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Once upon a time there was a big rober and 4 girls there names where Ceirene Klodisa Hala and Leen. Where this all took place is outside and sometimes inside.So this story is about a Rober that steals cash. The Rober looked like a normal person. So Hala saw the Rober and then Hala told us about the rober. Then a police came and told us what are you doing we told him that Hala saw a rober and we told him that he is wearing normal clothes.So the police went to find the rober.And the girls said can we come and the police said yes you can so the girls came to help the police to find the rober.So they went to find the Rober they went to a bank he was not there. Then they went to another bank and he was there so they were hiding and they surrounded the Rober and then arrested the Rober so they took him to the police car and took him to jail.He got locked up in prison jail.The police said thank you for helping me so the police went to  Rober and said you are arrested for your forever.

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Ward (Bob the Little Digger) CORRECT VERSION

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Ward (Bob the Little Digger) CORRECT VERSION

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Bob the little digger Edited by Osama

Bob is a little strong boy who loves to dig a lot of things. Like archaeological things of dinosaurs bones , sand exploring things. Bob was living in the Point zero freezing beach.

one day Bob was digging in the freezing beach for a chest an adult, came and told him get of you are not allowed to dig in here bob started crying and yelling and begging then said ‘’that why do you kick me if its allowed in here?’’

His father came and told him ‘’that there is no sign that show digging is not allowed’’ then Bob said ‘’you are so you're so good’’. Why did you tell him that because he did that I will call the police. I do want to do anything and it's allowed

. that don't Kick anybody  and he wants of us if he is allowed to do that thing do not do that thing or at least we always say that for anyone that is in that in  charge to keep this thing safe.

Made by Ward Al Dawoudi

Date 2 november 2019

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The team that wins

One day at me and ditto was so strong and they had superpowers who can do you like them after I don't know.They were in the finals but they didn't win because that even with cheating and no one see they were cheating.The team leader was named Allie and he was so so strong and also the team member .”Hey look he is unfair cheating” Ali said.He got out of the team because he's a member of the team and it's not good. The team was working hard but they were cheating that's why they didn't win did the team was a leash the team was what is another team. It was a break and they were talking about “it was so unfair” said Ali. Look what Daddy did the US Lose.Ernestine was drinking a secret potion that's why they win there is so bad you don't know football or soccer we should say he said. I didn't eat it did the other team you are liars Send Another team I am not lying Ted Ali they were fighting do the Bulls go out of the game and then play ever again What just happened he was cheating send Allie.Hey, do not push.Look at your trackman. bad words when I make them good.There was a foul boo boo boo boo you are liars the record is bad boo-boo boo-boo boo-boo. Everyone was mad directories he took two out and there was an important look at you don't even know how to run you don't even see you look at the watch if you want to watch mad there was shouting saying bad words in directory washout of choices.Hey, you stop said the police will it be in again Alvin and another one map to the fields then we're happy to be back in again and. Let's go games on come on a team we can win our sheds hey. Yay yay yay yay yay yay. Let's play fair now and will not wait that again deal the best teams ever been in the history let's go The teams are excited and ready to go glass windows are you there you there you there are you Rest rest a little bit we are tired need to drink and eat whoever goes there last play everyone was running to the Cafe everyone was laughing and having fun Burger King on faster Baron & Baron one page because the cafe was seeing them football games and they said you can think anything free Between team was very mad teamIt was another team so they wanted to play two against two teams in one time they were so bad and cheaters it didn't know how to play even they showed it boo boo-boo . Always theme was here and always shouting yay yay yay .secret cheating Grand Theft Auto secret potion that makes them so super that the two teams, couldn't stop him quotes Continue with a second part
BY Ismail

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Once upon a time there was a little soccer named Jack. Jack lived with his friends , as he was all grown up and didn't need to live with his parents anymore.

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Mark Giraldi
2h
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The Bully
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FF - 04GM - Cashmere Avenue PS (1260)
2h
The Bully
Once,upon a time there was a cute ruler.He was very nice,happy,cute and kind but everyone was mean to him.One day he had to move and go to a new school called Ashmere Pavenue.On his first day of school he went to his class.He saw some friendly and some mean faces. His teacher was really mean he made him sit with the bullies they always bullied him and hurt his felling's. They always made him sad. One day the little ruler was getting made fun of at recess a paper and paper heard him get bullied and they went to help him.The paper and marker fought off the bullies.Then they asked the ruler if he was okay.When they knew he was okay they asked him if he wanted to be his friend.When he said yes they started playing.From that day forward they became best friends and the little ruler never ever got bullied.             



