the past and present because it will change the way people see the world. To enumerate, innocent lives were taken away from their homes and forced to be in a concentration camp (The boy in the striped pajamas).

Con: Could use some more detail and i would have liked to read a little more.

Pro: Very nice thesis and intro paragraph -Ethan Hatcher

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The Holocaust was a horrifying and terrible event to take place in history. To enumerate, when this took place, thousands to millions of Jews were killed. This signifies that the Germans were simply ruthless against the Jews, resulting in over 6 million deaths. Some of these deaths were believed to be committed with gas chambers, hanging, and firing squads.

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The holocaust was a tragic event that forcefully took innocent lives of people that were any different from what Hitler believed was considered perfect. Hitler put in many German soldiers heads that killing those "imperfect"  people would in return give them a perfect world. In the story " Dairy of Anne Frank" 3 families hide for their lives together with little to no hope of normal again.

jesse tanton-to short girl ;)

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To begin with, The holocaust was an utterly tragic event that took several innocent lives. To enumerate, this event took many lives due to one mans decisions. This signifies that one man that had no authority over the people, took innocent lives just because he thought they weren't good enough.

JESSE TANTON - DIDN'T FINISH
Pro: good transition phrases
Con:you used innocent lives too much -Hailey Chambliss

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Another key point, the Holocaust was a very horrible life changing experience that ruined millions of lives because Adolf Hitler was a racial tyrant. To enumerate, Hitler thought all Jews and people who were inferior to him had no purpose in life (ADOLF HITLER). I can determine, he didn't care about others lives he only cared about how his power would benefit the things he loved. the holocaust was a eye opener to the whole world, of what can happen when power and pride get the best of you.

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First things first, The holocaust changed people's lives in the present and past by killing Jews and taking them out of their homes.

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The holocaust was a big and tragic event. This event killed people and took people from there homes. This shows me that these people were forced to leave all there homes.
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The Holocaust was a very tragic event. to be exact, this was a time during 1933-1945 where the Germans where killing the Jews. This evidence signifies, that none of those Germans had a true heart during that time period of killing. its not what she said do you didn't put claim or two reasons

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the Holocaust was a horrible and terrible event which was about many man and women and children were killed by the jews.

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The holocaust effected many lives because of taking kids from their families and death. The Germans would killed the Jew so many ways you cant even imagine.

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The holocaust was devistating part of history killing millions in this epidemic. To be exact, the holocaust was a time period when many Jews were killed. This signifies that these people were killed for false claims and taking a tole on the the outside world and the people. This event can still take affect even years later cause just thinking and hearing about the death that occured is to much to grasp.

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The holocaust was a combination of humongous tragic events which lead to innocent lives being taken away.  If you were different in this point of time you were killed for being yourself. During this time the leader (Adolph Hitler ) wanted everyone and everything to be perfect he had to have his society PERFECT, so in order to get his society to be that way he had separate Jews from their homes and put them in concentration camps and work them to death, put them in gas chambers , and make them dig holes for them to be berried and shot in. all in all this was a helpless time for The Jews and their families because they were taken away and basically given jail time for doing practically nothing . In my opinion

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The holocaust was a devistating epidemic that the world wish never happened. to be exact it was a time period in which Jews were killed for no reason at all. This signifies that this was not a faint of heart time it was a time of death 1 million dead all due to one man. This tole that it took the people like   the people who endured it and also the aftermath years have passed but just thinking and hearing the name holocaust gives me a bad feeling inside.

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Holocaust was a tragic event in which 6 million innocent lives were taken away from dear ones. This changed many, many lives through the face of death. The Holocaust was based on religious beliefs and beliefs of "perfection". The freedom that we take for granted and throw outta the window was taken from the Jews or people that were different.

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the holocaust was tragic event happen during the 1941 to 1944 which killed 6 million of innocent people which wasn't just adults but mainly children of all ages. The German tortured the Jews by just killing them at sight or working them to death.

