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In the break of dawn
I see squishy sponges casting over the deep blue sea. Getting ready to trickle down on the over populated city.
It flouts above the sleeping people flowing by the current.

Another day is dawning.
by Reece.
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Snow covers my mum's car in the winter like a blanket keeping me warm at night.
It's as crunchy as the crust of my delicious pie on my clean white plate.
The snow is as frosty as a tasty ice-pop straight from the freezer in my hand.

By Mika

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lighting blazes like  a flash of beams in
the dark and gloomy
night while the lighting is striking
dark clouds crying down.

by iziah

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In the break of dawn
I see squishy sponges casting over the deep blue sea. Getting ready to trickle down on the over populated city.
It flouts above the sleeping people flowing by the current.

Another day is dawning.
by Reece.
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Angrily, the city shook like a giants empty stomach growling for food.

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Snow covers my mum's car in the winter like a blanket keeping me warm at night.
It's as crunchy as the crust of my delicious pie on my clean white plate.
The snow is as frosty as a tasty ice-pop straight from the freezer in my hand.

By Mika

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the old ladys huddled round the table like chicks gatherd with their mother for warmth on a cold winters day.
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In the dusky morning
I see an eagle soaring
with its head in the clouds
It soars and swoops
and makes a racket
Breaking silence.

By Holly

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In the sunny afternoon
I hear the soft sighs of a hibernating giant
still waiting until it was time to wake up.
Her deep craters dances as she feels the gentle feet of humans walk over her.
I can hear her gentle giggles.
By Phebe

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In the grey morning
a tired dragon awakens over the mountain peaks.
His breath creeps along enveloping tall green and brown monsters.
He yawns

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In the foggy morning.                 I see a pot of spewing lava       with its bubbles popping out of the bowl.                                  It sits stiffly in my breakfast bowl and fire balls shooting into my mouth.  i hear it bubble

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in the misty morning a dragon soars through the midnight sky.
the fog is a ravenous dragons smelly breath.
the fog is smoke  floating in the air  from the furious fire breathing dragon
Neel
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In the crystallized, shimmering sunset evening I see a majestic, proud hawk With it's seeking missiles scanning for enemies it zips from side to side and slices through the magical evening I can hear it rumble

By Bryun

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In the  deep dark sea I see a massive fighting bullet with its smoke making a trail underwater.It cuts through the glistening reservior and travels cautiously in the ocean I can hear it rumble.
By Robert
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In the jet black sky
I see glowing crystals
With their pointy wings out.
Flying in thousands of batches they make the sky bright again.
I can hear them jingle.
By Preeta

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In the misty morning
I see shivering mist
with it's foggy breath spreading across Auckland City
It lies among earth's face slowly rising to heaven's gates.
I see it float.
By Paluki

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In the dusky morning
I see an eagle soaring
With it's head in the clouds
It soars and swoops
and makes a racket
Breaking silence
By Holly

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In the crimson dusk
I see a picturesque ribbon
With it's end in the Adriatic Sea
It sleeps in squiggles in rhe wonderful brick city
It feeds the hungry gondolas
I can hear the water crashing against the wooden crescent
By Luke

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In the baby blue sky
I see a magical cloud
Slowly it flies across the sky
it lies in the air
and it looks like santa's beard
I see it gallop away
By Daisy

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In the dark of night
I see a sleek bullet
soaring through thin air
It hides through dark tunnels
And makes wind gush into people's faces
I hear it brake.
By Nivea

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In the fiery dusk
I spot a mechanical monster
Cutting through the silent night
Its eyes glow in the dark
And waits impatiently for prey
I can hear it speeding along
By Mark D

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In the morning sunrise
I hear the rumbling of an earthquake
With freezing foaming water smashing against the rocks.
It fizzes out into a shimmering calm silence and the next rumble comes again from above
I can see the water plummet.
By Calum

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In the crystalline jet black sky
I see a big black eagle
With its vast steel wings stretching across the night sky
It soars in flight above he shimmering Pacific Ocean
And it rumbles softly in the cool fresh air
I ca hear it whizz over my head.
By Hamish

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In the fluffy white clouds,
I see a shadowy horse figure
With its wings flapping rhthmically
It lies down peacefully and drinks quietly.
I hear it slurp.
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In the early morning. I hear a monster roaring.
its four rounded feet slowly  start to turn.

it crawls down my drive.
I hear it groan and take off into the distance.

I see its breath...

BY FELIX

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In a foggy morning.
I see a pot of molten metal bubbling.
Trying trying trying to spew out of its cage.
Its lies bubbling, steaming, spluttering. It waits, waiting, waiting, waiting for someone to let it out of its jail cell.
waiting... waiting... waiting...
C.H

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crackilng in the flames an eruption from the core.
it's oozing lava explodes
from the burnt crust
warm and toasted I
gobble it up
a delicious treat
Thomas.H
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In the early morning, I see a grey dragon. It breathes over the leaves, discarding them like bits of rubbish. After it's job is done, it slinks back to the garage.
I can hear it yawning
By Eli
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The Garden Hose
In the grey evening
I see a green serpent
With its tail in the dahlia

It lies in loops across the grass
And drinks softly at the faucet

I can hear it swallow.

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The Lawnmower

In the dusky morning
I see a resting horse over by the shed
Then all of a sudden, it roars into life
Eating everything in its path
It gives a contented snort
As it chooses its way along the ground.
By Adam
Medal: you have used two comparative nouns that both do the same verbs
Medal: you have included personification
Mission: you could change chooses to chews and provide a juicy adjective for the shed.
Peer - Mrs Withy

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I gaze at an elegant dancer.
With her body amongst the chestnut trees
she turns her head and spots me
Before leaping away gracefully.
I can hear her run.

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A Jet Plane

 

In the misty
morning

I see a
fierce flying bullet

Cutting through
the sky

It zips and
zooms back and forth

Whipping up
all the air

I can hear it grumble.

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A Jet Plane

 

In the misty
morning

I see a
fierce flying bullet

Cutting through
the sky

It zips and
zooms back and forth

Whipping up
all the air

I can hear it grumble.

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By Charlotte
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