Rough Copy Must-Haves
Avatar of Mohammed Abdulbaki Mustafa - Cashmere Avenue PS (1260)
Mohammed Abdulbaki Mustafa - Cashmere Avenue PS (1260)
2h
Rough Copy Must-Haves 
Characters:
My main character is Osama.
He is a young adult. 

Setting:
-In a big house.
-The house is a old house.
-The house is in Canada.

Conflict:
The problem is he found a map in his backyard.

Resolution:
He went to the place the map need him to the fake money.

Theme:
Do not trust things you just found without checking them out first.

Favorite:
Mohammed.
Peblo for Mayor (Surya)
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Surya Ariyathram - Cashmere Avenue PS (1260)
2h
Peblo for Mayor (Surya)
Once upon a time there was a huge town called mimic.It had skyscrapers,tall buildings and huge houses.In that town there was an election going on for the new mayor of the town.There were 3 people contesting to be the mayor. One of them is Peblo. Peblo is a very short and old man with a big belly.He also has grey hair.He also loves burgers,tacos.burritos,milk shakes and ice cream.That’s probably why his belly is so big. The other two people that are against peblo are names are Mrs.Brown and the other one is Mr.White.One afternoon Peblo went to get some triple decker burger,some burritos and some ice cream.But in the middle of that four people come up to him and say rude things and comments to Peblo.Such as your belly is so big and you eat so much,and you have grey hair.That night Peblo realized that Mrs.Brown and Mr.White were telling everybody that Peblo had a big belly and grey hair.So Peblo told the big boss called the prime minister that Mrs.Brown and Mr.White were telling everybody that Peblo had a big belly and grey hair.Peblo told him like this “Mrs.Brown and Mr.White are telling mean things and comments to me and I don’t like it.So the prime minister gave Mrs.Brown and Mr.White warning.But they did not listen and kept on saying it over and over again son Peblo told the prime minister again and he did not warn Mrs.Brown and Mr.White this time he sent them to jail.Peblo won the election and became mayor.

The Really Bad Teacher (Mr. Giraldi's Example)
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Mark Giraldi
2h
The Really Bad Teacher (Mr. Giraldi's Example)
Story Starters:
- An angry gym teacher
- Wants to build a catapult (to launch slow-moving students)
- But his principal won't let him

Once upon a time in a land far, far away, there was a beautiful little elementary school called Ashmere Cavenue. It was a school filled with happiness and learning, and the students and teachers got along really well with each other. Well, almost all the students and teachers. There was one teacher who just didn't seem to get along with the students and other staff members. He was a very grumpy, very angry, and very smelly teacher. His name was Mr. Heraldo, and he taught gym to Grade 4 and 5 students.  No one knew why he was always so angry; was it because he'd been hit in the head too many times in dodgeball? Was it because he was losing all his hair on top of his head already (and was beginning to look like a big, human pear)? Was it because of all the good treats had already been eaten from the staff room by the time he finally made it over there for lunch? No one knew. However, one split 4/5 class did know that he was up to something positively nefarious. One day (when trying to avoid his bad breath by staying as far away as possible from him) they saw some plans left on a chair. They were plans for a catapult, and even worse, they were labeled as 'PLANS FOR STUDENT CATAPULT - SPEEDING UP WASHROOM TRIPS WITH STUDENT-HATING STYLE'.  

Oh no! What to do? The kids were very worried. They immediately told their amazing principal Ms. Hoble. Ms. Hoble was loved by all the students, and was known to be very kind and fair. She immediately walked into Mr. Heraldo's gym, and told him that launching students through any method ranging from good old-fashioned throwing to a massive catapult was not allowed. Mr. Heraldo muttered under his breath some, but tried to knock over the chair with his dastardly student-launching catapult plans on them. He was trying to hide the evidence! This grade 4/5 class was very perceptive though, and immediately caught on to what he was trying to do. They pointed it out to Ms. Hoble, and she grabbed the plans! Now Mr. Heraldo had to apologize and promise to never, ever build a student-launching catapult.

He did, but just in case, Ms. Hoble had all building materials kept far from his gym from that day forward.