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the holocaust was and excert of tragic events in which lives were taken. Killing innocent jews was a excert of rage because of their religion or beliefs. The holocaust change lives through death. A kid could walk home who just came home from school and was informed that they were being moved, but also a step closer to pain and death.

Kaylee Alexanader// Did not start with a capital "the". did not indent.

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The Holocaust effected many lives by making innocent people prisoners. To demonstrate, making the Jewish suffer by working continuously, taking children away from their homes and families, and cruel death. The German's killed the Jews because they were "different" so they tortured them in many possible ways they can think of.

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    -Matthew Kulkusky-     The Holocaust effected many lives because at the time many Jew's were trying to hide and keep their children safe.But they couldn't hide because of the concentration camps and they had no rights to stand up for their-selves.The Holocaust was a very bad timing in the WWII because if you were a Jew and you were caught by a German soldier you would get shot. In the time of the  WWII if you was a Jew you would either die or be sent to a camp to work to death. Now days you wouldn't have to worry about being shot on the spot if you were a Jew.

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    -Matthew Kulkusky-     The Holocaust effected many lives because at the time many Jew's were trying to hide and keep their children safe.But they couldn't hide because of the concentration camps and they had no rights to stand up for their-selves.The Holocaust was a very bad timing in the WWII because if you were a Jew and you were caught by a German soldier you would get shot. In the time of the  WWII if you was a Jew you would either die or be sent to a camp to work to death. Now days you wouldn't have to worry about being shot on the spot if you were a Jew.

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The holocaust effected many live in the past. If you were a Jew, alcoholic, handicapped or just different you got killed. An individual shouldn't believe in killing because it goes against they'er believes or religion

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jesse-no comlete ;)

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Control. Imperfection. Death. These three words describe The Holocaust, where innocent lives were taken all because they were different. To enumerate, Jews or people who were abnormal were taken to a concentration camp and eventually killed.
Pro- I like your use of the big bold words~Heaven~

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The Holocaust was a tragic event because of the many deaths and cruelty. This took place through 1941 to 1944. Many lives were taken because of one man that wanted a "perfect" world. Adoulf Hitler murdered more than 6 million Jews and 1 million of them were believed to be children, he would  even hire doctors that would bring up many ideas to kill many of them in large numbers. It was even believed that 8 thousand people were murdered in the gas chambers every day. People were believed to committing suicide by jumping on the electric barbed wired fences because they knew what would happen to them if they stayed any longer. The Germans would even leave the dead bodies on the fence to warn people. Until it was finally stopped once the U.S. soldiers entered and demolished them. Even to this day many victims from the past and present still are scared by the horrific event that changed many lives.

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During WWII there was prison camps that held thousands of Jews. Many died from lack of food, worked to death, or killed. The Holistic changed many lives in the past and the present because of the treatment of them and what they saw. The Holocaust changed many lives in the past and the present by the treatment of the Jews. Stated by a survivor of the Holocaust "We were hardly fed and clothed. Many of us died in the winter due to the cold. Some were even taking the cloths off the bodies to stay warm. we were beaten when we made one falter, we even fought each other when one got more food than us. And i still have nightmares to this day"(Gad Beck).

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the holocaust was a time in the mid 20s were the Nazi killed millions of Jews  just because they thought they were superior.they kills Jews many different ways like gas chambers,fire,and shooting them so imagine if you were a Jew that lived during the 20s.
christian conrad -- no capitalization after punctuation
Katlynn Hurley// fix grammar and capitalization..

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To begin with, the Holocaust changed many lives in the past because it has caused them to be traumatized forever. To enumerate, the holocaust was a sorrowful event that caused many people to lose their lives, and for others to be traumatized forever(The boy in the striped pajamas). This reveals that people were forced to do things against their will or suffer consequences.Everyone in the holocaust were abused, tortured, and unfairly punished.

