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be truthful in what you think about it and tell them that

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i think that astins butterfly is showing that you need to tell your peer whats good and what needs work to get to the butiful buterfly

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be honest and tell them the truth about what need or what there missing

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be honest to your partner and give feedback to help them ,and stay on task

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Be on task and don't be insensitive when giving feedback

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You should get good feed back and also, stay on task and don't get distracted.

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Be honest

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Be honest and don't lie to your partner

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Be on task and dont be mean when giving feed back

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Be honest focus on the task

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Be completely honest and on task

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Be honest with your partner.

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Listening to what there saying and actually use it.

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be more understandable about your draft 

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be more understandable about your draft 

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You have to be specific on what your partner needs to fix and to do that go little by little and know its okay to do more than 3 drafts

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Reading our narratives out loud was helpful when giving feedback.

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Ask your fellow peers and never give up and keep working. And do a lot of drafts.

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Be specific about what they need to fix. Be kind saying your critiques. If your'e the writer, don't take their critiques the wrong way. They are helping you, not being rude.

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Ask your friends or peers to help you fix what you need to

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A technique I saw was to have your partner look at your work find the mistakes and critique you

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do multiple drafts

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one technique is to have not one of your friends review but someone you kind of know. they will give you harsher criticism but to be successful.

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A good technique is to do multiple drafts until you get it right

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one good technique would be to get feedback from your peers.

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Be specific about the mistakes and what they could do better without being rude.

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Don't say their drawing sucks and they should not do it anymore. Give them reasons to change, help them on what part needs help. Be nice about it and give your honest opinion

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One good technique would be to tell the your class mistakes the things they need to fix in a kind way not a rude way. That way they will feel more confident next time.

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You need to be kind and give specific feedback on what you believe will make it better and the person receving the feedback needs to be flexible and be able to do the new drafts

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Don´t just say that´s horrible critique it and say what he/she could do better

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I think that they were trying to say to be more clear and specific when your trying to explain something to them and don't be mean about it. And make sure they realize their mistakes so they can make their draft better.

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Be specific about what they should fix or what they shoud add to make their writing better. You have to be kind about how you critique the person's work.

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One technique would be to be specific and go over your draft and make sure it is good and if not ask your friends about it at take th

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I believe all 8th graders could practice giving SPECIFIC and CLEAR writing advice to their classmates