(395 words! All done!)
story about cats
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Anonymous
2h
story about cats 
one day i see one purfole cat  and see my face and  saind miow? i you dance cat ? is time for dance and your dance world ? me not reve power  for dance sory cat i"ll star  the car.listen to the cat music . how i already realized  becouse you like  music  and dancing . thes is or friends cat ? yes do you speak? yes ok saind girl winch one gave name  my name is mickey you my friend yes , not  hmmm yes you my mom ? not i you not reve family mickey ? not how ime sory mickey and you reve hamgry yes ok come my rom . how sow worm .... you like les' t dance a music time 1,2,3, goo lala lala la oooow thes is good dance les ' more music ...... lalalalala ooooooow youuul like the music.
Princess Cinderella (By Nadia)
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NG - 04GM - Cashmere Avenue PS (1260)
2h
Princess Cinderella (By Nadia)
one/Once upon a time there was a girl named Cinderella she lived with her dad and then one day her dad left he said I'm going to another country you can be with your your fake mom and her  her daughters they will come and be with you don't worry  but I want to go with you no you cant because I'm going far away don't worry I will come back to you that okay and then the dad left and then her fake mom and her and daughters came came to Cinderella's house they said clean the house no you can't eat or drink or anyting you have to clean the house or you're not allowed to go with us to the shop Cinderella was sad she can't eat and not and she can't do anything because they don't let her she just clean do all the cleaning and they go shopping one day a queen helper came and knocked the door knock knock who's here they said he said there's a party for Queen because the queen is going to choose a princess from all the princesses okay bye and then the mom and her daughters get ready her big daughter set comes under Allah make my hair get my dress ready we can get everything ready because I going to be he's going to pick me and the next day and then and then the next daughter said no I got to be the queen and they started to fight they fight fight fight and then their mom Tina said don't fight. Fighting both of you he's going to choose both of you I think so mom I want to be the princess her  and then they got ready and dressed and then they said Jason Derulo clean the house when we come back we going to see it so cool if you did mean it you will know we're going to get you off the house Cinderella Ranch and said can I go with you they said no no no you going to go with me so ugly so sad they went and left her alone and then two birds and a end the horse and two mouses mouses they said what happens in her room she was so she was so scared she said we're supposed to get down to the mouse and the brake and the all and the horse how to talk in your animal animals can't talk and then pretty girl cakes and she said don't worry CinderellaI gonna make you a princess and then you're going to go to the party revenge is she made her hair pretty and she dressed her address and then she is she made her a shoes and then she look perfect 😊 and then she and then she made a horse and men and a mouse a girl and chew and the horse is two horses and then she got ready for the party and then she ran with a horse but she said the prince of the pretty princess she said you have to come at 12:30 if you didn't, you going to lose all of your stuff your dress your your hair your shoes in everything and your horses and your mom said they will come back, okay she said sundara listen OK I going to come back early up by by play Jason Derulo Ren and  run, and then she finally came to the party perfect mother and her daughters were there Princess and the queen look like that and she said wow she looks so pretty and then the fake mother and her daughter said who is that girl she look like Cinderella and they was sad because if we picture and they were dancing together and they were talking and the time was running out and that it was12:30 and then she came she ran and ran and ran the quiz him what's happened and then her shoes fell out of her feet and then the next day and then the next day a queen queen helper came again and he said who who is in that we going to see who's feet fit this shoes and then they her daughters or wear the shoes and they could have fitted but Cinderella came as I can under said maybe this is my shoes and dress you are there and then and he talks and Derulo with him to the castle and then her grandmother and her her daughters was so care they said how she Cinderella Cinderella is the princess and then they was crying in the castle say we were so mean to you can you can we stay with you she said of course you are my then they live together forever is the end