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to begin with the holocaust was a tragic and horrific state to be in if you were a Jew u were stuck in these concentration camps and were never fulfilled with any rights, you were barley fed and if you broke any rules or disobeyed any solders or you were put to death kind of like our world if you break the law you loose you're right to vote and you are put in jail behind bars for punishment of the crime you did and if it was bad enough you get the shock chair kind of like in the holocaust they were put to death in the most unbelievable ways all because of who they were.

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The holocaust is a Greek word "sacrifice by fire". Adoulf Hitler was the leader of the Germens, so Germens believed and followed Adoulf Hitlers beliefs. Jews
were different than Germens in Adoulf Hitler P.O.V, so he slaughtered many jews and use them to work or die

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The holocaust  changed many lives because of torture and  death dearing the holicost people were killed and torchered

Hannah Wilkes- need to include "past and present" in the claim.  incomplete

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The holocaust killed many innocent Jews for being Jewish and thinking that they were better than them
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image a world that your race was a disgrace to human kind.the Jews were the disgrace to the Germans because they thought they were god favorite people.the three stores that will be shown show a race get for no reason

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The holocaust was something that took you from your family's and you were either killed or put to work until death. This was mainly thought of the jews because millions of them were killed.  It was a very bad time for millions of people and family's. This shows me jews were taken from homes and families then never got to be rested and have peace until death.

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The Holocaust was a tragic event for Jews because they got murdered for being different. Specifically, "There was one small window in it but I didn't like to look out of it because then I would see the wall and I hated the wall" (The Boy in the Striped Pajamas). This shows me that Hitler had a vision of a perfect world so he thought that Jews didn't belong in his vision; he took them to camps and tortured them till death. Similarly in the text " The Giver" is a Utopian society where no one is better than anyone else, if so they are "released".

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The holocaust changed the lives of many, many people due to the  horrific slaughtering of the billions of people that opposed Hitler. death, torture, starvation, all these horrible things happened because of a tyrant who thought his opinion should go unopposed. The holocaust has affected people from the past and the present through fear

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Imagine being taken from your home and being forced to work against your will. This was known as the Holocaust.I know this because, The Holocaust was a terrible time for all Jews because they never got to see their families. This shows me, Jews were taken and made forced to work and only got to see the light of day and peace when they were killed. They never saw their families barely unless it was their dead corpse.

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The holocaust ruined many innocent people's life. The powerful nazi army killed millions of people. Hitler mainly targeted people that were Jews. Hitler made many concentration and death camps. Hitler beleived that people should be up to his standards or they would be killed. This terrible time caused millions of individuals life's to be ruined.

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Death. separation. torture.  these three words describe the life of jews, alcoholics, mentally and physically disabled people and even homosexuals were prosecuted during the holocaust. how could anyone ever think this was how to gain a utpoia? hatred and power are the ingredience to this horrifying conjunction we know as the holocaust. in the excerpt from "diary of anne frank" a jewish group of families had to hide in a attic to avoid marder.  i can conclue that this could only be done through hatred. 6 million jews and millions of other "imperfect"  people were killed for just being themselves. this is not the only timepeople have been prosecuted because of their beliefs. all around the world today people are bullied for being themselves. hatred is something that should not be looked over but delt with.

Christian conrad -- did not capitalize after punctuation

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Imagine being separated from your family and getting beat to death, then having to suffer the brutal consequences of the beating. This is what happened to Jews, non-Jews, and also anyone who wasn't like Hitler. The Holocaust is an indescribable event still to this day which changed many peoples lives due to Hitler, who wanted a utopia world. Making everyone alike is how an individual possibly believed  killing innocent lives was beneficial.
First things first, making everyone alike is how an individual possibly believed killing innocent lives was beneficial. To enumerate, Adolf Hitler despised Jews and even Non-Jews; likewise, he killed over six million Jews during the Holocaust (Adolf Hitler).

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the Holocaust was a tragic event that costed over six million innocent people their lives. everyone has different vies due to the way they may have been raised.