The Fourth Person (Kylie)
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KN - 04GM - Cashmere Avenue PS (1260)
2h
The Fourth Person (Kylie)
Once upon a time, there was a family of 3. They were a normal family and lived in a building. The daughter's name was Kylie and the mom's name was Helen and the stepdad's name was William but people call him Will. So one time Kylie woke up in the middle of the night and heard something. She thought it was Will cause he goes to work at 5:30 in the morning but when Kylie checked the time it was midnight. But then the tv turned on by its self and she was scared then she slowly to see the tv and very quiet and saw nothing was there. She tried to go back to sleep but she couldn't. The tv was the sound of glitching. Eventually, Kylie fell asleep and every time Will left to work Kylie would hear him leave. She would wake up and try to continue to sleep. When Will woke up to go work the tv was off. When Kylie woke up because Will was getting ready for work she thought it was a dream but she remembers that she woke up in the middle of the night and the tv glitching she hurried back to bed and slept. The next day Kylie went to school, she told her friend Mia what happen last night. She couldn't believe what happen to Kylie last night. Mia didn't believe Kylie because she didn't believe in ghosts. When Kylie went home her mom made her food and then Kylie went to go shower. After she went to play on her iPad then she brushes her teeth and then she to go to bed. She woke up again and she heard the microwave on and she got chills on the back of her neck and she went back to sleep.
Rough copy must-Haves
Avatar of Dindar Khalil - Cashmere Avenue PS (1260)
Dindar Khalil - Cashmere Avenue PS (1260)
2h
Rough copy must-Haves
Characters:
- The main character is a dinosaur he like to eat and tricks the first time when he crashed from his egg he was super doper cute

setting:
The story happened in big forest from 11310 years ago then big comet cay me kill the guy the the killed dinosaurs all of them went out accept him

conflict:
Dinosaur problem because he was just hit from the night like he was the only one alive they got he was so sad he want all his friends 

Resolution:
Dinosaur was sad because all his friend died from the  and he was only one life

Theme:
Never give up even you don't have anyone

Favorite:
 Dindar.




The super spies (Ceirene)
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Anonymous
2h
The super spies (Ceirene)
 
Once upon a time there was a school named Cashmere P.S full of amazing smart kids and teachers but 4 teachers teachers who are, Mr.Giraldi, Ms.Eveilegh, Mr.Bemen and Ms.Noble. Mr.Giraldi and Ms Eveilegh were teachers , Mr Bemen was a music teacher and Ms Noble was the BIG BOSS of all the teachers and all the students as well but 4 that were Ceirene, Klodisa, Hala and Leen, those 4 students were best friends, and they all new that all 4 of those adults  were super spies because they were jealous because the kids had more fun than they did everyday and they did stuff like go on field trips and get reward periods and eat popcorn and watch a movie and get sweets like candy and freezies for the students and that is why those for adults wanted to be super spies because they were jealous and they wanted to have fun like that every day as well like the students do so what they did to get that fun Everyday they stole   Chromebooks  and expensive devices that the school had then the people at the school started to realize how much they lost all of the Chromebooks and devices in the school kept buying more but they kept getting stolen so then super Ceirene, Klodisa, Leen and Hala came to save the day and saw man stealing some devices so they stopped them and called for help and they got help and then all of those teachers got arrested
The big Rober (Klodisa)
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Anonymous
2h
The big Rober (Klodisa)
Once upon a time there was a big rober and 4 girls there names where Ceirene Klodisa Hala and Leen. Where this all took place is outside and sometimes inside.So this story is about a Rober that steals cash. The Rober looked like a normal person. So Hala saw the Rober and then Hala told us about the rober. Then a police came and told us what are you doing we told him that Hala saw a rober and we told him that he is wearing normal clothes.So the police went to find the rober.And the girls said can we come and the police said yes you can so the girls came to help the police to find the rober.So they went to find the Rober they went to a bank he was not there. Then they went to another bank and he was there so they were hiding and they surrounded the Rober and then arrested the Rober so they took him to the police car and took him to jail.He got locked up in prison jail.The police said thank you for helping me so the police went to  Rober and said you are arrested for your forever.

Meiline
Avatar of MR - 04GM - Cashmere Avenue PS (1260)
MR - 04GM - Cashmere Avenue PS (1260)
2h
Meiline
one day i see one purfole cat  and see my face and  saind miow? i you dance cat ? is time for dance and your dance world ? me not reve power  for dance sory cat i"ll star  the car.listen to the cat music . how i already realized  becouse you like  music  and dancing . thes is or friends cat ? yes do you speak? yes ok saind girl winch one gave name  my name is mickey you my friend yes , not  hmmm yes you my mom ? not i you not reve family mickey ? not how ime sory mickey and you reve hamgry yes ok come my rom . how sow worm .... you like les' t dance a music time 1,2,3, goo lala lala la oooow thes is good dance les ' more music ...... lalalalala music is my favorite music ooow is time mickey i you goo haaa am hello my friends ? you my friend haaa not you a poor cat. i not a poor .what you not poor not haaa i reve mony . ha you goo and me a music saind mickey . 123 is a dance not music im not dance becoude you is disgusting .next you goo you and me a dance? NOT. sirt YOU . BY disgusting. my hear is broken. im cry. hey mickey i you

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My family is the BAST FAMILY EVER when ever I want something they are always say yes but something not to expensive stuff and they always take care of me when I am sick they  always hear from me and then make me yummy soup and i tastes so good and hand at night time I am so lazy that I don't even want to get up and get it water so my dad always gets me to water when I say dad to give me water and sometimes it's the other way around my mom and my dad asked me to get water for them and I see course why not and equal into a beautiful and amazing trip once we went to the beach the and we go and that way home we always watch a movie and enjoy popcorn and let me go out with my besties friends they are Leen,ceirene,klodisa, they are my favorite friends and my family is the most important thing in the world even my friend and they always go out for the beautiful 🌞 sun and the beautiful flowers and once we went to a roller coaster🎡 it was so much fun and I enjoyed it so much and we went on one of these🎠 and it was so much fun they even buy you an iPhone so you have to say thank you so much and be always good well even me on Black Friday pink bio like tablets iPad iPhone everything this amazing so I hope you enjoy my family story thank you so much for goodbye

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Bob the little deger 
Characters

Bob is a little strong boy who loves to dig a lot of things. Like archaeological things of dinosaurs bones , sand exploring things.

Setting 

The setting is in point zero freezing beach.


Conflict 

Is that one day bob was digging in the freezing beach for a chest an adult came and told him get of you are not allowed to dig in here bob started crying and yelling and begging then he bob said that why did you kicked me if its allowed in here.


Resolution 

His father came and told him that there is no sign that show digging is not allowed then Bob said I'm so you're so good. Why did you tell him that because he did that I will call the police. I do want to do anything and it's allowed.


Theme 


. that don't Kick anybody  and he wants of us if he is allowed to do that thing do not do that thing or at least we always say that for anyone that is in that in  charge to keep this thing safe.


Favourites 

Made by Ward Al Dawoudi
Date 20 ovember 2019

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The team that wins 
One day at me and ditto was so strong and they had superpowers who can do you like them after I don't know .They were in the finals but they didn't win because that even with cheating and no one see they were cheating .The team leader was named Allie and he was so so strong and also the team member .”Hey look he is cheating that is unfair” Ali said .He got out of the team because he's a member of the team and it's not good.The team was working hard but they were cheating that's why they didn't win did the team was a leash the team was what is the another team.It was break and they were talking about “it was so unfair” said Ali . Look what Daddy did US Lose .Ernestine was drinking a secret potion that's why they win there is so bad  you don't  know football  or soccer we should say  he said.I didn't  eat it  did the other team  you  are liars Send Another team I am not lying  Ted Ali they were fighting do the Bulls  go out of the game and then  then  play ever again What just happened he was cheating send Allie .Hey do not push .Look at you track man. bad words when I make them good .There was a foul  boo  boo boo boo you are  liars  the  record is bad boo-boo boo-boo boo-boo. Everyone was  mad a dir ectories  he took  two out and there were important look at  you don't even know how to runYou  don't even see  you look at the watch if you want to  watch  mad  there was shouting saying  bad words in  directory washout of  choices .Hey you stop  said the police will  it be in again  Alvin  and another one  map  to the fields then we're happy to be back in again and. Let's  go games  on come on team  we can win our  sheds  hey. Yay yay yay yay yay yay.Let's play   fair   now and will not  wait  that again deal  the best teams ever been in the history let's  go  The  teams are  excited  and  ready to go glass  windows are you there you there  you there  are you 
Rest  rest a little bit we are tired need to drink and eat whoever goes  there last play  every one was running to the  Cafe everyone was laughing and having  fun  Burger King  on faster Baron & Baron one  page because the  cafe was seeing them football games and they said you can think anything   free Between team was very mad  teamIt was  another teamSo  they wanted to play two against two teams in one time they were so bad and cheaters it  didn't know how to play even they showed  it boo boo boo boo .Always  theme  was  here and always shouting yay yay  yay .secret  cheating  Grand Theft Auto secret potion that make them so super that  the two teams,  couldn't stop him quotes Continue with  a second part