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Imagine being mentally retarded, or an alcoholic, or a Jew; All these reasons could have gotten you killed during the holocaust. In addition, the holocaust went on to kill Jews and the people that were abnormal and didn't fit in with Hitler's idea of a perfect world. Moreover,  the holocaust made people realize what they are thankful for and not to take advantage of certain things, it showed people how to hope for the best of things during the roughest of times.
Katlynn Hurley= good job

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The holocaust changed many lives because of the lasting effect it had on people. Hitler and his Nazi regime killed thousands of people each day mainly Jews. This led to millions of people having to live in fear of being killed all because of Hitler`s “dream” of a Utopian world. Although Hitler`s plans ultimately failed, there are still people to this day who have some form of fear left from that awful time.

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Some may believe that killing people is beneficial because they thought it will make the world better. An individual can believe killing an innocent human because of ones beliefs or religion. killing people will make the world better by making the people be one religion and race. This shows me that the world could be better by killing because people wouldn't discriminate against a different race or religion. All over the world people get discriminated out of organisations and events.

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The holocaust changed lives because of the brutal history that was brought upon civilization.To point out, Anne's family was almost torn apart because of what the holocaust was doing to them.This shows me the holocaust was destroying everyone and that caused a dramatic change in history.The holocaust hurt everybody at this period in time and even today.

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The holocaust was a tragic event in history in which innocent lives were taken all for the sake of prejudice. However, the benefits some of these prejudiced people see in some thing like the holocaust is that they believe they
can make a utopia. When people seek a perfect world, sometimes the methods to create a Utopian world can lead to such tragedies and evils like the holocaust. However, all of the time they never succeed, instead creating a world that is still flawed or more flawed than the original.

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Imagine living in the Holocaust as a Jew. Your life would have been a living nightmare. The Holocaust changed many people and their lives. It changed peoples lives by the death of loved ones and it still changes them today.
The death of loved ones in the Holocaust changes us to this day. To point out, there is someone out there who never got a chance to meet or speak to their grandparents because of the Holocaust.

Pro:  The imagery is very helpful to describe the Jew's situation. Very good overall!

Con: I would have added just a little bit more of detail to engross readers just a touch more. -Ethan Hatcher

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The Holocaust changed many lives in the past and present because everyone is unique. With attention to, millions of people were killed because they were different. This reveals that everyone is different in their own way. Hitler wanted everything to be a utopia, where everyone had to be like him. People cannot be the same, though.

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the holocaust was a terrible time for all. any who was imperfect was in danger. so basically everyone was in danger. even Hitler him self.
no one was safe because every one was imperfect
kaleb gardner= The isn't capilized, any isn't capilized, so isn't capilized, even isn't capilized, after imperfect no period.

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The Holocaust  was a terrible time for the Jews.Thousands of people died.Because the.There lives were taken for no reason.But there was light because the US found out

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killing lives is a beneficial plan through population decrease. Anne Franks family was poor and only had one piece of bread and a sack of potatoes, and they couldn't go  out and get some or they would get killed by the Natzis. Anne's family were skinny as a tooth pick, if they were captured they would get burned.

Pro: I like the detail. Like, the phrase: Skinny as a tooth pick.

Con: No Name at top, needs more detail and better Grammar and spelling. -Ethan Hatcher

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The Holocaust was one of the most terrible tragedies within our history. Surprisingly, we learn from these tragedies. The medical breakthroughs due to unethical experiments were surprisingly helpful, even to this day, within the medical field.  We learned about genetics in twins, immunization experiments, fetus growth, and many more.  These discoveries helped many doctors and scientists understand more about the human body and helped save many lives.

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holocaust was an tragic event in which lives were taken because of a non-conflicted reason of thinking. An individual can possibly believe in killing innocent lives because their beliefs and how they feel about someone else belief. So they would have to have a beneficial plan and also they need a reason but if i had to choose i think it was because that person did not like the way Jews believe.
kaleb gardner= were is the ( The holocaust) in the beginning the should be capilized.

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Preston Willis                                                              

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Preston Willis                                                              

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Katlynn Hurley= you might want to finish