BY
Ismail

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My favourite teacher is Mr.G he is so kind and sometimes he always let us watch movies and have free choice and play video games every get to eat popcorn and Skittles and I just love that I wish School works like that but sometimes I don't like learning but learning is good so I always enjoy it and he said wherever we want so we can sit with our best friends is Leen,Hala,klodisa,ceirene, these are my best friend that's their names my name is Hala so anyways let's talk about are favourite teacher will sometimes he is scary like the best thing ever a pajama day to let us whatever we want and it is the best thing ever so yeah well sometimes we like you math and don't like math and he always makes everybody laugh and it is like wow so nice. Every single day but not scary and this girl her name is Mia and so kind she is my best friend every even you ceirene,klodisa,Leen you girls are the best to even you Zolfa, I love my FRIENDS SO MUCH🎠🎠🎠

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Once upon a time there was a bear and and the little kid and a father there a happy family and they went to go after work so then this little girl she came into their house and she saw three soups she tried the fathers and that was too hot then she tries to mothers it was too cold and he tries the kid and it was just Perfect then she saw three chairs she saw a father's chair and the wife chairs and the kitchen of the fathers Terror it was not too comfortable things to try the mother's chair and it was kind good then she tried to buy it was just a perfect but she was kind big she broke the chair then she went to go to bed cuz she was tired she tried the father's to it was too big then she tried the mother stairs it was too low and it was not pretty good then she tried and it was just perfect so than she sleeps 😴 then the bear family came and they said oh my God it my soup Father's Day mother said oh my God who is a -2 I loved it Mommy someone ate my sick the whole entire thing the kid cries Bender two tires so they went to go sit then the little bear saw his chair was broken the mother said oh my God my chair the fathers chair was so dirty and gross so then they were tired so then they wanted to go up and get it the little girl sleeping on his bad the mother and the father wondering who stayed at their house so then the bear called his mom mom dad dad come see this there's a girl at my bed and the girl started waking up the she said I'm proud of you that she ran out she goes and then she told her mother everything that happened then her mother said please honey do not go outside of a very dangerous so you're going to stay inside with me okay daughter said okay Mommy I just saw some bears in the house she told her mother everything and then her mother said okay okay sweetie I think you should go to your room and relax okay then the daughter said okay Mommy I love you by Linda mom said if I love you too sweetie by.

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one day i see one purfole cat  and see my face and  saind miow? i you dance cat ? is time for dance and your dance world ? me not reve power  for dance sory cat i"ll star  the car.listen to the cat music . how i already realized  becouse you like  music  and dancing . thes is or friends cat ? yes do you speak? yes ok saind girl winch one gave name  my name is mickey you my friend yes , not  hmmm yes you my mom ? not i you not reve family mickey ? not how ime sory mickey and you reve hamgry yes ok come my rom . how sow worm .... you like les' t dance a music time 1,2,3, goo lala lala la oooow thes is good dance les ' more music ...... lalalalala music is my favorite music ooow is time mickey i you goo haaa am hello my friends ? you my friend haaa not you a poor cat. i not a poor .what you not poor not haaa i reve mony . ha you goo and me a music saind mickey . 123 is a dance not music im not dance becoude you is disgusting .next you goo you and me a dance? NOT. sirt YOU . BY disgusting. my hear is broken. im cry. hey mickey i you cry? yes is or friends? saind i ? becouse saind for me im a disgusting. not you is chain is good boy is good of the school. yes thak you girl is my ferver friend for my hear . next day music oow what my friend is shep or not? les"t goo for roomdance ...... hello what or name? mickey ok you are you ready? hmmm yes ok dance is 4 minutes ok ok .2 minutes i o not hello mickey i you here me here becouse  i come becouse i you see a dance you not dance ? i no a dancecing you ha me i sow good a dancecing. 1MINUTES boys cats dancecing if you cats is are ready. YES .OK les t goo . by disgusding  you mickey is a baby haa stop garry ok . nunber 1 is mr. mickey good by mickey thak you cherry .  mix music mickey : 1 dance 3 dance is ms. cats hello cats is nunber of the cats is 35611. is love a music done. good jumb . mickey . next is garry . hello funk music 1  music if you like my music is TIME . DONE. good jumb garry . and is a nunber 1 is ... ms. MICKEY good boy is good ooow . THAKS YOU .people . good mickey.  garry im soory you not if a nunber 1 . ok . les t ok mickey friends .... friends yes .people saind for garry good jumb .good garry ooow .  girl thes is my best friend . yes is good jumbe garry o saind soory for mickey ? ......... yes . ok is happy birday mickey ow thaks for peole you my momy ? plese girl yes youpy thak you momy . end and ......

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Once upon a time there a big bully named Hala and there was two nice girls named Klodisa and Ceirene. And the big bully Hala  always bully's Ceirene and klodisa and the problem they don't know how to stand up for each other's so Hala keeped bullying them every day even in class so she keeped bullying and bullying and bullying and she even bullyed them in gym even in art and she says you are so bad at art am so much batter then you so then they started crying  and she said you are a cry baby so so in nutrition break they went to tell on her because she pushed ceirene and ms.E  said it is the last strike and they said how it's the first time telling on her and ms.E said it's not the first time she does so they were waiting just for her to do one more thing to do that's not allowed in school and she did she escaped school and the way home she bullyed every person she sees the next day she got in trouble so then she realized what she did to ceirene and klodisa so then in nutrition break she was trying to find them but she did not find them but she saw them in the corner of the wall sitting and crying she went to to say sorry but they ran away from her because they thought she's ganna bully them so then she started crying so then they saw her crying and they went to her and she said sorry and became best friends ever!!

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Once upon a time there was a big rober and 4 girls there names where Ceirene Klodisa Hala and Leen. Where this all took place is outside and sometimes inside.So this story is about a Rober that steals cash. The Rober looked like a normal person. So Hala saw the Rober and then Hala told us about the rober. Then a police came and told us what are you doing we told him that Hala saw a rober and we told him that he is wearing normal clothes.So the police went to find the rober.And the girls said can we come and the police said yes you can so the girls came to help the police to find the rober.So they went to find the Rober they went to a bank he was not there. Then they went to another bank and he was there so they were hiding and they surrounded the Rober and then arrested the Rober so they took him to the police car and took him to jail.He got locked up in prison jail.The police said thank you for helping me so the police went to Rober and said you are arrested for your forever.

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Once upon a time there was a school named Cashmere P.S full of amazing smart kids and teachers but 4 teachers teachers who are, Mr.Giraldi, Ms.Eveilegh, Mr.Bemen and Ms.Noble. Mr.Giraldi and Ms Eveilegh were teachers , Mr Bemen was a music teacher and Ms Noble was the BIG BOSS of all the teachers and all the students as well but 4 that were Ceirene, Klodisa, Hala and Leen, those 4 students were best friends, and they all new that all 4 of those adults  were super spies because they were jealous because the kids had more fun than they did everyday and they did stuff like go on field trips and get reward periods and eat popcorn and watch a movie and get sweets like candy and freezies for the students and that is why those for adults wanted to be super spies because they were jealous and they wanted to have fun like that every day as well like the students do so what they did to get that fun Everyday they stole   Chromebooks  and expensive devices that the school had then the people at the school started to realize how much they lost all of the Chromebooks and devices in the school kept buying more but they kept getting stolen so then super Ceirene, Klodisa, Leen and Hala came to save the day and saw man stealing some devices so they stopped them and called for help and they got help and then all of those teachers got arrested

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Once upon a time, there was a family of 3. They were a normal family and lived in a building. The daughter's name was Kylie and the mom's name was Helen and the stepdad's name was William but people call him Will. So one time Kylie woke up in the middle of the night and heard something. She thought it was Will cause he goes to work at 5:30 in the morning but when Kylie checked the time it was midnight. But then the tv turned on by its self and she was scared then she slowly to see the tv and very quiet and saw nothing was there. She tried to go back to sleep but she couldn't. The tv was the sound of glitching. Eventually, Kylie fell asleep and every time Will left to work Kylie would hear him leave. She would wake up and try to continue to sleep. When Will woke up to go work the tv was off. When Kylie woke up because Will was getting ready for work she thought it was a dream but she remembers that she woke up in the middle of the night and the tv glitching she hurried back to bed and slept. The next day Kylie went to school, she told her friend Mia what happen last night. She couldn't believe what happen to Kylie last night. Mia didn't believe Kylie because she didn't believe in ghosts. When Kylie went home her mom made her food and then Kylie went to go shower. After she went to play on her iPad then she brushes her teeth and then she to go to bed. She woke up again and she heard the microwave on and she got chills on the back of her neck and she went back to sleep.

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one day i see one purfole cat  and see my face and  saind miow? i you dance cat ? is time for dance and your dance world ? me not reve power  for dance sory cat i"ll star  the car.listen to the cat music . how i already realized  becouse you like  music  and dancing . thes is or friends cat ? yes do you speak? yes ok saind girl winch one gave name my name is mickey you my friend yes , not hmmm yes you my mom ? not i you not reve family mickey ? not how ime sory mickey and you reve hamgry yes ok come my rom . how sow worm .... you like les' t dance a music time 1,2,3, goo lala lala la oooow thes is good dance les ' more music ...... lalalalala ooooooow youuul like the music.

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The Really Bad Teacher (Mr. Giraldi's Example)

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The Really Bad Teacher (Mr. Giraldi's Example)

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Story Starters:
- An angry gym teacher
- Wants to build a catapult (to launch slow-moving students)
- But his principal won't let him

Once upon a time in a land far, far away, there was a beautiful little elementary school called Ashmere Cavenue. It was a school filled with happiness and learning, and the students and teachers got along really well with each other. Well, almost all the students and teachers. There was one teacher who just didn't seem to get along with the students and other staff members. He was a very grumpy, very angry, and very smelly teacher. His name was Mr. Heraldo, and he taught gym to Grade 4 and 5 students.  No one knew why he was always so angry; was it because he'd been hit in the head too many times in dodgeball? Was it because he was losing all his hair on top of his head already (and was beginning to look like a big, human pear)? Was it because of all the good treats had already been eaten from the staff room by the time he finally made it over there for lunch? No one knew. However, one split 4/5 class did know that he was up to something positively nefarious. One day (when trying to avoid his bad breath by staying as far away as possible from him) they saw some plans left on a chair. They were plans for a catapult, and even worse, they were labeled as 'PLANS FOR STUDENT CATAPULT - SPEEDING UP WASHROOM TRIPS WITH STUDENT-HATING STYLE'.

Oh no! What to do? The kids were very worried. They immediately told their amazing principal Ms. Hoble. Ms. Hoble was loved by all the students, and was known to be very kind and fair. She immediately walked into Mr. Heraldo's gym, and told him that launching students through any method ranging from good old-fashioned throwing to a massive catapult was not allowed. Mr. Heraldo muttered under his breath some, but tried to knock over the chair with his dastardly student-launching catapult plans on them. He was trying to hide the evidence! This grade 4/5 class was very perceptive though, and immediately caught on to what he was trying to do. They pointed it out to Ms. Hoble, and she grabbed the plans! Now Mr. Heraldo had to apologize and promise to never, ever build a student-launching catapult.

He did, but just in case, Ms. Hoble had all building materials kept far from his gym from that day forward.

(395 words! All done!)

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Once upon a time there was a huge town called mimic.It had skyscrapers,tall buildings and huge houses.In that town there was an election going on for the new mayor of the town.There were 3 people contesting to be the mayor. One of them is Peblo. Peblo is a very short and old man with a big belly.He also has grey hair.He also loves burgers,tacos.burritos,milk shakes and ice cream.That’s probably why his belly is so big. The other two people that are against Peblo are names are Mrs.Brown and the other one is Mr.White.One afternoon Peblo went to get some triple-decker burgers,some burritos and some ice cream.But in the middle of that four people come up to him and say rude things and comments to Peblo.Such as your belly is so big and you eat so much,and you have grey hair.That night Peblo realized that Mrs.Brown and Mr.White were telling everybody that Peblo had a big belly and grey hair.So Peblo told the big boss called the prime minister that Mrs.Brown and Mr.White were telling everybody that Peblo had a big belly and grey hair. Peblo told him like this “Mrs.Brown and Mr.White are telling mean things and comments to me and I don’t like it.So the prime minister gave Mrs.Brown and Mr.White warning.But they did not listen and kept on saying it over and over again soon Peblo told the Prime minister again and he did not warn Mrs.Brown and Mr.White this time and he sent them to jail. Then Peblo won the election and became mayor.

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Once our stories are finished we will begin the 'self editing' process; using the graphic organizer we received in class, read over your work! You can use Speechnotes to read your story aloud too. Make sure to read it over and over, checking for each possible mistake on the organizer.

Speechnotes - https://speechnotes.co/

Grammarly Spelling Editor - https://www.grammarly.com/

Word Counter -
https://wordcounter.net/

JSpell https://www.jspell.com/public-spell-checker.html

Reverso http://www.reverso.net/spell-checker/english-spelling-grammar/

Visuwords https://visuwords.com/fullscreen/

Dictionary https://www.yourdictionary.com/word

Editing List - http://planningwithkids.com/wp-content/2012/06/PWK-Editing-and-Proof-Reading.pdf